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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 45

:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved Billy!!!  Good try Esme!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 45

Not at all pissed at Bella. Esme deserved all B said and more. Unfortunately Esme showing up there is going to ruin her anomimity I fear. Love Billy

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 45

I'm happy that Mason is staying with Charlie.  He needs some support.

Esme is probably not handling everyone being mad at her very well.   But I hope she was sincere to Bella.   Although it's gonna take a lot more than a few words for Bella to believe anything Esme says now.   If Esme was that horrible to Bella then she might be horrible to Rose as well, if she ever gets a chance to meet her.

I like Billy and Rachael.   Their characters are friendly and loyal.   Jake is very similar.

Hopefully Bella will think about everything and at least call Mason.   

Great tear jerker of a chapter.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 45

Esme showing up was a bit ballsy, but I'm not sure it's going to help. I'm wondering is Esme will end up calling Edward and telling him where Bella is.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2019 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 44

Poor Edward and Bella.  The Queen has definitely acted like a bitch. I agree with Edward.  She did more damage than the reporters did to Bella. 

Reviewer: Emsmom98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2019 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 44

Now what am I going to read while I’m “patiently waiting “ for an update ? Lol. I’ve really enjoyed this story! I’ve laughed, cried, run the gamete of emotions !
I’ll be waiting! Hope to see you soon!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2019 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 44

What a shitstorm.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2019 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 44

Poor Edward and Bella.  The Queen has definitely acted like a bitch. I agree with Edward.  She did more damage than the reporters did to Bella. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2019 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

Oh my goodness my heart broke for both of them I cried 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2019 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 44

oh my poor Bella.... of course she heard everything.  Esme is def a cold duty bound "royal".  Won't call her a mother at this point.  Hope E can find her.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 44

saw that coming. Royalty.. ugh that time has passed.  Now I think it is utter BS for them to demand heritage and levels.  As long as you and the person you marry can commit to this marriage for life then leave them alone with the BS

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 44

Esme is a royal bitch OMG how could she.  Edward has a double broken heart so sad.  Bella is in such pain

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 44

Bella may be upset, but she shouldn't be with Edward. She is letting his mother win. All she is doing is hurting the man she loves. She wants to be seen as strong, she needs to act like it. Being upset is fine, but she should be mad at the queen.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 44

OMG!! *wipes tears* I am so heart broken for them. :(

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 44

Wow Esme is a real Bitch huh?

At this point I know you are going to fix our couple . I dont like it. But I trust you.

What I seem to be focused on is what kind of hell 

your going to make Esme go through to win back her son's respect. 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 44

good

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 44

My heart is breaking for both of them!  I’m proud of Edward for standing up to his mother.  She needs a serious swift kick in her royal ass!!  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

Keep on writing

Reviewer: Marts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2019 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 44

What?!! Great chapter even if it isn't want I wanted. It will be good.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2019 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 44

You made me ugly cry.   That was traumatic.   Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2019 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 44

Poor Bella.  I hope Edward can find her 

Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2019 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 44

Oh no! Hurry back with my HEA, please.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2019 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank you for the update..Well done..I hope Bella talks to Edward..They need to catch who is behind this..until you post again 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2019 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 43

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2019 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 43

OMG What was Esme thinking how could she. Edward will not let Bella go. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2019 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 42

Glad they are OK but they both will have a long recovery. Leah is a rock that Jake needs.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 43

OMG!!! That poor sweet girl!! Such an upsetting thing to hear while waking up from anesthesia. I hope she doesn't make a rash decisions right away! o.o

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 43

Bella better stop being stupid and fight for Edward. He is fighting for her. She can't let the enemies win. She would crush Edward and I thought she loved him. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

great update

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 43

Don't let the queen win

Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 43

Noooooo! I have to wait? At least the updates on my birthday 🎂!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 43

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 43

I hate that Bella over heard that conversation.  She needs to show the Queen that she is strong enough for her son. She needs to get piss and stand up for her and Masen, not run from it. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 43

Oh wow. Bella can't catch a break.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 43

Omg she better not give up :(

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 43

Shit list indeed.  Can't blame B for being pissy to Dr g. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 43

Oh hells no queen you are in trouble

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 43

After the hell Bella and Edward have been through, Esme is being a bitch.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 42

I’m so glad they’re going to be ok.  I’m very much looking forward to the next chapter.  he paparazzi don’t stand a chance once Esme, Carlisle, and the Calvary arrive. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2019 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 42

Longer chapters please, keep on writing

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2019 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 42

I am so excited for the Calvary to come.  I love it when power and prestige are used for good and the bad go down!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2019 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 42

With injuries as they have, they will have a long recovery ahead of them both.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2019 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 42

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2019 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 42

Yea papparazi in this country are dangerous and disgusting. Poor Jake

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2019 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 41

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2019 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 42

I can't wait to read about the correct asses being kicked.   LOL    Great chapter and thanks for writing.  :)

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2019 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 42

Fabulous chapter. Worth the wait but I could have read more. Keep it up

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 42

I hate what the "reporters "  think they have a right to do. It's just wrong. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2019 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 42

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2019 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 42

OH MY!!! I am so happy that other than injuries they are both still alive!!! I can't wait to read more!! ;)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2019 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 42

Can't wait to see what king and queen have to say!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 40

good

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh evil cliffe

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2019 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 41

You rock.  Bella has to be scared to death OMG

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2019 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 41

What a scary situation.

Sherry

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2019 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 41

nice update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2019 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 41

Holy snap wow how bad was it and how hurt are they

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 41

I hope they are both alright .  Some reporters are just vultures 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 41

Papparazi should be illegal.  Ack for accident

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 41

HOLYSH*T! O.O

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Reviewer: Mart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 41

Lordy, please post soon, like now

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 41

holy shite :O :O :O :O 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my gosh!!!! I can't believe the press but they are truly like that. Great job with this chapter. I'm glad that you said that Bella and Jake would not die. That makes me feel better. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 41

That was so intense, but so very sad.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 40

Oh no

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2019 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 40

OMG OMG OMFG .  Bella and Jake have to be OK.  When they find out what them bitches have to do with this they will pay.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2019 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 40

nice update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2019 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

Hate the free reign paparazzi get in this country.  Ugh. Aww for cute proposal. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2019 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 40

A lot of information to process.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2019 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 40

Omgosh!!!!!!! I hope both Jake and Bella are ok. I hate that Rose had such a hard time. I hope she gets the help that she needs. 

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2019 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 40

Omg!!! Hurry and update please!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2019 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 40

How awful for everyone.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2019 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 40

OMFNG!! WHAT!?! OMG!! I can't! I just can't wait!! I need to know!! NOW! :(

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2019 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 40

Awesome chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2019 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 40

I hope they are both alright 

Reviewer: BellaBlues1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2019 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 40

omg you're killing me here. please update, and please please give emmett and rosalie a happy ending!!! ahhhhh this will drive me insane for a while..lolol

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2019 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 39

nice update

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 39

thank you for the update...is there a possibility the baby could be Emmett's?..I hope Bella gets there in time and they can preform the test or the baby comes out looking like Emmett...until you post again

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thank God they can helecopter to where Rosalie is located.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 39

I think the baby is Emmetts but I agree it is up to Rose but if it is Emmetts she will feel different about it. Bella is on her way to help Rose

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2019 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oh my. Rose is on labor!!!!!! Could the baby be Emmett's????? Will Bella get to Rose in time? Will she mention to Rose that the baby might could be Emmett's?  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 39

I'm worried about who (Kate?) might be tabloid stalking Bella and poor Rose.   Esme is being a bit of a douche canoe.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 39

good

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 39

good chapter.. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 39

Was wondering if someone would ask for adna test.  I thought it could be Em's too. 

Yea American press gets way to many liberties. 

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 39

Aww, poor Rosalie. I seriously hope she gets better soon. Emmett will be so much happier with her in his life

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 39

OMG!!! O.O

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 39

I loved it but oh my will Bella make to Rose

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 39

I can't say I blame Emmett's mother for wanting to make sure the baby isn't Emmett's. If I were in her shoes I'd want a DNA test too. Yikes. At least Rosalie is reaching out to Bella. Let's hope she is able to get to Rose in time. 

Sherry

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

Yeah for Rosalie reaching out!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 38

It's great but the press needs a rude awakening if you know what I mean.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2019 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 38

I hate the media in general. They are the dregs of society.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2019 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 38

My heart breaks for Bella and Charlie.  I can’t imagine how difficult it is to live with such a debilitating disease or to watch someone you love living with it.  I wonder who spread those terrible lies about Bella.  Sounds like crap that Lady Kathryn and Irina would say.  I love this story and am looking forward to more.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thank you for the update..I think they need to catch a break..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 38

Poor Bella is going through so much with her dad and then to have ass wholes saying shit like that how rude.  So glad Edward is there for her.  Edward is not happy with his mom.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 38

Yes the "Press" have way too much leniency in the US.  disgusting POSs.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 38

OMG!! I love this story!! I am sad that Charlie is having such trouble and I am so very unhappy that something like that was published about Bella. :(

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