Date: 08 Jul 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update..well done...I hope Alice doesn't get her hands on the black credit card...Masen would have her arrested...Jake would glady handle her...Charlie would disown her...The Bakery sounds like it's going to be really nice..Date night can't wait to see where Masen takes her..until you post again
Date: 06 Jul 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
That's horrible that the bank loan officer was so awful and full of glee about the Swan's losing the bakery and then disappointed? when it was paid off???? What kind of banker are they?
I think their first date should allow for a lot of talking and intimacy.
I can't wait until Alice gets hers. She is such a twat waffle.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I want lemons!! 16 chapters and not a serious juicy one as of yet. I would love to read one soon please! Great story so far! I don't know why, but I keep picturing Harry and Meghan as I continue reading lol! Great chapter. Happy they made up!
Date: 29 Jun 2018 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
I don't trust Alice either. She can't be shamed. She might even end up hurting Charlie. I wouldn't put it past her/
I'm happy that Bella is going to move in with Edward. I hope his mother etc.. doesn't act like a douche to Bella. Her self confidence is already almost non-existant.
Date: 10 Jun 2018 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
I’m not normally one for leaving reviews but, I really enjoy this and your other publications. I always look forward to seeing the notification that you’ve updated... it’s definitely a highlight of my day. You’ve a real talent and thank you for sharing it with us. Cheers!
Date: 08 Jun 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I say turn on the oven and push Alice in. Evil Bitch! I bet she becomes all apologetic and lovie dovie when she finds out Masen is a prince. She’ll probably think that if Bella marries a prince, then it will be easy living for her. Cow! Thanks for the update, Maria