Loved it! Would be great if there was an epilogue or something. Great job!
Great story with an interesting plot... But the ending seems a little bit "in a hurry". We want more !!!
aww for the at the end.
Thx for writing and sharing.
Did Bella not recognize Tanya? hmmm. interesting.
OMG you love the agnst. Thank goodness next chapter is waiting for me.
hmmm lemme guess....the slut is the sister of Skankya?
Wow you keep dropping all these leading hints....got me rethinking who dun it.
Glad P and J talked things out and that B stayed over with him.
LOL Us 'merican's don't say jumper......
Yea more and more I think Maria is involved.
hmm maybe Maria and Eddie working together....hmmm
hmm sounds like her "ex" is going to be behind it all. Poor kid dying.
ugh we get the walk of shame but not the good stuff. ack.. Cute pic tease though.
Glad the next chapter is already there for me to read. Otherwise would have been an evil tease. Yummy teasing so far though.
Wow her ex sounds like a real piece of work.
Go Kick Ass Bella. Sounds like Jasper is in for a little bit of hurtin'
Interesing start. Like seeing a strong Bella right off the bat.
WOW!!!! Hella ending!!! It sounds as if things are going to work out and be okay!!! I'm glad they finally got to tell each other I love you!!! Awesome story!!!!
She's alive and I hope she's not to badly injured although she bad off as I write this note.
What a horror!!!!! I was in a gas explosion when I was fifteen and I've been terrified of fire ever since then!!!I hope she makes it!!!
Oh, My Lord what a nightmare!!!!! I hope Bella survives!!!! I'm nearly in tears.
Well, Bella certainly can't seem to catch a break, today!!! I don't know how she's functioning after the emotional blows she' received!!!!
So, whose been killed now????When Em's serious, it's never good!!!!
This chapter was a treat to read!!!! You've nailed Charlie!!!!
Things are beginning to shape up and while I knew Jasper and Peter had suffered great tragedy, I never thought it was going to be as bad as it is!!!!!
Plot thickens and I no more innocents are hurt or killed and it includes the firemen and cops!!!!!!!
WOW!!!! Hella morning!!!!I'm glad they made it out alive. I'm sad about the young boy!!!
It's not!!!!Fun chapter!!! Loved it!!!!
Oh, My, My, My what a rush and it's so very, hot!!!!!!!!Loved it!!!
Steaming doesn't even begin to cover it!!!! I'm so happy E. Cullen is a jerk in this story!!!
Hell of an introduction for Jasper!!!!I really enjoyed and can't wait to see what happens with Emmett!!!1
Awesome start to this story!!! It was frightening and scary with all the risks and injuries. You really made it come alive!!!!!
Awesome last chapter, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 14, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 13, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 12, I loved it
Awesome chapter 11, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 10, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 9, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 8, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 7, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 6, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 5, I loved it.
Great story, loved it!XoxoxoX Alia
Awesome chapter 4, I loved it.
Awesome chapter 3, I loved it. Question when you call them a candidate do you really mean cadet?
Awesome chapter 2, I loved it.
I don't know how you consider car wrecks with death, fluffy. LOL. But the story is great so far. I love their team work.
Awesome first chapter, I loved it.