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Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great story with an interesting plot... But the ending seems a little bit "in a hurry". We want more !!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

aww for the ily at the end.

 

Thx for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

Did Bella not recognize Tanya?  hmmm.  interesting.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

Barricade indeed........

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMG you love the agnst. Thank goodness next chapter is waiting for me.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

hmmm lemme guess....the slut is the sister of Skankya?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow you keep dropping all these leading hints....got me rethinking who dun it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

Glad P and J talked things out and that B stayed over with him.

 

LOL   Us 'merican's don't say jumper......

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yea more and more I think Maria is involved.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

hmm maybe Maria and Eddie working together....hmmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

hmm sounds like her "ex" is going to be behind it all.  Poor kid dying.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

ugh we get the walk of shame but not the good stuff.  ack.. Cute pic tease though.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

Glad the next chapter is already there for me to read. Otherwise would have been an evil tease.   Yummy teasing so far though.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow her ex sounds like a real piece of work.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Go Kick Ass Bella.  Sounds like Jasper is in for a little bit of hurtin'

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesing start. Like seeing a strong Bella right off the bat.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

WOW!!!! Hella ending!!! It sounds as if things are going to work out and be okay!!! I'm glad they finally got to tell each other I love you!!! Awesome story!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

She's alive and I hope she's not to badly injured although she bad off as I write this note.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

What a horror!!!!! I was in a gas explosion when I was fifteen and I've been terrified of fire ever since then!!!

I hope she makes it!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh, My Lord what a nightmare!!!!! I hope Bella survives!!!! I'm nearly in tears.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

Well, Bella certainly can't seem to catch a break, today!!! I don't know how she's functioning after the emotional blows she' received!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

So, whose been killed now????

When Em's serious, it's never good!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 9

This chapter was a treat to read!!!! You've nailed Charlie!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

Things are beginning to shape up and while I knew Jasper and Peter had suffered great tragedy, I never thought it was going to be as bad as it is!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Plot thickens and I no more innocents are hurt or killed and it includes the firemen and cops!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

WOW!!!! Hella morning!!!!

I'm glad they made it out alive. I'm sad about the young boy!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

It's not!!!!

Fun chapter!!! Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh, My, My, My what a rush and it's so very, hot!!!!!!!!

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

Steaming doesn't even begin to cover it!!!!

I'm so happy E. Cullen is a jerk in this story!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2018 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hell of an introduction for Jasper!!!!

I really enjoyed and can't wait to see what happens with Emmett!!!1

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2018 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start to this story!!! It was frightening and scary with all the risks and injuries. You really made it come alive!!!!!

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome last chapter, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awesome chapter 14, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awesome chapter 13, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awesome chapter 12, I loved it

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter 11, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter 10, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awesome chapter 9, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter 8, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter 7, I loved it.

DabD

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter 6, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter 5, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great story, loved it!

XoxoxoX
Alia

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome chapter 4, I loved it.

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome chapter 3, I loved it. Question when you call them a candidate do you really mean cadet?

Dani

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome chapter 2, I loved it.

Dabi

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know how you consider car wrecks with death, fluffy.  LOL.   But the story is great so far.  I love their team work.

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome first chapter, I loved it.

Dani

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