Good start can't wait to read more thank you for taking the time to write this story.
J'aime ! :)
Tanya is a bitch and Edward was so blind Bella needed for him to hear that. I think Tanya tells Edward she is pregers by him to get him back.
No i dont like it at all.... I LOVE IT !!!!!
Amazing...juicy read ahead...ill gladly beta for you...
oh those sneaky " shots " always cause some kind of trouble! (he he he) update ASAP!
READ YOU SOON : )
Well I hope for speed here
I know!!!! no presure but seiously I for one can't wait for the next update.
So..... that's all it took I'm hooked and ready for more. I'm hoping there won't be much drawn out angst but as of now Ilook forward to reading.
READ YOU SOON
build all you like i love the details x
great opening chapter, looking forward to seeing this unfold
Hope Bella makes him work to redeem himself cause right now he’s coming across as the usual dirt bag after reading the first 2 chapters. thanks for the update.
This sounds like one i have to start reading after a few dozen chapters, since i hate letitng T/E in my brain like EVER!!!
Tanya is a bitch ! cant wait for more
So far so good!
Awesome...i can beta it
I'm glad your "Plain Jane" has some fire!!!! I say good for her!!!Happy Writing!!!!
Well can’t wait any teaser yet or should we star the begin
Love her snarky 1st pov
Sounds great cant wait for more
It sounds delectable with lots of angst!!!! As ever, Edward's an idiot!!!!!
Sounds like I'mgoing to be hating Edward a lot in this story
Can't wait for more...
So far so good , I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Great first chapter. He sounds like a real peach.