Date: 02 May 2023 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Terrific chapter
Date: 31 Jul 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Please finish this. I like the story.
Date: 13 Jul 2021 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Hope you start on it soon
Date: 01 Jan 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Please update this story soon it is so good .
Date: 26 Feb 2019 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love love this story. I really hope you finish it!!
Date: 30 Jan 2019 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story!! I can’t wait for another update!
Date: 29 Jan 2019 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
I really hope you finish this!
Date: 24 Jul 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Please update soon - I really like how you are writing this story
Date: 21 Jun 2018 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love the update
Date: 02 Jun 2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
really like your story and can't wait to see what happens
Date: 31 May 2018 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Keep writing I want the HEA
Date: 09 Apr 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
Can't wait to see the wedding...
Date: 13 Mar 2018 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh I’m so glad I found this story! It is really well written and very good!
Date: 22 Feb 2018 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
For being the heir of a major mafia organization, edward does not have much security. Ex. When he and Bella went shopping, they had no one protecting them, edward's house has no security no guards on the ground, how did Alice get in his house, anywhere they went, they had no bodyguards...this is unheard of. Only when something happens to someone do they have just one guard with them...these guys usually have many guards following them plus guards on the ground of their homes. Their security is really lacking.
Date: 19 Feb 2018 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loving the story. It really is flowing and boy oh boy the shit you have going on!! I wonder how Charlie and Edward will get a long now. I wonder how the wedding will go. You know in most stories I really like Alice but this one, I was totally fine that she wasn't a favourite of the girls and when she died, hardly a blip on my radar. You did that really well. Can't wait to read more when you're up to it.
Date: 16 Feb 2018 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yep it all sounds good until Charlie decides Edward is not who he wants for Bella
Date: 14 Feb 2018 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 13 Feb 2018 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bless you woman for the amazing update.
I am so glad your over here supporting STARS. FFnet has some bitch trolls its sad truly because are we not all here for the HEA?
I loved the tension between Edward and Charlie how embarrassing to get cockblocked by your dad. Your writing is good my lady and I see you on FB I'll put in a request for your group.
Peace-Ajfflady
Date: 13 Feb 2018 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
Aww poor Alice (not really) so happy for Edward and Bella sorry Edward Bella is right Charlie is her dad
Date: 12 Feb 2018 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love you stories, I'm excited you posted them here. This is my favorite!!! can't wait for an update!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2018 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
O come on your killing me smalls. Great update.
Author's Response:
Bwahaha yes!! I swear that and the line from tombstone. That line may or may not be in the next chapter
You seriously just made me crack up!
But it will be worth the wait!!
~Sin
Date: 20 Jan 2018 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story please keep on writing it
Date: 17 Jan 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
I just discovered this story and let me tell you, I love it!I l like the twist it takes and how strong Bella is. I might have to stomp on your toe for the cliff hanger but as long as you promise to update, I won't. I know you said you always write happily ever afters, but I hope that doesn't mean just Bella and Edward. I really like this Rosalie and Emmett so I will be very sad if the HEA doesn't include them. Update soon o.k?!
Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
I swear Emmett is a huge part to the end of the story. I can't say how without totally giving it away but let's just say of anyone in the crew besides Edward and Bella Emmett and Rose are the only other couple guaranteed a happy ending!! So fear not you will not be dissapointedr
~Sin
Date: 17 Jan 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
I just discovered this story and let me tell you, I love it!I l like the twist it takes and how strong Bella is. I might have to stomp on your toe for the cliff hanger but as long as you promise to update, I won't. I know you said you always write happily ever afters, but I hope that doesn't mean just Bella and Edward. I really like this Rosalie and Emmett so I will be very sad if the HEA doesn't include them. Update soon o.k?!
Thanks, Maria
Date: 12 Jan 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
A bomb? This is getting so good. I think the target is definitely the Cullen's but who's behind it I'm not sure. Edward and Bella in the car was hot. You made drug use part of the story and I believe that would be a true part of their lifestyle. Thank you for writing your story I'm waiting patiently for next chapter.- Ajfflady
Date: 09 Jan 2018 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thoroughly enjoyed all your stories. Would not attempt to tell you what to write. If I had your talent, I would write myself. I don't, so I read all you wonderful people who write for us to enjoy. Please keep writing and I will keep reading. Am lousy at reviewing. Again, thank you. Pamela Hanley pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
It wouldn't surprise me if it wasn't the Colletti's. I'm probably wrong but something tells me. I can't believe it's Emmett's and Rosalie's house!! Are they dead or alive? Please don't make us wait too long you talented girl.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hmmm...if I could put my 2 cents in, I think I'd like to hear more of Edward with his brothers. It would be interesting hearing what trouble they are actually getting into. Now that Carlisle and Charlie are an active part of the story the more violent and bloody the better. That's just what I would like. Keep writing, I am absolutely loving this. Can't wait to see what happens to Alice. HeeHeeHee snivelling little drama queen bitch.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
OMG...
I came across this story and I couldn't put it down (well of course wehn I was sleeping or going to work!!) =) but I LOVE it - don't make us wait to long!!
Date: 08 Jan 2018 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am TOTALLY loving this story. I can't stop reading it. Honestly it is becoming one of my favourite mafia stories. You have everything in it. The importance of "the family" and the family, the respect clause like in this chapter, the strength of your characters - everything. I love how you wrote about Rosalie's character and her softness towards Bella but also being the first one who tells Bella what is what and the problems they share. And Alice? I am so freaking out about how Alice is with the family, what a unique way and certainly not her normal "Barbie Bella makeovers". Excellent writing. I had to literally stop myself from reading so I could write this review. Keep it up. You seem to know the Mafia pretty good.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
The plot sure does thicken. Now Charlie gets a part in this story and he's a rival of the Cullen's, oh my.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
His show of dominance here was a little confusing. I hope they can get back on track.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Charlotte the harlot it is fitting. Bella's backbone is growing . Poor Edward will he ever wake up?
Date: 08 Jan 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Your Bella sure has grown a pair! Feisty I like it. Great chapter.-Ajfflady
Date: 08 Jan 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Amazing action at the end. This is a nice change to most Mobward stories where he is almost always indestructible. More realistic of his lifestyle.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella's getting a taste of the life now. Hope they will be safe from all the threats.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter Bella standing up to Tanya was great. She's becoming a member of the family for sure.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Things are moving along their relationship is developing nicely. I cannot wait for Edward to show her off, lots of " Tanya's " to deal with I'm sure glad Bella's got a backbone.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Let Mobward arise! Nice little set up I like that the press was involved also. And Edward ILY'd her this was a fun chapter all around. I can imagine Bens apartment being one of the high rise condos along Tempe town lake too. Great work.-Ajfflady
Date: 07 Jan 2018 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
So much happening now. Edwards revenge should be memorable.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
The Cullen men are charmers and seem so devoted. I'm liking Liam too, Esmes assistant seems like a force to be reckoned with. Phils days are numbered I'm sure. -Ajfflady
Date: 07 Jan 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
The plot twist with the judge was surprising. Their meeting was very sweet a little like a Outlander reunion. Edward seems very romantic with her. Great work on this chapter.-Ajfflady
Date: 07 Jan 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
The meet up already...YES! The songs are very sweet. You made Esme a mama bear which Bella desperately needed. I cant wait for next chapter.-Ajfflady
Date: 07 Jan 2018 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
I was a bit confused at the different states where they are located. Living in Arizona myself I'm loving Bella's a Sun Devil. Esme and Rose didn't waste anytime and Bella is already under the "family" protection...nice.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love EPOV its the best. He has had an exciting life but is looking for something more? I liked the way you made a connection between them and it seems Edward could be what Bella needs. I cant wait to see how Edward turns out or gets out for that matter.- Ajfflady
Date: 07 Jan 2018 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story. It is a great start. are you a new author? If your working with the Sarcastic Bimbo you are in very good company. Thank you very much for sharing your work.-Afflady
Date: 06 Jan 2018 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow - hope Em & Rose made it out ok
Date: 05 Jan 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sorry, I understand why he did that, I really do, but I just lost some respect for Edward (and Bella )
Date: 05 Jan 2018 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Omg it took me 3 days to finish this 22 chapters I love Edwards and Bella’s relationship plz plz don’t let emmet and Rosalie be harmed plz
Date: 04 Jan 2018 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love th story. Very much would like to know what happens next
Date: 04 Jan 2018 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 03 Jan 2018 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is such a cool story. I hope Alice was inside and not emmett and roaslie. Glad Charlie is not a jerk! Thanks for writing, cannot wait to read more.
Date: 03 Jan 2018 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
Excellent story. :)
Date: 03 Jan 2018 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad that these are on here. I like this site better then FFnet. Cannot wait to see what is to come.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I feel safer here! I will be working on updates over the
Weekend. Thank you for sticking with me!
~Sin