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Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 6:04 AM Title: Perfectly Reckless and Totally Defenseless

Marvelous story and just as it should be!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.  I appreciate you and your support of my writing.

 

-Lilly

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2017 1:48 PM Title: Perfectly Reckless and Totally Defenseless

Very nice didn't know the song but it fits fine,

one of my fav pairings of course xx

Alexis



Author's Response:

Alexis, thank you.  I used to listen to Halestorm often and that song, in particular, was always telling me I should turn it into a story.  Jasper and Bella are one of my favorite pairings too and in the Twilight only fandom (as in not a crossover) Jasper and Bella are my absolute favorite pairing.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.  I appreciate it and you.

 

-Lilly

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 9:38 AM Title: Perfectly Reckless and Totally Defenseless

Very good one shot. I like the way you skipped over the inessential parts of the story, like the car ride. I'd love to read more.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  I'm working on keeping my writing tight and leaving out the extraneous scenes.  I used to have a problem with just including every scene that came to me even if it wasn't needed to further the story, so it pleases me that I succeeded on that front.  I've had a few requests to further this story, so I'm considering the possibility, but I have a slew of other WIP right now, so unless a plot bunny comes hopping into my life it'll be a while before I get around to seeing if I can come up with a sequel worth telling.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.  I appreciate you and your support.

 

-Lilly

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