Date: 19 Apr 2018 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Such a long road back from all she had to endure.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Badass Bella saves the day, part of the day anyway. And here comes a very angry Calvary with Edward in the lead!!! Yay! I’ll be anxiously waiting for next Thursday! Loved it!
Date: 13 Apr 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
She certainly has balls!
Date: 13 Apr 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Come on Edward kill them all
Date: 13 Apr 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
WoHoo! Here comes Edward.... Short chapter, but better than nothing. Great story.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a good story with a lot of suspense, but I wish the chapters were longer! When u wait like a week or more and u get such a short chapter, it's quite frustrating and sometimes bothersome deciding whether or not to keep up and continue reading.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 13 Apr 2018 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
YOU ENJOY LEAVING US WITH OUR MOUTH WIDE OPEN...DON'T YOU? ( YOU MEANIE ) SO ARO TURNED HER INTO GI JANE HUH??? IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR A QUICK UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!
READ YOU SOON
Date: 12 Apr 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can't get enough of this story. Love it!
Date: 12 Apr 2018 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder why Aaron hasn’t used Bella and Carlisle as leverage or blackmail against Edward. What is his game? I really hope Caius helps and it isn’t a trap.
I started the story over and re-read it just so I could read it straight through to today’s new chapter. I love it!!
Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
She's going to rescue herself!
Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hate the humiliation torture, but I couldn't have kept reading if you had written a rape. Thank goodness.
Date: 12 Apr 2018 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Very very good. I really hope they get revenge
Date: 12 Apr 2018 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love Loved it can't wait to read more
Date: 06 Apr 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
It sounds like the only reason Bella and Carlisle got caught was because Carlisle was a dumb ass and couldn't shoot anybody. hmp....
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Date: 05 Apr 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Caius is lucky to still be breathing.
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Yes he is, Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Apr 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Going to be difficult to trust Caius. I've got a bad feeling about him. Thanks for the update. Love this story!
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Date: 05 Apr 2018 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can’t wait for more
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Date: 05 Apr 2018 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great update,but could you give us the next update say.......later today?
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Thursday my darling. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Apr 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can he trust a snake?
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Who knows. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 31 Mar 2018 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
A hi from Brazil.
Turning to say I'm loving your fanfic. Congratulations. Kisses
Date: 30 Mar 2018 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is a really good story. I love the pace, of the progression. Please keep writing.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
They came looking for trouble and I think they found it.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 29 Mar 2018 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is right. If the Cullens got to kill Alice, then Bella should get to kill Carlisle. I think, hopefully, they are about to bond while doing some ass kicking.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Omg you left me with a cliffhanger
I love it please don’t ever stop writing
Date: 29 Mar 2018 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I think Alice got off too easy. Just my opinion. Thank you, Love this story.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very good, can’t wait for the next update
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Date: 25 Mar 2018 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can’t wait for more
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Date: 23 Mar 2018 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Getting good
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Date: 23 Mar 2018 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hehe, I had a feeling that Alice was the rat!! Will she be killed or will they disown her and in essence Jasper?? Hhmnn, can't wait to find out!!
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Date: 23 Mar 2018 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow what is up with Alice??? Is she betraying the family and in turn trying to get Bella killed?? Can't wait to see where this story leads!! Keep up the good writing!!
Date: 23 Mar 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bummer, I thought Alice was a cold bitch. Thanks for the update:)
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Date: 23 Mar 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! I was suspicious of Alice after the shopping too.. She was acting weird. I really look forward to each chapter. Thank you!
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Date: 22 Mar 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sorry but no sympathy for the rat. She should have talked to jasper. The
cullens could have done something to help her and her brother. I have always
been bothered by Alice's spoiled and childish attitude. But I'm sure jasper
will forgive her.
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Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapters.
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Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
I FELT LIKE THIS WASN'T OUR LOVING BADASS BELLA WHO TAKES NO SHIT FROM ANYONE! A LITTLE DISAPPIONTED HERE BUT I'LL GET OVER IT JUST AS SOON AS YOU UPDATE.
READ YOU SOON : )
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Lol i know it seems unlike her but there is a reason for everything. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Damn that Alice. I think she's being played.
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Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Alice you stupid stupid girl! She is lucky Bella didn't end her right then.
Date: 22 Mar 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
I knew something was up with Alice. Istill think she is shady though. Dam her and Carlisle. They are some morons.
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Date: 22 Mar 2018 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great work
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Date: 22 Mar 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it
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Date: 17 Mar 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 17 Mar 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love it
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Date: 17 Mar 2018 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm loving this, and I hate that this last chapter to me feels like a cliffie *pouts*. I hope there is more soon. Thanks for the story :)
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Date: 15 Mar 2018 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love EPOV!
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Date: 15 Mar 2018 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
MORE PLEASE!
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Date: 15 Mar 2018 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
AWWWW!!! : ( IT WAS A SHORT BUT! .... INFORMATIVE CHAPTER. I WAS HOPING FOR A LITTLE MORE DETAILS ESPECIALLY ON ALICE BUT... I GUESS I HAVE TO BE PATIENT AND WAIT SOOOOO! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE!!! WITH A CHERRY ON TOP TRY TO UPDATE SOON....BUT SOONER WOULD BE BETTER. (he he he) : )
READ YOU SOON : )
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Date: 15 Mar 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well they pretty much knew at least 1 mole was in Carlisle's group. I still don't trust Alice.
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Date: 15 Mar 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it and can’t wait
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Date: 15 Mar 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
This chapter was really good! Great story. Thank you!
Date: 15 Mar 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it
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Date: 09 Mar 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
WAITING WON'T BE EASY. ALICE SEEMS TO HAVE ISSUES WITH BELLA AND I GET THE FEELING SHE'S THE LINK.
READ YOU SOON
Date: 09 Mar 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm suspicious of Alice now. hmmmm.......
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Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm just not trusting Alice right now.
Author's Response:
She isnt very trust worthy,
Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm going to need pictures of a dress with room for weapons.
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:) Maybe I have one for you to see ;p
Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can’t wait for more
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Thank you!
Date: 08 Mar 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Good chapter.
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Thank you!
Date: 08 Mar 2018 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
“I'm going to ignore you now before I have to decide between punching you or shooting you." Best line ever😂
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Thank you, I thought it fit Bella perfect. thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Mar 2018 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great as always
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Thank you!
Date: 04 Mar 2018 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope she gets to kill carlisle!
Date: 02 Mar 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm so happy that Bella is so quick thinking. I hope she doesn't let the women or Carlisle push her around or tell her what to do.
Date: 02 Mar 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter I am loving your development of Bella
Date: 02 Mar 2018 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 01 Mar 2018 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it!
XoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 01 Mar 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
That left a smile to last til next update.....but a lot to wonder about as well and as always wanting more.
READ YOU SOON ❤️
Date: 01 Mar 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love the story. Hard to read with the Da and Tul... Oh well nice change.
Date: 25 Feb 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
just finished reading all 13 chapters...great story...love the drama!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2018 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aro! Aro!! Aro!!! ... Alway's Aro he never learns (he he he) at least this time my tongue isn"t on the floor but my "EYES" are bulging out!!!!! Good Job.....
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 24 Feb 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was tough for bella!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 23 Feb 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah, I would want Aro dead, but I'm still pissed at nosy, dumb ass Carlisle too.
Author's Response:
Yeah Carlisle isnt the brightest sometimes.
Date: 22 Feb 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Cute
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Thank You!
Date: 22 Feb 2018 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Charlie makes me want to cry!
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
That's a fine howdie do!
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:)
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter.
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Thank you!
Date: 22 Feb 2018 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it
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Date: 20 Feb 2018 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
you do it to me everytime..... what you say......you left me with my tongue on the floor and now I have to drag it to bed wondering what the hell is in that safe. (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 18 Feb 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad to see carlisle was a little remorseful.
Date: 17 Feb 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 16 Feb 2018 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fantastic chapter
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Thank YoU!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
WOW, I just discovered this and read it straight through! Can I just say I’ve loved all the chapters instead of commenting on each one? 😍
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Awe Thank you!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait for more
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Date: 15 Feb 2018 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's good that Bella is facing her past memories of her dad and his belongings. I guess it's good that Carlisle faced the fact that he is an asshole douche. ugh..... I wonder who the leak is.
Author's Response:
He is a douche, and more clues to come :)
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it
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Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love it
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Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good chapter.
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Thank YoU!
Date: 10 Feb 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
So were carlisle and her dad friends?
Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 08 Feb 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
They're together!
Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
what is with Carlisle and his attitude????? he acts like he knows a thing or two about Bella and possibly her father as well..... hmmmm
READ YOU SOON : )