[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2018 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Alice might be the insude snitch
Date: 30 Jun 2018 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for posting it. The only thing I would change is the translations at the end of the chapter. They would be better in brackets in the body of the story, but that is just my opinion.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Amazing! So glad I read this gem.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Her dad definitely trained her well at covering her tracks.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
For some reason, I have a feeling her dad was murdered by Edward's dad, and that's why the Cullen name is familiar to her.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love a tough Bella.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
I couldn't be lucky enough to have a casual partner like him. Not necessarily in the Mafia, but sexy as hell.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Quite steamy! Some might say too fast, but I say Just Right!
Date: 03 Jun 2018 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
TwiFanfictionRecs led me here. I love any mafia story I can find. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
The prologue leads me to large amounts of curiosity; I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2018 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting story line
Date: 25 May 2018 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
Can't wait to be a judge for the next contest!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2018 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
So sad to see this one end!
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I know! It was a fun ride! Thank you for staying with me till the end and reveiwing!
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I know! It was a fun ride! Thank you for staying with me till the end and reveiwing!
Date: 23 May 2018 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
good
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Thank you!
Date: 23 May 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Really good
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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[Report This]Date: 23 May 2018 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
So Alice was a hoe bag to the end. hmmmm............
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lol Yes she was Thank you for sticking with the story and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
I WAS SO EXCITED AT THE BEGINNING BUT IT FIZZED TOWARD THE END. I FELT LIKE THERE WERE CHUNKS OF STORYLINE MISSING HERE AND THERE. I GUESS I WANTED MORE. OVER ALL I LIKE THE STORY I'M JUST A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED.... BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT NEW STORY.
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I am sorry it was a little disappointing! I am glad to hear that you at least enjoyed it over all. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 May 2018 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I ca me in on this story on chapter seven and I was only going to read up to seven and wait to read the rest as I catch up with my mail. Bella then it became chapter ten, fifteen and finally I stopped losing to myself and read the whole thing. I couldn't put it down. It was great.
Date: 15 May 2018 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
She is so strong and very strong.
Date: 15 May 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
OOh A!I've are you on the wrong side.
Date: 11 May 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love it I am that Edward and Bella reconnected
Date: 11 May 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Is it bad that I loved Bella's freak out and shooting of Alice? I guess I still haven't forgiven her phone using ass! LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
ONE MORE HUH? THERE WAS SO MUCH MORE THAT COULD HAVE BEEN COVERED BUT YOU DO THE MAGIC. : (
READ YOU SOON
Date: 10 May 2018 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
This chapter was really good. Sad that it's almost the end. She needed to get back to the bar to feel in control of her life again. It helps.
Thank you for posting today.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2018 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
AWWW!!! HER HEART IS FINALLY!!! WARMING UP FOR HIM.
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Date: 04 May 2018 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can’t wait for more
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[Report This]Date: 04 May 2018 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
READ YOU SOON
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[Report This]Date: 04 May 2018 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hopefully the little bit of talking that Bella did with Edward will start her healing. It doesn't sound like Alice is going to get forgivien really, at least by Edward.
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Date: 04 May 2018 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for posting this chapter; even though it was very sad. I'll be sad when this story ends. It has been a very good read. Every chapter just grabs me.
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Date: 03 May 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love it
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Date: 03 May 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hell is where she was. No wonder she is not in a good place
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Date: 03 May 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Good chapter.
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Date: 03 May 2018 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
She needs some counseling. I hope she gets it.
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Date: 03 May 2018 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am enjoying this story very much.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2018 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
It hurts that Bella is so depressed and insecure I hope she finds her way back soon.
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Date: 20 Apr 2018 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 20 Apr 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
She and Carlisle are practically friends now.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2018 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
It seems like no one is reallu understanding what Bella is going through or feeling. The other women are just useless. ugh..... She needs to have a heart to heart with Edward about her feelings, frustrations, and everything in her head.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Such a long road back from all she had to endure.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Badass Bella saves the day, part of the day anyway. And here comes a very angry Calvary with Edward in the lead!!! Yay! I’ll be anxiously waiting for next Thursday! Loved it!
Date: 13 Apr 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
She certainly has balls!
Date: 13 Apr 2018 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Come on Edward kill them all
Date: 13 Apr 2018 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
WoHoo! Here comes Edward.... Short chapter, but better than nothing. Great story.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a good story with a lot of suspense, but I wish the chapters were longer! When u wait like a week or more and u get such a short chapter, it's quite frustrating and sometimes bothersome deciding whether or not to keep up and continue reading.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2018 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
YOU ENJOY LEAVING US WITH OUR MOUTH WIDE OPEN...DON'T YOU? ( YOU MEANIE ) SO ARO TURNED HER INTO GI JANE HUH??? IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR A QUICK UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!
READ YOU SOON
Date: 12 Apr 2018 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can't get enough of this story. Love it!
Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder why Aaron hasn’t used Bella and Carlisle as leverage or blackmail against Edward. What is his game? I really hope Caius helps and it isn’t a trap.
I started the story over and re-read it just so I could read it straight through to today’s new chapter. I love it!!
Date: 12 Apr 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
She's going to rescue herself!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hate the humiliation torture, but I couldn't have kept reading if you had written a rape. Thank goodness.
Date: 12 Apr 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Very very good. I really hope they get revenge
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love Loved it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2018 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
It sounds like the only reason Bella and Carlisle got caught was because Carlisle was a dumb ass and couldn't shoot anybody. hmp....
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yeah lol Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Apr 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Caius is lucky to still be breathing.
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Yes he is, Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Apr 2018 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Going to be difficult to trust Caius. I've got a bad feeling about him. Thanks for the update. Love this story!
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Date: 05 Apr 2018 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can’t wait for more
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[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great update,but could you give us the next update say.......later today?
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Thursday my darling. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Apr 2018 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can he trust a snake?
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Who knows. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 31 Mar 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
A hi from Brazil.
Turning to say I'm loving your fanfic. Congratulations. Kisses
Date: 30 Mar 2018 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is a really good story. I love the pace, of the progression. Please keep writing.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
They came looking for trouble and I think they found it.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2018 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is right. If the Cullens got to kill Alice, then Bella should get to kill Carlisle. I think, hopefully, they are about to bond while doing some ass kicking.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Omg you left me with a cliffhanger
I love it please don’t ever stop writing
Date: 29 Mar 2018 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I think Alice got off too easy. Just my opinion. Thank you, Love this story.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very good, can’t wait for the next update
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Date: 25 Mar 2018 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can’t wait for more
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[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Getting good
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Date: 23 Mar 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hehe, I had a feeling that Alice was the rat!! Will she be killed or will they disown her and in essence Jasper?? Hhmnn, can't wait to find out!!
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