Date: 04 Mar 2018 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
:) :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2018 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Thank you for not prolonging their first meeting. Feels like as low burn though they both have so much more to learn. Great set up chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2018 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
It's getting good.update soon
Date: 04 Mar 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 04 Mar 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Glad you're back
Date: 04 Mar 2018 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Oh, boy! Bella just ran into her future Dominant and didn't know it, nor was Edward aware he'd just met his future submissive! Instant chemistry with so few words? Hell to the yeah!!!
Gorgeous Edward manip, Clo darlin'! *sexy beast!*
Date: 03 Mar 2018 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
I just have to say wow! what a chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
:)
Date: 03 Mar 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Haha Bella gets a roused being called “little girl”.
Ok so has anyone heard from Charlie????
We have missed you Clo but we also have voted for you too in the Twi Fic Awards!!!! We are so happy you have made it to round 2.
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ!!!!๐’โค๏ธ๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 03 Mar 2018 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
This is going to be so good!! I cant wait until the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2018 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Wow
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Interesting storyline
Date: 03 Mar 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
I have tried to wait until you have more chapters written, but couldn't hold off any longer. I have enjoyed what you have written so far, and can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the good writing, and I will be back to read each chapter!! ๐๐ค—๐๐ค—
Date: 03 Mar 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Great chapter. The submissives in training have it rough though.
Date: 03 Mar 2018 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
If they had that much chemistry and reaction to each other by just bumping into each other, I can't wait to see when they get together.
Date: 03 Mar 2018 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Very good
Date: 03 Feb 2018 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Okay, for a minute there, I thought Marcus was gonna assign a man to mentor Edward, which would have been quite awkward, I think! I'm glad Edward is comfortable with Angela, but doesn't he need to learn submission first? In any case, I'm lookin' forward to seein' him blossom into the magnificant Dom we know he has in him!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. He will be sitting in several scenes and will have classes on all the tools and equipment in a playroom. I hope you will enjoy the journey of both Edward and Bella.
Date: 02 Feb 2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
As surprisin' as it was to hear Bella saw submission as a kind of security blanket from her past, it was pretty understandable!
So, first Jasper and now Edward...the community might even get more Cullen men before all is said and done LOL!
Date: 02 Feb 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
These self-proclaimed prophets, like Aro, are sick, fuckin' pedophiles! How anyone can buy into their bullshit is a mystery to me! But, Charlie certainly did the right thing gettin' Bella out of his evil clutches before it was too late!
Date: 02 Feb 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Sounds like it was actually not cool for Alice to out Jasper, even accidentally! Can't wait to see what he says when confronted by his curious brothers LOL!
Date: 02 Feb 2018 10:54 PM Title: Prologue
Nightmare or actual memory...or both, what a horrible experience!
Date: 27 Jan 2018 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
nice update
Date: 26 Jan 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Love this story so far. Edward is beginning his training. Looking forward to his journey Can’t wait for more.
Date: 26 Jan 2018 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Great job. Very responsible.
Date: 26 Jan 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I love this story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I really like this story. Please keep the chapters coming! ๐
Date: 24 Jan 2018 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Ich mag die Geschichte. Aber leider ist das übersetzen hier so umständlich ;-)
Warum veröffentlichst du nicht mehr auf FanFiction?
LG
Date: 24 Jan 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
That was a lot of good info for him he cant wait to start the prosess
Date: 24 Jan 2018 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
He has a lot to learn
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2018 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I found it interesting and educational.
I'm glad Marcus gifted Angela with his confidence in her ability to mentor Edward!!
I thought Angela did a really good job with their first lesson.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2018 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
So good.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2018 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I loved it
Date: 24 Jan 2018 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
You're doing great!
Date: 24 Jan 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 24 Jan 2018 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I thought Marcus was going to suggest Jasper. I missed Bella this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2018 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Another excellent chapter, thanks
Date: 24 Jan 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Excellent chapter, thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Is Edward going to tell his brothers????
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ!!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘๐’
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2018 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Love it
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2018 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
This story is quite wonderful!!! I love the tone of it, the humor and the fascination with the community!!!!
Happy Writing
Date: 23 Jan 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Another great story in the making. Looking forward seeing how it unfolds.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
nice update
Date: 21 Jan 2018 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
INTERESTING!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Loved the time jump and I like the role you have given Angela.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Thank you for the pictures along with your words it enhances all the stories you have written. Bella's nightmare made me think she is very traumatized still. She has reinvented herself which is amazing. Anxiforbthese two to meet but I like a slow burn. -Ajfflady
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Let the yum yum begin!! I'm really looking firward to e & b meeting!!
Date: 20 Jan 2018 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
:O :O :O
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I loved it but how will there training go
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I loved it but how will there training go
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I loved it but how will there training go
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I loved it but how will there training go
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I loved it but how will there training go
Date: 20 Jan 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
How in 4 years has Bella never met Edward? You mentioned she had been living with Angela for 4 years? Did I read it correctly? I love your stories. They are the absolute best!
Date: 20 Jan 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
How in 4 years has Bella never met Edward? You mentioned she had been living with Angela for 4 years? Did I read it correctly? I love your stories. They are the absolute best!
Date: 20 Jan 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Good chapter.
Date: 20 Jan 2018 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I have been wondering how Bella found the community. I mean, she is naturally a submissive. Glad she has Angela. Love that Angela works for Edward. Also glad Edward has Angela to put him in the right direction. Loving the whole. Concept of this story. Can't wait for you to update again.
Date: 20 Jan 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I can see Angela tying Ben up and spanking him!!! Lol!!! Just saying!!!! It’s always the quiet ones.
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ!!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 20 Jan 2018 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 19 Jan 2018 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
nice story so far
Date: 19 Jan 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Well thank god!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
I'm s happy Charlie is sending her away!!!! She's so much better than Aro!!! I hope she'll be okay and safe!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
WOW!!!!! Edward seems to have had the shock of his life!!!!
I hope Alice doesn't get punished for tipping Edward off about his brother!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 5:05 AM Title: Prologue
So horrific and so sad!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
This is a crazy plot so far and I am loving it.
The prologue mentioned the name Jessica as Edwards sub is it Tattoo Jessica? Bella will be so out of her depth.
I cant wait for more. -AJfflady
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
So good .update soon
Date: 10 Jan 2018 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Great so far-can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
OMG She will be lost I hope Marie will be good to her. Aro is a creepy old man nasty. I am glad Charlie got her out of there.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Can't wait for next chapter. Starting off very well. I am greatly intrigued.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Oh my goodness i was not expecting her living on a commune! She is about to have a cuture shock & then edward is going to be so wild looking to her. Aro was so gross! Thank you for letting her escape!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Wasn't expecting a back story like that. Very interesting twist!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
:O
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Wow, this will be very interesting adn can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing,
Date: 06 Jan 2018 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Boom. Gone like the wind. I wonder howBella and Edward meet. I'mlooking forward tothe next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
So was the Swan family in a cult like compound???
KEEP WRITING!!!!๐’โค๏ธ๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 06 Jan 2018 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
I so didn’t see this coming now will she make it to her family’s home safely
Date: 06 Jan 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Okay, so I am super intrigued. I love it so far!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Interesting story.
Date: 05 Jan 2018 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Wow, what a twist
Date: 05 Jan 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
I'm proud of Charlie. I hope Aro doesn't find out what Charlie did. Can't wait for you to update again. You always leave me wanting more.
Date: 05 Jan 2018 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Love that Edward is not educated and all knowing about the community. Can't wait till the guys talk to Jasper. I have a feeling that Miss Alice is going to going to get a spanking.
Date: 05 Jan 2018 11:37 PM Title: Prologue
It was a great update
Date: 05 Jan 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Good for Charlie, Aro is a creepy freak.
Author's Response:
He is creepy freak. But I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Longer hair on emmett look so good! Edward being so naive is actually really cute!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 3:25 AM Title: Prologue
I am lookng forward to this. It's going to be interesting!!
Date: 18 Dec 2017 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Oh, wow! So, we are going to see his intro to the community and watch as his life evolves and his world view changes??
*huggles*
Date: 07 Dec 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Oh wow. ROFL for finding out the way he did. Wonder if Jasper is going to be pissed about it.
Date: 07 Dec 2017 7:49 PM Title: Prologue
sounds like E is gonna have a long road to recovery
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
I'm thinking...when will there be more????
Date: 02 Dec 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
New story that I will gladly follow. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
Poor clueless Edward. Canโt wait for the next update
Date: 02 Dec 2017 9:25 PM Title: Prologue
Reads like it is going to be good
Date: 02 Dec 2017 9:25 PM Title: Prologue
Reads like it is going to be good
Date: 29 Nov 2017 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
So far so good! THANK YOU
Date: 29 Nov 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery
I like that Edward was clueless to this subject.