Date: 21 May 2018 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins
OMG, I don't believe I'm going to have to wait for more to your story.
I am madly in love with it already.
Please let me know when you plan to post more updates. I will be
waiting eagerly for more.
I have already enjoyed your 'Bound' series. I think it's the 4th or
5th time I've read it totally. I loved that story as well.
Now, I am off to check out more of your stories. You are a marvelous writer
& I appreciate your sharing them with me.
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 20 May 2018 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins
I really want to like this story. You have a good idea in general but you have some issues with understanding the kink community. In an ideal world, I would like to meet a Dominant in the manner you describe, at a selection party, because I like rules and protocols and that sort of stuff appeals to me. The truth is most Dominants and submissives don't have mentors, their responsible for thier own learning from asking questions in the community, reading books, etc. One of the biggest sources of information which I would tell you to consider looking at is Fetlife. Essentially facebook for kinky people. People can post pictures, join groups, make events and generally do a lot of the stuff people do on facebook, but with fewer content limits. It's also black and red, not blue and white, as you might suspect. haha
One other I will say is that every relationship is different. And there isn't a need to only be one of "B/d D/s and S/m" as your Emmett her suggests. You can have all of the above or a cherry picked selection. There is also such a thing as switches, people who take both the D and s role at some point throughout their dynamic.
I wish you the best and hope you do more research.
I have the same username on fetlife if you're interested in talking more.
Thank you for the review. I have done a lot of research on the subject of the community and even had the pleasure to talk to actually Dominants and submissives. http://findamunch.com/mentors-protectors-and-trainers/ This is one of the sites that do talk about Mentors/Trainers. Emmett isn't in the community so he really is not up to date with all the ins and outs of it.
This is what is beautiful about the community is the various types of relationship you can enter into. I wanted to write a story that just didn't drop the person into a Dominant position without any training and same goes for the submissive. My story of course is fiction, but I think I stay pretty true to the community, unlike some other stories I have read.
Thank you again for the review and I am sorry you didn't find it to your taste.
Date: 18 Apr 2018 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins
Oh no. Not Edward? I love Carmen.
Not Edward....Yet. They both will have experience before they get together. Remember they dream in Chapter 1 and Bella coming into Edward's room. I promise a Edward/Bella HEA, but it will be a slow burn to get there.
Date: 01 Apr 2018 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 6 Confessions
I would imagine it's a huge relief to Jasper for his brothers to accept his lifestyle and even become part of it! That bein' said, he might need to rethink Alice's punishment now that she has a second strike against her for outtin' him to his own brother!
Date: 31 Mar 2018 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 Confessions
Thank you for brightening up our day during our time of sadness.
Mid Craigo would have been here we would have got a sermon about brothers or brotherhood as he would call it and then us women get him with there are women here too!!!! Lol
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ & HAPPY EASTER!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 31 Mar 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Confessions
LOVE Carmen!!!!!!!!! I wonder what Alice's punishment was? Glad they decided to start a relationship. Also glad that Jasper said he would be there of Edward had any questions. So good to see all the brothers supporting each other. I think we also need more Carmen in the story. Lol. She definitely seems like she keeps the boys on their toes.
Date: 09 Mar 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I have seen this story as I’ve looked for something new to read before, and I’m glad I finally decided to read it (I usually wait until a story has a longer chapter count so I don’t have to wait for updates haha). This is really good, and I like he build-up you are doing. I also like a lot of the AU stuff you’re doing (ex: Maria is Bella’s aunt). Love it!
Date: 05 Mar 2018 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Oh my gosh, I loved the chemistry between Edward and Bella at their first "run in". I wish I could come do your job for you and any housework you may have, so that you can do nothing but write!! Loved this chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2018 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I love the way you have brought all of our beloved characters together in your story. Are Bella and Edward going to be in training at the same time? I wasn't sure about the time line. One of my favorite parts of the story so far is seeing Angela as a Dominatrix! She deserves to be in the spotlight for a change. Great chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2018 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Wow, I didn't see this coming! Isabella's story was not what I was expecting. You just made this story twice as interesting as it already was! I can't wait to see where you take us next. Love it!
Date: 03 Mar 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Oh, boy! Bella just ran into her future Dominant and didn't know it, nor was Edward aware he'd just met his future submissive! Instant chemistry with so few words? Hell to the yeah!!!
Gorgeous Edward manip, Clo darlin'! *sexy beast!*
Date: 03 Mar 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Haha Bella gets a roused being called “little girl”.
Ok so has anyone heard from Charlie????
We have missed you Clo but we also have voted for you too in the Twi Fic Awards!!!! We are so happy you have made it to round 2.
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ!!!!๐’โค๏ธ๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 03 Mar 2018 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
I have tried to wait until you have more chapters written, but couldn't hold off any longer. I have enjoyed what you have written so far, and can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the good writing, and I will be back to read each chapter!! ๐๐ค—๐๐ค—
Date: 02 Feb 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Okay, for a minute there, I thought Marcus was gonna assign a man to mentor Edward, which would have been quite awkward, I think! I'm glad Edward is comfortable with Angela, but doesn't he need to learn submission first? In any case, I'm lookin' forward to seein' him blossom into the magnificant Dom we know he has in him!
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. He will be sitting in several scenes and will have classes on all the tools and equipment in a playroom. I hope you will enjoy the journey of both Edward and Bella.
Date: 02 Feb 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
As surprisin' as it was to hear Bella saw submission as a kind of security blanket from her past, it was pretty understandable!
So, first Jasper and now Edward...the community might even get more Cullen men before all is said and done LOL!
Date: 02 Feb 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
These self-proclaimed prophets, like Aro, are sick, fuckin' pedophiles! How anyone can buy into their bullshit is a mystery to me! But, Charlie certainly did the right thing gettin' Bella out of his evil clutches before it was too late!