Date: 04 Jan 2020 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait fo see if they find Carlisle all trussed up with the remote and shock collar , DNA evidence still attached.... how is he going to talk his way out of this one..
need to Sean Bella also for evidence to convict these psychos
Date: 14 Dec 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thank you for the update..Bella finally found her chance to escape...Carlisle is finally feeling what his litte toy does to Bella..lol his dick won't work anymore..I'm sorry Bella didnt have more time to inflict more pain to Carlisle....I hope Harry and Charlie and Edward are there in that parking lot..I dont want tjem to get away..Bella finally manage to get herself free...I hope everyone involved gets to feel the same pain Bella had to endure..I can't wait for next update..until you post again
Date: 08 Dec 2019 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 37
This needs to end now. Carlisle and Esme are evil incarnate and need to die before Bella is transferred. Edward needs to be the one to kill them. But I have a feeling after all this Bella is NOT going to want to stay married to him because it was his fucked up father and bitch whore of a mother who did this to her, along with the slut Angela. I can't handle reading anymore.
Date: 21 Oct 2019 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 36
Thank you for the update..these people are sick...Carlisle story does not justify what he did to Bella and his son....she wanted her son's attention, she definitely went about it the wrong way..Carlisle was an idiot to take the deal the father gave..now they have ruin Bella and Edward's life..just sad..I hope they save Bella now..they need to put that tattoo on Esme and Carlisle and ruin that family name..what were they thinking..selfish....until you post again
Date: 29 Sep 2019 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for the update..there is finally a light at the end of the tunnel..Carlisle is one sick son of a B...I dont what to think Esme knows nothing..I can't wait for next chapter..I hope Harry us close by and saves Bella before the buyer comes..I also wonder what the tattoo is..until you post again..everybody will need therapy after this is over
Date: 29 Sep 2019 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for the update..there is finally a light at the end of the tunnel..Carlisle is one sick son of a B...I dont what to think Esme knows nothing..I can't wait for next chapter..I hope Harry us close by and saves Bella before the buyer comes..I also wonder what the tattoo is..until you poist again
Date: 29 Sep 2019 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 34
I just want Bella safe. It sucks that this story, to an extent, is real life for some people and it's ...sigh.
I knew it was that piece of filth and I'm so angry that I was right. Also I hope Bella holds onto that. That it's not karma or a sick form of penitence. Ugh, I really hope next chapter is the rescue.
Date: 18 Aug 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
HARRY IS GOING TO SAVE BELLA, and Carlisle is going to go to prison for a very long time for human trafficking and rape amongst other charges. There's no such thing as coincidences. Although he could flee or otherwise evade capture I'll always believe it's him.
Date: 10 Aug 2019 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for the update..I'm now convinced Carlisle is the Boss and he raped Bella her own father in law..they must really hate her..neither parent wanting Edward to be with Bella..I hope Harry finds Tori soon I dont want them to get away with what their doing..until you post again
Date: 04 Aug 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
Can you please hurry up and end this pain for bella. I mean really, it churns the stomach and make me want to throw up.
Also, EVERYONE involved - WHORME, BITCHELA, Carlisle, Vicwhoria, James, Caius, etc NEED to be treated as viciously as she has been treated; mentally, physically and sexually.
As I have said before Bella has a long road to recovery and I wouldn't blame her for one bit for leaving Edward since it was his mother who started this shit.
Date: 24 Jul 2019 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
I have to admit, this story was something I really liked at first, but as the chapters continue, it’s getting more and more difficult to read. I think after a few chapters abour her trauma, we get the point. Yet there is no progress. I wanted to like this, but I think after this point it’s time to let this go. Best of luck, but please move the story on
Date: 23 Jul 2019 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
Yep. I had to skip about 60%. Plot points or no, some of this is just a bit too much for me, and I love raunchy BDSM fics, so maybe consent is the issue. I’m less invested in characters than I would be if I hadn’t had to skip through, and I mean this kindly. I’ll go read the revised edition but I feel skittish now. I’m pretty sure Carlisle is the boss by now but that’s only based on my skimming. Thanks for the time to write this. It’s very well written, the content is rough to find a balance in I’m sure. Keep plugging away!
Date: 21 Jul 2019 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for the update..poor Bella..I hope they find her soon although I don't think she'll ever recover......I know I wouldn't ....I hope Vicky gets to leave and meet up with the creep..I want them to find Bella soon and Esme needs to take her place.,but then again maybe Esme is into this shit and it wouldn't fase her.....I wonder why Esme hates Bella so much..until you post again
Date: 21 Jul 2019 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Why are you putting her through all this abuse? GET IT OVER WITH PLEASE! Have Bitchme AND Angela charged with Human trafficking, kidnapping as well as accessories to rape. They DESERVE NOTHING!
Bella is going to have a LONG road to recovery and most likely will not want ANYTHING to do with Edward or the rest of the Cullens for years since it was because of the shit Esme pulled since she never accepted Edward's choice of wife.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
I wrote a long meaningful review and then my browser restarted. So... well I'm glad you're back and that this story is once again updating. I appreciate that you'll be posting two verisons of what's happening with Bella. And I'm excited to see this through to the end. I'm really hoping that Bella doesn't go through too much worse and that it's not anyone I'm suspecting. See you in a week!
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Can you hurry up and save her and throw Whorme and her little whore assistant Angela into hell? Please and thank you. Whorme needs to be arrested for human trafficing, soluicitation of rape, conspiracy, and kidnapping.
Date: 21 Jul 2018 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ha! gotta love charlie in your story.
i realize bella was traumatized, devastated to think edward was
cheating on her but she was an idiot. but i guess she is suffering for
her moronic behavior and maybe edward will forgive her...not sure.
but definitely, i would want angela to get some prison time she deserves...
J does seem sincerely remorseful for his act. hopefully, he helps finding bella,
testifies but not get any prison time.
esme is definitely insane and gets her deserved prison time.
Date: 02 Jun 2018 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Omg finally going back to Bella, I've been up in knots waiting to know if she's okay... well you know what I mean right? I love the whole squad kicking it into gear for her, and it not being an outtake, but I've been so anxious. Great story!
Date: 21 May 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
All I'm thinking is god bless it's not Jasper. I wonder how we'll find Victoria, and who she's so scared of? Caius? Who's the person that met and targeted Bella though? It could very well be Caius still, as a friend of Carlisle via a function, and thus keeping Esme's ties in this just as strong. I just don't want anything ...more to happen to Bella. Being convinced to cheat (though blame still rests on her for doing so), getting kidnapped, and then being sexually assaulted is enough... any more than that well, let's just say a person is already hard pressed to recover from all of that and it would take awhile for them to do so.
Anyways, I'm glad you're back! This story is so well written that I'm enjoying it despite the amount of anxiety it gives me.
Date: 16 May 2018 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
I want to throttle her as well! I’m loving this story! We need to find Bella fast before something really bad happens to her (not that what she has already experienced isn’t bad). Looking forward to the next chapter! Have a great week!
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Just found this story and i m Hooked simply love it Like crime and juicy ones even more. Okay the last one was rape, but I think you need stuff like that for the deeper layers. Looking forward to the next chapter The nice doc. turns out to be a swine. Is he the boss or is it esme?
Date: 03 Feb 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
This is awful and I'm so sad. I mean Esme can't be so vindictive to sell her daughter-in-law even if she didn't think she was good enough for her son. I know some people just don't care about other human life and welbeing regardless of their gender, but I really want to believe Esme isn't that cruel.
Poor Edward and Co. finding all this out how they are. And Rose didn't know how right she was when she told Bella she'd need to go to therapy, because people who are saved from that sort of industry no matter how long they're there have a long road to recovery... if they ever do recover. I only skim the Bella chapters right now 'cause I just can't bring myself to read them. But I think you're doing pretty well on the emotions and her and Victoria's relationship.
Clearly J (Jasper? ): ) targeted her and if he's the boss well that really doesn't bode well for Bella or Esme or Angela since they've all seen his face ...and this is an open police investigation. Bad people do a lot to keep people quiet.
All in all, I like this story and I'm anixous for the rest of it. #TeamBella please keep her safe... well as safe as she can be.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update...well done....Finally they know the truth!!! Please find Bella before she is raped!!!...where the Hell is Angela? dead already? you think Esme got rid of the loose end?..until you post again.
Date: 27 Dec 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..I hope they find Bella soon..this is CRAZY!!!...I wonder if Esme IS a part of this....Does she think her son will still want a relationship wit her after this, knowing she was a part of this? What was Esme thinking? Does she hate Bella thank much that she would subject her to this cruelity? what about her son Edward does she care about his well being at all?...I sure hpe they find her soon nobody should be subjected to that with crazy people doing these thing to them for their fun and pleasure...until you post again...Let's hope it's a lead to finding Bella and taking down this scum
Date: 19 Nov 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am betting that it was James who kidnapped Bella and for Vicwhoria to think that even though she wasn't actually raped it was okay because all they did was jack off on her while she was naked is fucking wrong. All this happened because of the monster-in-law from fucking hell. And you skipped the whole part where Rosalie told the cops about Bitchme and her assistant Angela, I was hoping to read that part and that Edward and Charlie watched as well.
I hope that they find Bella soon.... like in the next 2 to 3 chapters and when the arrests come it includes Angela and Esme for blackmail, conspiracy, and also sexual assault.
Date: 01 Nov 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
thank you for the update...well done..thank god Rosa got there and told Emmett what transpired...I'm happy he believs Rose...I hope the lead at the bakery pans out..They need to find that BITCH Angela...until you post again
Date: 28 Oct 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Enjoying the story, but can't imagine why she's gone unless it's Angela because she let her know she wasn't giving up.
I read where you told a reviewer that everyone will get their just rewards. I hope this includes Bella. What she did was just wrong even though she was hurt emotionally.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
new reader to your story...I can't believe Esme, or Angela, I can't wait for the truth to ht the fan.....until you post again
Thanks for finding this story, reading and reviewing! There needs to be some serious shizzle hitting the fan, no doubt. I think everyone will get their just rewards,it will just take awhile.