Date: 21 Jul 2018 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ha! gotta love charlie in your story.
i realize bella was traumatized, devastated to think edward was
cheating on her but she was an idiot. but i guess she is suffering for
her moronic behavior and maybe edward will forgive her...not sure.
but definitely, i would want angela to get some prison time she deserves...
J does seem sincerely remorseful for his act. hopefully, he helps finding bella,
testifies but not get any prison time.
esme is definitely insane and gets her deserved prison time.
Date: 02 Jun 2018 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Omg finally going back to Bella, I've been up in knots waiting to know if she's okay... well you know what I mean right? I love the whole squad kicking it into gear for her, and it not being an outtake, but I've been so anxious. Great story!
Date: 21 May 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
All I'm thinking is god bless it's not Jasper. I wonder how we'll find Victoria, and who she's so scared of? Caius? Who's the person that met and targeted Bella though? It could very well be Caius still, as a friend of Carlisle via a function, and thus keeping Esme's ties in this just as strong. I just don't want anything ...more to happen to Bella. Being convinced to cheat (though blame still rests on her for doing so), getting kidnapped, and then being sexually assaulted is enough... any more than that well, let's just say a person is already hard pressed to recover from all of that and it would take awhile for them to do so.
Anyways, I'm glad you're back! This story is so well written that I'm enjoying it despite the amount of anxiety it gives me.
Date: 16 May 2018 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
I want to throttle her as well! I’m loving this story! We need to find Bella fast before something really bad happens to her (not that what she has already experienced isn’t bad). Looking forward to the next chapter! Have a great week!
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Just found this story and i m Hooked simply love it Like crime and juicy ones even more. Okay the last one was rape, but I think you need stuff like that for the deeper layers. Looking forward to the next chapter The nice doc. turns out to be a swine. Is he the boss or is it esme?
Date: 03 Feb 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
This is awful and I'm so sad. I mean Esme can't be so vindictive to sell her daughter-in-law even if she didn't think she was good enough for her son. I know some people just don't care about other human life and welbeing regardless of their gender, but I really want to believe Esme isn't that cruel.
Poor Edward and Co. finding all this out how they are. And Rose didn't know how right she was when she told Bella she'd need to go to therapy, because people who are saved from that sort of industry no matter how long they're there have a long road to recovery... if they ever do recover. I only skim the Bella chapters right now 'cause I just can't bring myself to read them. But I think you're doing pretty well on the emotions and her and Victoria's relationship.
Clearly J (Jasper? ): ) targeted her and if he's the boss well that really doesn't bode well for Bella or Esme or Angela since they've all seen his face ...and this is an open police investigation. Bad people do a lot to keep people quiet.
All in all, I like this story and I'm anixous for the rest of it. #TeamBella please keep her safe... well as safe as she can be.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update...well done....Finally they know the truth!!! Please find Bella before she is raped!!!...where the Hell is Angela? dead already? you think Esme got rid of the loose end?..until you post again.
Date: 27 Dec 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..I hope they find Bella soon..this is CRAZY!!!...I wonder if Esme IS a part of this....Does she think her son will still want a relationship wit her after this, knowing she was a part of this? What was Esme thinking? Does she hate Bella thank much that she would subject her to this cruelity? what about her son Edward does she care about his well being at all?...I sure hpe they find her soon nobody should be subjected to that with crazy people doing these thing to them for their fun and pleasure...until you post again...Let's hope it's a lead to finding Bella and taking down this scum
Date: 19 Nov 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am betting that it was James who kidnapped Bella and for Vicwhoria to think that even though she wasn't actually raped it was okay because all they did was jack off on her while she was naked is fucking wrong. All this happened because of the monster-in-law from fucking hell. And you skipped the whole part where Rosalie told the cops about Bitchme and her assistant Angela, I was hoping to read that part and that Edward and Charlie watched as well.
I hope that they find Bella soon.... like in the next 2 to 3 chapters and when the arrests come it includes Angela and Esme for blackmail, conspiracy, and also sexual assault.
Date: 01 Nov 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
thank you for the update...well done..thank god Rosa got there and told Emmett what transpired...I'm happy he believs Rose...I hope the lead at the bakery pans out..They need to find that BITCH Angela...until you post again
Date: 28 Oct 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Enjoying the story, but can't imagine why she's gone unless it's Angela because she let her know she wasn't giving up.
I read where you told a reviewer that everyone will get their just rewards. I hope this includes Bella. What she did was just wrong even though she was hurt emotionally.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
new reader to your story...I can't believe Esme, or Angela, I can't wait for the truth to ht the fan.....until you post again
Thanks for finding this story, reading and reviewing! There needs to be some serious shizzle hitting the fan, no doubt. I think everyone will get their just rewards,it will just take awhile.
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG !! For the love of CHrist, let these manipulative f'ers get what they deserve! Poor Bella.
I know, right???!!? We may be saying 'Poor Bella' a few more times before we're done, though. Thanks for reading.