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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2018 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 115

I loved this concept for telling a story.  I may have to try it for my students.  

Great story. 

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 7:53 AM Title: Prologue

Loved it!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2018 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 115

Very  wonderful  story  .  So you're  not  going  to  tell  us  who was with  Arya?  Gonna  leave  that  up  to  George  RR?    Keep  up the  great  work  .  I   love  your  stories ! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 115


Sad this is over it was a fun little story full of surprises.  Thanks so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 114

all is well :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 113

His heart was broken now it will heal.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 112

So good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 111

Edward is freaking out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 110

Edward has a lot to learn

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 115

I always enjoy your stories this was delightful. Thank you for continuing your dual POV stories " All" also.. I've been patiently following those too. Best wishes and good luck with future works. -Ajfflady

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 115

:) loved this 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 112

I hope they find peace now that he is dead.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 112

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 112

Poor Edward thinks he lost her he is in for a big surprise

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 111

She is burning the bastard so cool

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 110

Cool

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 109

Phil is so sick

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 112

IIt is over

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 111

What is going on 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 110

The fight or war has begun. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 109

So Phillip is Edward's uncle.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 108

Can't wait to see what happens. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 107

This is getting interesting 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 103

Who said Absolutely Not? Was it Khaleesi or someone else?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 102

Isabella is the Phoenix

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 101

Wow

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 108

Cool!  I love the combination  of  the  two  worlds !   Keep  up  the  great  work .  

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 108

My very brave and angry Isabella is about to unleash hell on Caius and Phillip!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 107

WOW!!! It sounds so exciting!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 106

I love Sansa!!!She's one of my favorites in GOT. I hope they decide so Teddy can see his daddy and stop crying!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 108

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 108

Phil needs to run now he is going to die.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 107

Dont mess with Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2018 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 106

That sounds like a sad life

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 105

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 105

they all need to stay strong

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 104

lot of fire going on

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 103

she has to do some fast  talking to get her to help

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 102

WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 101

Bella will do what ever she can to save Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 100

OMG what a twist WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 99

That is so sad :(

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 98

Phillip needs to die!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 97

OMG that poor man is a puppet.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 100

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 100

Oh my, lots of interesting information in this chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 99

I hope it is a good sign that James has no power in the sea. But does he have power on land now? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 98

Their Queen is a smart lady. She will figure put something. Can they enchant her before she leaves so no spells can be put on her from Phillip or his followers?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 97

Queen Isabella will go after her man, her King. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 96

OMG Bella will get him Back NOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 95

He will do everything he can to protect Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 94

He is going to make a baby

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 93

Bella is very smart and thinks of her kingdom.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 92

it better work

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 96

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 96

Glad the baby was healthy. So they took Edward.  What now?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 95

I hope Bella does not get upset with Edward for what he did.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 91

Glad they are going straight to Jane.  So there is not a chance of someo be stealing everything they got. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 90

Some how I've missed a couple of chapters. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 94

I'm surprised that they made love the same day/night that the spell was removed. I would ha e thought Bella's body needed some time to recover, especially after losing her baby. 



Author's Response:

It has been a month since she lost the baby and she was healed by Alice so she could go on the quest to begin with. Carlisle also saw to her before dinner so she is as healed as asshe can be. Love your reviews.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 93

Glad Carlisle could help them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 92

Hopefully Bella will be ok now. 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 91

They've made it home and I hope Jane was honest with them!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

It's wonderful Rose and Emmett re going back to the Castle with Bella and Edward!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

It's wonderful Rose and Emmett re going back to the Castle with Bella and Edward!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 89

I really like how well the get along!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 88

The King is quite brilliant.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 87

Bella is also very thoughtful and kind. I think she's going to be much loved by her people and a magnificent queen.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 86

Bella is very intelligent when working on all the complexities of obtaining the items to remove the curses.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 85

The plot thickens!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 84

A little bit scary for Bella!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 83

It seems they have their work cut out for them.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 82

Adorable!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 90

I loved it!!! Emmett always adds fun to the mix!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 91

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 91

No waiting for them get this done NOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 90

Emmett is a good man and will be happy to help?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 89

emmett is not going to let them go any more with out Rose

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 88

He is handy to have around lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 87

Now they have everything

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 89

Half Giant!!!!!!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 88

Edward and his magical powers. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 87

Bella was right. Edward has him a smart Queen. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 86

Bella is so smart ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 85

Love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 84

The siren wanted her an Edward.  Bella is a bad ass and will not let that happen

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 83

They will make there land great again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 82

she just wants to be close to him

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 86

:) :) 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 86

Interesting chapter and I love how intuitive Bell is!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 86

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 86

What item do they have left to find?



Author's Response:

The 4 leaf clover is the last item 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 85

Phillip is still reining terror 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 84

They found her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 83

Hope they find everything they need soon. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 82

Lol. Bella is a little minx.  

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 81

This story is quite fascinating and I'm enjoying this read immensely!!!! It's delightful!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

Fascinating!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

AH! Poor Jasper's been caught by a stranger!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 5:35 AM Title: Prologue

Intriguing!!!!

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