Date: 10 Jul 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
It must be difficult to write virgin sex scenes. You did really well tbough. I would like to read some more about them not as virgins though. Can't wait.
Date: 09 Jul 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
a very good story, I really like Jake in the story. keep up the good work and can't wait to read more
Date: 29 Jun 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
What a night and it will only get better.
Date: 24 Jun 2018 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 34
This should be a time to remember
Sherry
Date: 22 Jun 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
The wedding gifts were truly heartfelt and spectacular. I don't envy you writing first time sex. Just please don't get hung up on talking about Bella' s 'barrier'. Ugh...... in fact don't even mention that. We know they are both virgins. LOL
Date: 05 Jun 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am happy that you want a drama free story. Maybe we can see a little of the honeymoon, then the demise of Tanya (briefly). Perhaps take us through the remainder of their year at school, allowing her to become pregnant at the end?
Date: 01 Jun 2018 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 33
They did it!!!
How about a jump in time after a quick honeymoon with them getting their degrees and starting a family.
Sherry
Date: 29 May 2018 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 33
I love this sweet couple. We need to see how they handle the stress of real life. I'm sure the shrew will come back to feel havic. They have school and work.They have so much ahead of them especially sex, love, and babies.
Date: 27 May 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
I normally don't like wedding chapters of stories, because there are always other people bossing Edward and Bella around, telling them what they have to do, and not letting them see each other before the wedding.
However, I liked the wedding you wrote. It was simple like your characters, what THEY wanted and really sweet.
Date: 27 May 2018 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 33
Any way you want to go is good with me. I love a very happy gay Jake he is so much fun lol
Date: 23 May 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really don't like Tanya!
Date: 23 May 2018 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
Uh-oh! I really don't like Tanya and her family!
Date: 23 May 2018 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it! Loved Jake!
Date: 23 May 2018 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 23 May 2018 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Bella is an amazing person!
Date: 22 May 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! I don't like Tanya!
Date: 21 May 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter!
Date: 17 May 2018 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 32
Such a whirlwind.
Date: 14 May 2018 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to reading more.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
Everything they're doing for Bella is just so sweet and I think the way that she's handling the tan your situation is very mature
Date: 13 May 2018 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
Sounds so pretty. Love Jake
Date: 13 May 2018 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'm just happy they ran off the skanky Tanya.
Date: 11 May 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
Tanya is such a crazy bitch OMG. Surprise Bella you are getting married WOW. I have signed the petition that shit is just not right.
Date: 11 May 2018 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
Tanya has lost her ever-loving mind. Moving on to Vegas!!!
Sherry
Date: 08 May 2018 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
wow Tanya is desperate
Date: 08 May 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
There is no mention of a pregnancy
Date: 08 May 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad that they all, as a group, are standing up to Tanya the skank. ugh.....
Date: 30 Apr 2018 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thank God for DNA testing. Eleazer will be surprised that his daughter was slutting around on Edward. Not that he cares, but now he knows the truth. Edward missed a bullet with that twit.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
It was so sweet and heartfelt.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is it weird but I like gay Jake the best.
Date: 28 Apr 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm can hardly wait for the next chapter. I need more.
Sherry
Date: 28 Apr 2018 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
please please update soon.....Love this story
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks! I love drama
Date: 14 Apr 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love the story, but how does Tanya think she’s ever going to win Edward over by lying constantly. I really hope he sues her ass, or allows Bella to kick her ass.
Date: 14 Apr 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love the story, but how does Tanya think she’s ever going to win Edward over by lying constantly. I really hope he sues her ass, or allows Bella to kick her ass.
Date: 12 Apr 2018 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 30
love it, can't wait for more
Date: 12 Apr 2018 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMG Tanya is such a piece of shit and her family to.l They came to make a scene now they can go.
Date: 11 Apr 2018 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
Tanya is a lieing crazy bitch I Wonder who the baby belongs to thats why she tried so hard to get edward to sleep with her in the begging.....Please dont make us wait to long...........
Date: 11 Apr 2018 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Edward just has to fess up his virgin status and demand a paternity test if necessary. Tanya and her dad are both ugh... it seems.
Date: 05 Apr 2018 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
Can't wait for next update!
Date: 01 Apr 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
Keep on writing
Date: 29 Mar 2018 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yes, please. I think these two need a bit of drama to shake things up a little. I'm thinking Tanya will be a surprise guest. I can't wait to hear/see her reaction when she finds out Edward is engaged.
Sherry
Date: 29 Mar 2018 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just such a cute couple. Love love it!
Date: 28 Mar 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
What a great day so far WOW love it. Tanya going to show up?
Date: 13 Mar 2018 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love Esme she is going to make sure everyone knows she has a daughter now lol
Date: 13 Mar 2018 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
Esme is a wirl wind shopper Wow
Date: 12 Mar 2018 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
No time like the present. Tomorrow isn't promised so grasp life before it slips away. Edward done just that.
Sherry
Date: 12 Mar 2018 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
I loved seeing Esme and Bella bond one on one.
Sherry
Date: 11 Mar 2018 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Missing this story Its so good update soon please..........
Date: 21 Feb 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm curious as to who else the Cullens know that will be at the gala. Any of Edward's exes?
Sherry
Date: 20 Feb 2018 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love it Jakey is amazing there is nothing better than a flaming gay man they are the best ;)
Date: 20 Feb 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bella must feel shocked and like she is in another world with Esme telling everyone that she is her new daughter.
Date: 12 Feb 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Such a great story....Please update soon........
Date: 05 Feb 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
Cant wait for the next chapter this story is full of love and sweetness..........I love watching them fall in love