Date: 22 Jun 2018 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
The wedding gifts were truly heartfelt and spectacular. I don't envy you writing first time sex. Just please don't get hung up on talking about Bella' s 'barrier'. Ugh...... in fact don't even mention that. We know they are both virgins. LOL
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 33
I am happy that you want a drama free story. Maybe we can see a little of the honeymoon, then the demise of Tanya (briefly). Perhaps take us through the remainder of their year at school, allowing her to become pregnant at the end?
Date: 29 May 2018 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 33
I love this sweet couple. We need to see how they handle the stress of real life. I'm sure the shrew will come back to feel havic. They have school and work.They have so much ahead of them especially sex, love, and babies.
Date: 27 May 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
I normally don't like wedding chapters of stories, because there are always other people bossing Edward and Bella around, telling them what they have to do, and not letting them see each other before the wedding.
However, I liked the wedding you wrote. It was simple like your characters, what THEY wanted and really sweet.