Date: 07 Dec 2018 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okay, I’m enjoying their journey. The places they visit and especially the food. I wish I had a Fred! I love a gay Jake. I just do. But I am curious how my sweet duo is going to earn that NC-17 rating. I respect the no sex thing but I can’t believe no on curses. Like I said curious...
Lately I’ve read so much angst, crime and drama that this is perfect for chill holiday reading. Thank you.
Date: 25 Sep 2018 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
They are too cute. Even when Bella is pregnant, she can still go to college. After the baby she can go online for a while. Starting a family will not stop her from careet goals and she will have a wonderful family to love.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 36
The time jump to San Francisco will be great. We all know what is going to continue to happen in Vegas. They are so cute and I know I am weird but I like see them happy in normal life situations. Really seeing them starting their life together as a couple.
Date: 06 Aug 2018 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh, a time jump could be interesting. I'm enjoying how slow and sweet they are taking things. I really can't wait for them to get back and in school though. I don't think we've saw the last of Tanya yet. I keep expecting her to pop up anytime.
Date: 22 Jun 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
The wedding gifts were truly heartfelt and spectacular. I don't envy you writing first time sex. Just please don't get hung up on talking about Bella' s 'barrier'. Ugh...... in fact don't even mention that. We know they are both virgins. LOL
Date: 05 Jun 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am happy that you want a drama free story. Maybe we can see a little of the honeymoon, then the demise of Tanya (briefly). Perhaps take us through the remainder of their year at school, allowing her to become pregnant at the end?
Date: 29 May 2018 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 33
I love this sweet couple. We need to see how they handle the stress of real life. I'm sure the shrew will come back to feel havic. They have school and work.They have so much ahead of them especially sex, love, and babies.
Date: 27 May 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
I normally don't like wedding chapters of stories, because there are always other people bossing Edward and Bella around, telling them what they have to do, and not letting them see each other before the wedding.
However, I liked the wedding you wrote. It was simple like your characters, what THEY wanted and really sweet.