Date: 26 Feb 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved everything about this chapter. I laughed when Bella kept pouting and whining.
Date: 04 Feb 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank God for Mike. Def a hero. Glad the girls are mostly ok
Date: 30 Jan 2018 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
I would love a Maggie confrontation!
Date: 29 Jan 2018 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
They are all going through hell but they are all alive and well. I want that bitch Maggie to go through hell any kind would be good but make it a lot.
Date: 29 Jan 2018 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'd like to read Maggie's POV; what she was thinking when she flipped her switch. Family counseling wouldn't be a bad idea for the Cullen's.
Sherry
Date: 29 Jan 2018 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
Amazing chapter! I hope they dont lose the baby.
Date: 28 Jan 2018 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
I’m so glad they have already arrested Maggie. I wonder what all she has to say about her actions. More delusions, I’m sure! I hope that Mike gets a hero’s award for his quick thinking and actions that saved Bella and the girls! I’m so glad they are all ok. I live this story. Can’t wait for more.
Date: 28 Jan 2018 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Maggie will never be right in her mi d if she would do that .soon very soon she will meet her end
Date: 28 Jan 2018 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad for Mike that there was video. And I'm thrilled the police caught the lunatic banshee. I feel so bad for everyone else.
Date: 28 Jan 2018 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
They all need to talk to someone. The girls included. Glad they caught Maggie. And I glad that Mike was cleared and did not get in trouble.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
Maggie needs to go to the funny farm. I am so happy about the baby I just am worried about her.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! An amazing chapter. I totally didn’t see that coming at all. I knew Maggie was off her rocker, but holy crap! So glad Mike came to the rescue. Wonder what happened to Maggie after Mike hit her car? And there’s a baby on the way!! I so love this story. I hate the thought of this story coming to an end alrearly day!
Date: 19 Jan 2018 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
I did not expect Maggie to go off the deep end and try to harm Bella or the girls. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat.
Sherry
Date: 19 Jan 2018 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
Omgosh!!!! Maggie is crazy. I hope she goes to jail. Glad the girls and Bella are ok. Well, I wonder if they will tell the girls on Christmas since that is what they ask for.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved the wedding! It was so awesome for Jake to marry them and the vows to the girls was so sweet!!!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
What a nasty bitch!! You didn't cover is she is in custody or not. All kinds of surprises this chapter!
Thank you!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy crap, this story is amazing! There were twists and turns which I loved. Please tell me we will see what happens to Maggie and Angela. I really want her to get it. I also want to see Eleazar come groveling on his hands and knees. I love Mike! Great guy!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. I can't believe she's as crazy as she is. I hope they find her soon and put her away where she belongs.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's great to get a chapter of this story, but not so great to read what happened. I hope Maggie is put away for attempted murder, which is what she did, and if Bella loses the baby, then murder. Can't these guys catch a break? All these people who are making their life hell need to be gone, like now! I do enjoy the story but not the horrible things, like this, that happen to them. Thanks.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wowsers I was expecting it to be Angela not maggie, poor Bella and girls
Date: 18 Jan 2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Mike is awesome. I hope Maggie is locked up for life
Date: 18 Jan 2018 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I didn't expect that level of cray cray from Maggie. Dam!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am thankful for Mike. I hopw Edward snaps out of the guilt he has no reason to feel
Date: 08 Jan 2018 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yay!!! They're married and officially married.
Sherry
Date: 05 Jan 2018 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the wedding
Great chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2018 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Perfect!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Nice wedding so comfortable. Wow what a honeymoon yummy
Date: 04 Jan 2018 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
It would be great if that was the ending and there were no slutty bitches or bastards that will try to mess things up.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Beautiful. The vows me me cry
Date: 04 Jan 2018 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Glad you guys are back but sorry for all the hours you're working. Great chapter as always. I'm so glad they are finally married but I'm wondering where Maggie and her family are.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
What a wonderfully sweet wedding. Loved Jake's part in it also and of course the ending.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
It was so0 adorable and perfect. I can't wait or the next chapter.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Royce is way creepy.
Hope they don't end up with regrets once he gets out.
Date: 11 Dec 2017 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'd do the same thing as Edward, rushing Charlotte to the lawyers for a statement.
Sherry
Date: 06 Dec 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope everything is going to go well for their wedding. I also hope Buckley gets what he deserves.
Date: 05 Dec 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I didn’t see all of that coming! I loved it! Buckley and Maggie are bat shit crazy!!! I can see either one of them coming after Bella and the girls. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
seems maggie shouldn't get off since she seems like she was quite involved
Date: 04 Dec 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great update. I want Buckley to burn
Date: 04 Dec 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
The girls know how to get help smart little girls. Royce is a freak OMG Maggie is a bitch spoiled rotton bitch did I say BITCH lol.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Maggie sure knows how to play the men in her life. Royce is def weird but at least he gave them some info. Glad everyone is rallying around B&E and the girls
Date: 04 Dec 2017 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am more worried abou Buckley, Maggie and her crazy dad than I was about Charlotte. But at least she gave some true info and has a chance. Buckley's ex-wife might have a lot to say as well.
Those girls really lucked out getting away from that family and it's aquaintances.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
WOW! Just amazing chapter!
Date: 21 Nov 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE that the judge put Buckley in his place. He made fair judgements. Just the fact when it was said that the kids have no say is a huge red flag. Glad that Edward is cutting ties with Eleazar and family. You know Angela is involved somehow.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I like how Edward and Bella called their bluff. Charlotte probably won't even be able to be found or be high on drugs when she is. Maggie and her dad sure are having their plans back fire. Bella and Edward getting married will stun poor Maggie to death. LOL
That Buckly guy is just an ass that will probably end up doing something to get thrown in jail and getting his own kid taken away. Sounds like Angela is going down too.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am so happy that they were told that the children would not leave their homes. Maggie is a crazy, spoiled brat. Angela and Mr. Buckley just want revenge. I think they have a good judge.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm curious to know what's gonna happen with Charlotte and the girls; and anxious to see the wedding take place.
Sherry
Date: 20 Nov 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad to see that Bella can keep Edward in line. She can keep him from losing his temper and calming him down.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm thinking Buckley is paying charlotte to make trouble
Date: 20 Nov 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to find out what Maggie and Charlotte are REALLY up to and what part this Buckley character plays in all of it. I think they are up to no good, have an ulterior motive of some kind, and don't really care about the girls at all. I think that Edward will find out what their deals from Jenks or maybe just by doing what the court wants. I think the court is on to that bunch and will deal fairly with everything. I love reading this story, love how Edward and Bella's relationship is going, how the twins and Alice are planning the wedding and everything. I can't wait for more of this marvelous story, but of course, I will wait. What other choice do I have? Have a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday. See you next time!
Date: 20 Nov 2017 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
HAPPY THANKSGIVING to you and your loved ones. As always it's a joy to read each and every chapter you share with us....THANK YOU!!!
READ YOU SOON. : )
Date: 20 Nov 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Way to go Edward! So glad he verbaly bitch slapped that bitch! I fear it may have some bad after effects before it actually pays off though. Hope not, but wouldn't be surprised.
Had to laugh at Alice being timid about the wedding and Jasper being a looser at all things kids cards. LOL
Hope you both have a good Thanksgiving. Spend time with your families. We will be here when you get it done.
Thank You!!
Date: 15 Nov 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
First, Edward needs to cool down and listen to his lawyers. Second, they have the law on their side. They legally adopted the girls. I think the wedding idea is cute, but I think Rose and Emmett should stand by Bella and Alice and Jasper should stand by Edward. They supported them when they were single parents and continue now. They are also old enough to sign legal documents. The girls are not.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Maggie doens't give up, does she? Buckley is just an ass from the get-go. I'm wondering if Charlotte really wants the girls or not, or if its money she's really after.
Sherry
Date: 15 Nov 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG. Could Maggie be any stupider? Like Edward would touch her with a ten foot pole, let alone his dick after all the trouble she is causing.
I just knew that asshole was involved somehow.
I like the cabin idea. That should be fun.
Thank you!
Date: 15 Nov 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh wow, they are all working together to get Edward and Bella apart.
Date: 14 Nov 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad they got some alone time with the girls. Maggien is such a piece of dirt along with buckley. Judge needs to get control over this as fast.
Date: 14 Nov 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hmmm, how did Buckley get involved in this? Can’t wait for them to start finding dirt on all of these people!!! I mean seriously. Everyone knows it’s money for Maggie & Charlotte. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 13 Nov 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, I think I might have acted like Edward...I have a temper that way lol. Amazing chapter as always.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Mike is on their side. Maggie is definitely in on this. Bet she talked Charlotte into it thinking she'd get E when the girls were out of the way.
Jake is just awesome
Date: 08 Nov 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
yea pretty cowardly to serve her that way. Sleezeball. Em is such a awesome guy.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Was wondering how long it would take fro something to happen at the school. The kids handled it well though. Poor Colton.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Jess is a bit of a ditz but I'd prefer that over the bitch. Maggie is going to be trouble. I'm worried about something mike said about "knowing" the girls. He either is the bio dad or knows the egg donor. ack
Date: 08 Nov 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm Think Rose sent Slimy on purpose and then told Edward. If not, how did Edward know? hmmmm
Date: 08 Nov 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great idea with the switching. Think its good that they are doing individual and family stuff. Then balloon fight was hilarious. You are killing me with this UST.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad they are going through the therapist thing and being selective. Dayum the flirting is getting me all hot and bothered. Nice they are getting to know each other.
Date: 31 Oct 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ugh! That was a terrible place to leave them.
One would like to hope she is the to help, but you know it won't be. She wants Edward so you can bet your ass she is there to cause more trouble. Can't wait till she finds out they are engauged.
Thank you!
Date: 30 Oct 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was shocked at who it was for and the connections they have to the people around Bella and Edward. Now it makes perfect sense why Charlotte was commenting about Edward’s profession. They’re only after the money, of course. I’m looking forward to more. I love this story!
Date: 30 Oct 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow!!!! I am overwhelmed at how fast things moved in this chapter. E/B should make a weekend trip to Vegas soon, just to make it official. I'm really curious as to what Maggie is doing at their house.
Sherry
Date: 30 Oct 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Noooooo not another cliffy!! This was a great chapter and loving them getting so close. I hope the drama passes quickly and they can get back to some family times. Wonder what Maggie the pain wants. This was probably all her to get Edward for her own.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just kick Maggie to the curb and carry on. I cant belivie that bitch is coming for the kids Not going to happen.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is just crap. They can't take their babies away. I know they will win, but I hate that they have to go through this garbage. I am glad that they are engaged though. Have to look at he silver-lining in all this mess. The girls will be so excited.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
ugh, leaving us hanging. can't wait to find out what maggie has to do with all of this.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
You evil cliffy geniuses!! lol
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Maggie is a bitch & I’m sure she’s there to cause trouble! Wait till she sees the engagement ring!!
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
ugh.... so many disgusting people.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
Maggie is a selfish bitch who thinks that if she can get rid of the kids that she can once again get Edward but she just does not get it. I hope something bad happens to her... really bad.....
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Omgosh!!! I think Maggie got all this started. I definitely did not see this coming as if right now. I thought they would deal with Buckley and then maybe some family member would come forward.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I didi not see that comin at all. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella might be happy to take Maggie's eye out with the ring
Date: 25 Oct 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
great update.... update soon.