Date: 11 Jun 2018 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow this is the first time Forks was written as some sort of utopia. I understand Bella’s fear. My family had a similar accident except the driver that hit us on he bridge was in a semi and fell asleep not a crazy chick that can’t take a hint. Getting back in the game takes time.
Date: 10 Jun 2018 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I’m glad Mike is a good guy but I am not surprised about this Charlotte person. I can’t imagine a court taking those girls. An aunt doesn’t have the same rights as parents and it’s her word only her druggie brother gave her the girls. The drama is good though and it got them to engagement and ‘I love you’s’
Date: 10 Jun 2018 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay arrogant enemies so far are...Maggie, Mr. Buckley and mysterious Charlotte. Also I’m still not sure about Mike thinking the girls remind him of someone he knew or the fact that someone was looking into the girls file according to Tia the social worker. If Mr. Buckley is single and wealthy Maggie should go after him and they can be cray, cray together. JS
Date: 10 Jun 2018 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
What is Maggie using this Charlotte for I wonder? What’s she plotting? Mr. Buckley is in government ? So he’s going to get revenge? Aren’t the Cullen’s crazy powerful in his story. Let’s start doling out some Justice Cullen Style! Hehe I’m glad we are approaching the end of the friends with bene phase. No good comes from that at all.
Date: 10 Jun 2018 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay this arrangement isn’t good for Co-parenting. But at least they fought and worked it out towards resolution. And Rosalie is annoying on a regular but she bugged me here.I dont know why. And why do these adults need a 6 year old to protect them from cray cray Maggie and gross Mike. Hehe! I agree with the 6 year old you need to tell them NO I’M NOT INTERESTED! Why are Edward and Bella playing nice with these two?
Date: 09 Jun 2018 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
This bet of flirting should be interesting. I hope it doesn’t lead to this fight they seem to be anticipating. Girls are plotting which is cute and Maggie is still stalking which is creeptacular! She is an odd duck that one.
Date: 07 Jun 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I am so happy you ladies have finished this story. I didn’t want to read it as an WIP because I love your shit so much I always power through fast and joyfully. Anyway, very good start and I’m all in. Side note I love that your subsequently de-fanged and de-clawed Tanya and Jacob respectively. Hehe. Kudos!
Date: 31 May 2018 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved this chapter. Your ending for these two lovely, but oh so different, girls was just perfect. Kassie was always the "tomboy" kind of girl, so it makes sense that she is more physical and loves to play sports. I also love the twist about Johnny/Matt and how that turned out in the end. Cordie's much different destiny also was a very sweet one. You two wrote a wonderfully romantic and relevant to today story. I enjoyed everything about it. Can't wait to see what comes next from your talented pairing.
Date: 31 May 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome end. Love seeing Matt getting to a better place. Awesome kids who are awesome adults.
TY for writing and sharing ladies!!!
That attendance thing I totally disagree with....just encourages parents to send their kids to school while sick. But I digress.
Date: 24 Apr 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
It’s so great to see the girls becoming individuals independent of each other with their own styles. I loved Edward and Kassie at the stock exchange! She’s gonna be a force to be reckoned with when she’s older! Of course, Bella and Cordie at the theater was great too. That was so scary when Bella faded out. I’m so glad the boys are here and everything is okay with them. I can’t wait to hear how everyone adjusts to having two babies in the house. I’m a mother of 5 children with my middle daughter sing only 14 months older than my twins making it more like triplets a lot of the time. It was extremely busy and difficult at times to juggle, but we all survived and my twins will be 18 in June. Can’t wait to see what life is like for all 6 of them. I hope you’re able to give us multiple time periods in the Epilogue to see how crazy life is for them all. It’s sad that this story is ending, but I’m sure there will more great stories to come!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update...well done...Kassie on stock exchange..to funny, girl knows her stuff...Cordi getting tickets to see play again and all her signatures, I'm happy for her. Thank god Edward made it on time for the babies!!!well done...until you post again
Date: 23 Apr 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
Whew! That was a close call! Maggie had to cause just one more problem for them, didn't she? I hope that's all and am happy she didn't get to go to a mental hospital. It seems like this story came to an end very quickly and I will miss reading it when it is over. You guys have written another loveable, angsty, happy story. Thanks for all that you give your readers. I, for one, always enjoy them. One more to go, then it's over. Thanks again...
Date: 28 Mar 2018 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the trip back home. Glad she got a chance to say goodbye. Figures about the trial. I got stuck on jury duty a bit back and were almost to day 3 and they changed their plea. Ugh so annoying.
Driving lessons are an awesome idea. Cant wait for more
Date: 28 Mar 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for this new chapter. It left me wondering just exactly what happened with Maggie that she pled guilty. I know what you wrote, but there seems to be more underneath. At least it feels that way to me. Maybe I am imagining it...Time seemed to zoom by in this chapter. I know you are heading to wrap up the story in just a few chapters, so I guess that's why. I'm with Edward in thinking that Maggie certainly did not get a big enough sentence if there is still a possibility she can get a little psych time and then be free again. I was hoping she would get harsher sentencing. We shall see. Thanks for writing this lovely story. There has been some angst, as there is in life, so I'm good with that on a realistic level. I can't imagine anything else coming back to bite them in the ass. They have endured enough. Until next time...I hope you two are well and thriving.
Date: 26 Feb 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
It's so nice to get a chapter of this story. I love it a lot and miss it when the chapters are so far apart. No criticism...I know you guys are doing the best you can and I always appreciate your efforts. I like that your Michael Newton is a nice guy. Too many stories make him not so nice. He needs some love too, sometimes! It hurts to see Bella healing so slowly and being in a lot of pain. Everyone is doing their best to take care of her. She's one lucky woman! I hope you guys are doing well. See you next time!
Date: 28 Jan 2018 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
I’m so glad they have already arrested Maggie. I wonder what all she has to say about her actions. More delusions, I’m sure! I hope that Mike gets a hero’s award for his quick thinking and actions that saved Bella and the girls! I’m so glad they are all ok. I live this story. Can’t wait for more.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! An amazing chapter. I totally didn’t see that coming at all. I knew Maggie was off her rocker, but holy crap! So glad Mike came to the rescue. Wonder what happened to Maggie after Mike hit her car? And there’s a baby on the way!! I so love this story. I hate the thought of this story coming to an end alrearly day!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy crap, this story is amazing! There were twists and turns which I loved. Please tell me we will see what happens to Maggie and Angela. I really want her to get it. I also want to see Eleazar come groveling on his hands and knees. I love Mike! Great guy!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's great to get a chapter of this story, but not so great to read what happened. I hope Maggie is put away for attempted murder, which is what she did, and if Bella loses the baby, then murder. Can't these guys catch a break? All these people who are making their life hell need to be gone, like now! I do enjoy the story but not the horrible things, like this, that happen to them. Thanks.