Date: 13 Jul 2019 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! You characterize Edward and Bella as hormonal teenagers so well. Edward has so mu h to deal with and is so scared. He still has his focus completely on his limitations. I hope this will change throughout the story. Thank you for writing and sharing!
Date: 29 Jun 2019 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Emmett gets to know a caring girlfriend for the first time and is more than astonished. And Edward wants to fit in not caring about the prize. I an understand him but it's so bad and he hurts himself so much. I like the steps he is going in order to change. Love changes. Oh, I liked their time together and how they start to get to know their bodies.
Date: 28 Jun 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for this story! It's powerful and very well written. Your knowledge about epilepsy runs deep. The way you describe Edward's fear and Edward and Bella's growing relationship is so detailed and realistic. I can't stop reading! I have been working with children and teenagers with epilepsy for many years. I remember well how scared I was when I witnessed a tonic-clinic seizure for the first time. It's massive for the people with epilepsy and it's a lot to take in for their families and friends. That's Bella's situation right now. And she handles it so well. I hope she will encourage Edward to open up more and to start to trust people (and to make him break up with his so called friends).
Date: 26 Jun 2019 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 42
My nephew has epilepsy, so I understand Edward. It was hard for him not to be able to do so many things, so we concentrated what he could do. He is older now and has 3 kids and a wife. He is successful at his job and now that he is not growing, his seizures are under better control. Edward will get through this with the help of friends.
Date: 31 May 2019 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 40
Emmett is this story's unsung hero. He is wise beyond his young years. He deserves much love and happiness for all of his support. He's a true rock. I'd chip in for his graduation present to be something epic. I love that Charlie looked out for him and commended him on getting some punches in. Bella and Edward are lucky to have him in their corner.
Date: 20 Apr 2019 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
I’m so proud of Bella for standing up to Tyler! I’m also a little scared for her that he might do something to her when he catches her by herself! But still, that was fuckin awesome!!! Edward is there and he heard her put Tyler in his place. I can’t wait for next chapter. Fingers are crossed for the chapter to be ready in two weeks!
Date: 26 Mar 2019 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
I blame Bella for not really noticing how Edward changed the longer they were together. His love was genuine. If she loved him she would have listened and realized he loved her. She just flew off the handle. She had the right to be mad, but she should have talked to him not have a tantrum.
Date: 26 Feb 2019 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella needs to think though her anger. She knows deep down that their relationship was real after the first days. She is just too angry to see it. Edward needs to make a bid display of his affection for Bella, like tell the truth to the whole school. It is the big lie that needs to end. He needs to be brave.
Date: 25 Feb 2019 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
My hearts breaks for Bella and Edward. I have no idea what it’s gonna take for Bella to believe him. Edward has spent so much time lying to protect himself that it’s easy to understand why she doesn’t believe him. She did have some very valid points in what she said to Edward. I’m curious as to what his response will be after he gets through this episode.
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
I really wish Bella would take some of her anger and stand up to people, especially Austin and RBF. I think if she could look past the hurt and anger and think of the things that happened between her and Edward she’d realize that he really does love her. But I do think it’s going to take time for her to work through everything. Can’t until the 21st.
Date: 08 Feb 2019 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella needs to really think about what they experienced together. Release the anger and really think. She will know that she was the only person he was truly being authentic. The rest is all lies, not their relationship. Edward needs to stop lying and work on getting Bella back. He needs to fix all these rumors and be a man.