nice update

I think i'm mostly shocked that they aren't a little more happy to see her. 

once again, you surprise and thrill me with your twisted version of canon. there is just enough canon to make it recognizable as a twilight ff, but also enough of your own take to make the story fresh and new. i have always loved that about this story! i'm wondering if Charlie and Renee can risk coming back to Forks and if the Quileutes can bend enough to accept all this. They will be a better tribe if they can! thanks for the new chapter. have a lovely holiday!

OMG! That is just...not at all what I was thinking. Awesome!

I'm just going to believe they will be happy she found them when they realize the volturi are still in the dark!

Wow!  So they def. needed a fight to see what bella can do.  The title to this story makes complete sense now!!

I'm hoping carlisle gets her a place but why does edward have to leave now that they know. Or can she go to the extened family too?

What what does he mean by that 

Wow! We got to the citrus much faster than i expected!  I'm not complaining at all!!!!! 

I'm so happy they are going to live together! Edward could even take the same college courses with her.

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At least they stopped and came back as they heard Carlisle yell.  I hope they lose their fear and are able to have a relationship with Bella and she'll get answers to her family history that she needs.

Well! This is an interesting turn of events. Charlie is a shape shifter? Renee is human? They should be accepting of Edward and her, then. What are they so afraid of? I know. You'll tell us. I'll wait. 

I forgot that they would smell edward on her. Oops!!

I'm starting this.... The wolf pack hasn't ever interested me but i'm addicted to your writing so i'm giving it a go!!

I love how the family sat to discuss things. Rose does have a point with the evil ones. 

and so we continue. Rose's attitude still sucks. the Volturi may or may not be on their way, and an additional danger. the renegade quileutes may or may not also be an additional danger. we are kind of up in the air on many things now. Will they find Renee and/or Charlie? I eagerly await the next chapter to see how it goes in Brazil. Thanks..

My oh my so now they have a plan to move forward with and Rose has a funny way of talking about the V team hahahahahahahahahaha loved it

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Holy moley!

Ho wow a bird. Somehow I think Carlisle is going to love investigating it.  

Interesting. They've got a plan...of sorts...perhaps? Billy now there's a character you could do without meeting. Just saying

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 Billy is pretty horrible!

Wonderful. Thanks

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Thank you!

Patriarchal societies...bring on the Amazonians! Lol. Good chapter. I so feel Bella's frustration and displeasure. So good . Thanks

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Yeah, they're awful. 

I don't mind the changes. They had to this beautiful story. Thank you

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 It was pretty necessary. Thank you. 

Your gift is powerful. So pleased you exercise your power on the written word. Your readers are the beneficiaries. Thank you

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That's really very kind of you. Thank you. 

Brilliant start

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 Thank you!

Assholes. First of all you didn't need to take her from the fucking woods if years later you choose to abandon her again, W T F. Also she's not theirs to disown? Whatever happened to respect and wonderment. "Oh wow we found her in the woods after this earthquake she's important" to "Lol fuck her, slso freebie sex tape anyone?" I'M SHAKING WITH RAGE. 

But like yes, be free Bella. You got this, you were meant to shed wherever you please. Also show Efward your wolf form.

LOL Emmett should meet her wolf form too. I can picture him going "Hot damn!" Touch her and say "Oh literally too." Or something just as silly. I love Emmett. 

Carlisle's POV is the only thing that makes me feel better and have any hope, judging by what went on in her so-called trial. The wolves are deplorable and have no sense of family ties, kicking Bella out just like that! Ugh. Thanks for the chapter, ALL of it. I really enjoy reading this story!

I hope Carlisle can fix it 

I hope she gets away from them. 

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Oh nomwhat will happen and what will Edward do if they try to keep them apart 

Do you mean in your A/N that the wolves will smell him on her when she get home? OOOOOh...that will not be good. I love this chapter. It was all lemony goodness. She was a virgin until now? That's what I thought when his first entrance into her was met with momentary pain...

Finally they have consummated their love. 

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Edward broke the treaty over something he could've told her via a phone call? 

When Bella thought to herself about the right fit I thought "You don't know if the glock can even fit in your glove compartment!", and then she felt the weight of it haha. Also bless that he's not a prude. 

Oh good he decided not to kill the butterfly. I'm liking this story. I enjoy this kind of Bella way more than a Mrs Meyer's Bella. 

underwater basket weaving? really? this chapter teases beautifully. I loved it!

Oh my so romantic I love it 

Ahh you can't end it right there, such a tease.

So sad that Edward and Bella have people in their families against them. 

I see that part will follow canon, the part about Sam leaving Leah for Emily...How did the wolves not sense Edward so close to them? I'm glad they weren't caught together, but soon, it seems, all hell will break loose when Bella rebels. Why is it the men in the tribe can do more and go outside the reservation than the women can. The women just marry and have babies, it seems. Ugh. Can't wait to see what happens next! This is a great story and I'm enjoying the hell out of it!

Karma is a bitch. God I cant wait for  Edward and Bella to be in the open screw everyone. Hmph! Awesome chapter!!

Loved it, she knows he is her imprint. 

They are living in their privately defined world right now. Why am I waiting for the other shoe to proverbially drop here? I'm hoping against hope that this story doesn't have a tragic ending. My heart would be broken...

Anyone who is reading your marvelous story must have seen from the beginning that is it very AU and not canon at all in what the characters are. The only canon is the basic universe it is set in. I saw that from the beginning and, frankly, it was one of the most attractive things about it. I applaud your creativity and deviation from the mundane world of "canon". I'm loving the story. Big, fat thanks from me!

:) 

Loving this story.  Sam is a jerk.