Date: 21 Dec 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
once again, you surprise and thrill me with your twisted version of canon. there is just enough canon to make it recognizable as a twilight ff, but also enough of your own take to make the story fresh and new. i have always loved that about this story! i'm wondering if Charlie and Renee can risk coming back to Forks and if the Quileutes can bend enough to accept all this. They will be a better tribe if they can! thanks for the new chapter. have a lovely holiday!
Thank you so much! You help make all of this worthwhile. I think it's going to be similar to canon, with the addition of Renee and Bella being quite powerful against any enemies.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm hoping carlisle gets her a place but why does edward have to leave now that they know. Or can she go to the extened family too?
It's more for Carlisle to convince the wolves they're following the rules.
Date: 14 Dec 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
At least they stopped and came back as they heard Carlisle yell. I hope they lose their fear and are able to have a relationship with Bella and she'll get answers to her family history that she needs.
I hope so!
Date: 14 Dec 2017 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well! This is an interesting turn of events. Charlie is a shape shifter? Renee is human? They should be accepting of Edward and her, then. What are they so afraid of? I know. You'll tell us. I'll wait.
He is a werewolf, yes. Renee is a shapeshifter. :)
Date: 07 Dec 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
and so we continue. Rose's attitude still sucks. the Volturi may or may not be on their way, and an additional danger. the renegade quileutes may or may not also be an additional danger. we are kind of up in the air on many things now. Will they find Renee and/or Charlie? I eagerly await the next chapter to see how it goes in Brazil. Thanks..
Thank you! Rose tries to be practical, it's just not in a tactful way.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Assholes. First of all you didn't need to take her from the fucking woods if years later you choose to abandon her again, W T F. Also she's not theirs to disown? Whatever happened to respect and wonderment. "Oh wow we found her in the woods after this earthquake she's important" to "Lol fuck her, slso freebie sex tape anyone?" I'M SHAKING WITH RAGE.
But like yes, be free Bella. You got this, you were meant to shed wherever you please. Also show Efward your wolf form.
LOL Emmett should meet her wolf form too. I can picture him going "Hot damn!" Touch her and say "Oh literally too." Or something just as silly. I love Emmett.
LOL. There is a reason, it's just not going to be apparent for awhile. Everything will work out.
Date: 31 Aug 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Carlisle's POV is the only thing that makes me feel better and have any hope, judging by what went on in her so-called trial. The wolves are deplorable and have no sense of family ties, kicking Bella out just like that! Ugh. Thanks for the chapter, ALL of it. I really enjoy reading this story!
Thank you so much! Carlisle will come up with a plan.
Date: 24 Aug 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Can't mess with an imprinting. Honestly Bella just needs to do what Jake did in the books and shake off all the shackles. I get that it's because she pledged her alliance to the tribe/wolf pack, but she just needs to be her own wolf.
Also where was Paul that he smelled that she had sex with Edward??
Paul smelled them in the cave. The rain wouldn't have touched that area, but it's near where they cliff dive.
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Can they forbid her to see Edward? What will happen then? I don't think she will stop, so there will be danger for her and especially for him if they don't part. Right? Don't tell me. I will read and see. These are just more internal questions. You mentioned before the chapter that there hasn't yet been any imprinting for this tribe except for their ancestors. Maybe that will be a factor here for Edward and Bella. Would that save them? This is such a unique story. I am loving it!
I know I left it with a ton of questions. Thank you for being patient.
Date: 24 Aug 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh no. I think that the council will see that she imprinted. Im hoping anyway. I jope Edward doesnt get hurt. Amazing chapter. I read the snip it. Im not patiently waiting lol.
Lol. I wanted to give her the whole chapter, but it would have been so long.
Date: 17 Aug 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Do you mean in your A/N that the wolves will smell him on her when she get home? OOOOOh...that will not be good. I love this chapter. It was all lemony goodness. She was a virgin until now? That's what I thought when his first entrance into her was met with momentary pain...
He carried her home, and they were at the LaPush cliffs. They'll smell him there, despite the rain. Yes, they were both virgins.
Date: 17 Aug 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
She took him to the cliffs of La Push? He carried her home? They keep breaking the Treaty! Do they think they're in a Jane Austen novel?? C'moooon. They're trying to get someone killed.
It was not their finest moment, no. They assumed the rain would cover their tracks.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
I've been thinking the same thing. 5 years is enough to createnuclear loyalty but npt really more than that and so she should just leave.
I'd say she's very torn. She certainly wants to just go, but she's afraid.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
So we're classifying her someone with tribe lineage even though that's not the case? Or just that she's of a similar enough cloth that it must ne true for her too?
It's her only frame of reference, as a shapeshifting wolf. But she honestly doesn't know what/who she is.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
When Bella thought to herself about the right fit I thought "You don't know if the glock can even fit in your glove compartment!", and then she felt the weight of it haha. Also bless that he's not a prude.
I've never heard that reference before, holy crap! He''s definitely not prudish.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
No pests other than Sam's lack of chill this chapter. Edward must be sad. I'm sad that Bella didn't just phase after backing up. Just poof there it is. Haha. This story is giving me what I need right now.
Sam has an incredible lack of chill. I'm glad you like it!
Date: 03 Aug 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I see that part will follow canon, the part about Sam leaving Leah for Emily...How did the wolves not sense Edward so close to them? I'm glad they weren't caught together, but soon, it seems, all hell will break loose when Bella rebels. Why is it the men in the tribe can do more and go outside the reservation than the women can. The women just marry and have babies, it seems. Ugh. Can't wait to see what happens next! This is a great story and I'm enjoying the hell out of it!
Leah just graduated with a bachelor's in education. It seems like the girls are discriminated against becasue there aren't as many, but it's really just Bella. I think of Aro saying "Only the known is safe." The Q's don't know what the hell to do with Bella. Oh, and Edward was far enough for the other houses that only Seth noticed his presence. At least, that's my story and I'm sticking to it. ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
They are living in their privately defined world right now. Why am I waiting for the other shoe to proverbially drop here? I'm hoping against hope that this story doesn't have a tragic ending. My heart would be broken...
The other shoe is definitely going to drop, but I always write hea's.
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Anyone who is reading your marvelous story must have seen from the beginning that is it very AU and not canon at all in what the characters are. The only canon is the basic universe it is set in. I saw that from the beginning and, frankly, it was one of the most attractive things about it. I applaud your creativity and deviation from the mundane world of "canon". I'm loving the story. Big, fat thanks from me!
That’s so good to hear! You never know where someone will break if you go too far from canon. I’m happy that you like it.