Date: 17 May 2018 5:48 PM Title: Outtake 2
Thanks for another chapter! I love how you just skimmed right by the more tricky elements of the birth, like those in the canon story. The point was the birth of the child and not the gore involved in the birth. I like how you prioritized that. Will there be more? I'm good, whenever you choose to end it. I would love to save it to pdf whenever that is...
I believe ths is it. I dont have anything else in mind just now for more from this family. Thank you for all of your support, it really means so much to me.
Date: 04 Apr 2018 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 41
Theses characters were amazing. I loved your Bella and Edwards was extremely romantic. A very original story also. I loved this. Looking forward to more.☮Ajfflady
I don't know how I missed this, but I'm glad I saw it! Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 31 Mar 2018 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 41
I'm glad to have been on this journey with you. I've enjoyed this story, as I knew I would given other stories I've read by you. I look forward to what's coming next! Before then, I'm waiting happily for the rest of the future take. This truly is a beautifully written story. Thank you for following this particular plot bunny down the rabbit hole. (:
Thank you! It's been the best decision to follow this plot bunny. I appreciate you always reviewing!
Date: 29 Mar 2018 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 41
Can I first say that I feel badly for Connor. He can't help it if he has a giant crush on Bella. He also can't help that her husband is a mindreader. Poor kid. This kind of thing happens to many of us. Well, not the mindreader part, but you know....the crush part.
I am very sad to see t his story end. I have loved reading it, from the beginning, and believe I have told you so for most of the way through. I very much enjoy reading all of you wonderful fan fiction authors. What you do with the original story entertains, surprises, and endlessly fascinates me. These wonderful stories of yours, and others, give this old woman a rich fantasy life, without which I would have gone crazy years ago. I hold you all in my heart of hearts and have much gratitude and appriciation for all I receive from you. Again, thank you so much.
Thank you so much Judy, for always having a kind word and never failing to articulate your appreciation and pleasure in all of my stories. You make it worthwhile, and give me a boost every time I read something you've said.
Date: 24 Mar 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 40
C-sections are the best sections. I'm so happy you won the awards you did, you deserve them. Excited for the end of this journey, it's been a great one. Thank you.
That's really very nice of you! C-sections are the best when dealing with supernatural hybrid babies.
Date: 22 Mar 2018 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
I like how you wrote this birth scene. Much less violence and drama. I am very sad to know this journey is almost over. I have loved reading this story. It was always creative while following canon, loosely, but given your own personal touched to twist that canon. I voted for you every time I saw your name. Thanks for everything and congratulations on your four awards!
I voted for you as favorite fangirl, as well! It is almost over, and it feels sad. They've become like my family. Thank you so much for your support.
Date: 16 Mar 2018 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 39
Also I was watching tge Kitten Academy Live stream on YouTube while reading this so I have far more warm and fuzzies than this chapter actually gave off. I hope that Esme heals properly, but at the same time a small limp or so would totally help them blend with humans better. In the end though she's an easier target among the supernatural if it doesn't heal properly so for that sake "Get Well Esme!"
I can't wait to see what's left of this journey!
Yeah, that little bit of realism that they can be injured felt important. Just no major deaths.
Date: 11 Mar 2018 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 38
What. A. Doozy. But also the not-fight fight scene from the movies? At least it mirrored it. Don't Stephanie Meyer me and this just turns out to be a nightmare because I love stories when the Volturi reign comes to an end. Particularly in ways that doesn't send the vampire world into a tizzy which this outcome could, but still totally worth it since Aro got a firball to the face. That's a good martini on a Sunday morning.
Thanks for another great chapter!
LMAO. It's real- I felt it was important to put the Volturi to rest.
Date: 08 Mar 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 38
yikes. I read the chapter, reviewed, then when I clicked submit, it said I wasn't authorized. STARS had kicked me out while I was reading the chapter. After I signed back in, came here, I saw that my review had not been saved. I loved the chapter!
Isn't that weeird? Its been acting up lately. Thanks for coming back in to review.
Date: 08 Mar 2018 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
Def should've added a dun dun dun. It popped into my head. I wonder what's next, if we're going off of cannon Bella's ability everything should be set if not then Bells and Renee coveri g everyone should work right? Regardless I'm excited for the battle. Thsnks for another great chapter. Really needed this since hospitals are so boring.
I'm sorry you're in the hospital! It's going to be interesting, that's for sure.
Date: 01 Mar 2018 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks for the chapter! I've said it before, many times, and I'll say it again. I love reading your stories. I love that you FINISH your stories! You never disappoint, but even if you did, we are all only human. Thanks for many hours of entertainment. I need to go vote again...
Thank you, that is really kind of you. I do believe this one is almost complete.
Date: 23 Feb 2018 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 36
El Jardin is a pretty sick fic.
This was a nice chapter, I like how you snuck in the fact that Eddie boy basically breaks Bella everytime they have sex. I caught that. Anywho, it's too bad that Bella can't use more powers as a wolf. Sure that has the potential for being too OP so it's a realistic and (to be honest the) correct choice, but a real life in fiction pokemon Bella would've been awesome just sayin'. Can't wait for the next update when they practice together and not apart. Hint hint. (PLEASE)
I just don't want her to be too incredibly perfect. Next chapter will be EPOV, maybe he'll brag about breaking Bella in bed! LOL
Date: 22 Feb 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Besides you, my favorites are RobzBeanie, Pattyrose, Write Sisters, AliciaW68, Bornonhalloween, CaraNo (who writes OF as Cara Dee), and just too many more to list. I tend to keep reading those who finish their stories with regularity and who write happy endings. I know there are a lot of you out there, but I'm down to just a dozen or so that I still read.
I love how they're gearing up for the fight, finding out just what each can do, and honing their strengths. Thanks for everything!
Thank you as well! It's almost time for the fight.
I read most of them as well, but I've never heard of the Write Sisters. I'll have to check them out.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
Beautiful ceremony and, he surprised her, so sweet. I loved Carlisle's way of doing the ceremony for them, so unique. And Charlie now sees that others love like he loves his wife.
I think Charlie's eye were opened, for sure. Thank you.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
What a beautiful ceremony. I loved reading it! I voted once, but will try to vote again today or tomorrow. I always vote for you wherever I see your name. Thanks for everything!
Well thank you! I tend to forget to vote every day, but I set a reminder on my phone for this. I get to vote for good authors, too!
Date: 09 Feb 2018 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
Idk why, but whenever people mention Chelsea breaking the bond of a mated pair my skin crawls. I thought she couldn't do that according to Marcus (or S.M. herelf stating it)? Anywho, That's cool, Bella should whip out a shield like magic.
I have spent way too much time reading the Twilight Wiki. She can make or break bonds, and she's kept happy by Corin, who's gift is to make people near her content. She was only spoken of in Breaking Dawn, and Bella was easily able to deter her efforts.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
So the fight is shaping up. I see that. Good. I'm eager to see how you play that! Thanks for the status update on your stories. I am happy to wait however long it takes you to get to where you can comfortable post whatever you have. Truly. I love reading all your stories!
Thank you! I know what I want to happen, but it's hard to get the words down sometimes.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
sorry but this whole situation is a big deal...a life changing big deal.
yet, bella is thinking about school and job that is preventing her
from finding her parents...yes, they are important aspect of life but
as i said, the situation is a great big deal on a whole another
It is, that's exactly right. It's monumental for her future.
Date: 01 Feb 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
it was excellent, Edward had to calm her down and what a way to do it, lol. So glad the ladies had a nice day out shopping, they needed that. That sucks that the Volturi are coming.
And Charlie might be thawing out.
Date: 26 Jan 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad charlie opened up and yelled at okd quill. I wonder what causes her exhaustion. Can I suggest an outtake of Em trying to become Frank’s friend, I hope he does eventually
I promise to fit it in somewhere, because I have always pictured him and Frank!
Date: 25 Jan 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 32
I agree! Quil had no right to force his will on anybody! Imprinting happens by mutual feelings, not like someone imposing feelings on another. I'm glad that both Bella and Charlie were able to confront him. So the Volturi are still coming? How will the problem of he getting so tired after shifting be solved? Also her losing her shield while in animal form could also be dangerous in any battle. Can't wait to see how you play that out! Thanks.
She has to figure out how to cope with her differing talents.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 31
yes, that was a thrilling time in the movie. you captured the feeling very well here. yours is a lovely alternate to canon, while staying true to the spirit of it. Thanks so much!
Thank you! I thought they deserved it.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 30
This story has short chapters. This one was nice, but it's hard to comment on any major plot points with this one. I think she's come to some sane conclusions regarding her parents. I am eager to see how the big battle plays out. Thanks!
That's understandable. This was more about discussing her feelings about Charlie and the origins of the ring.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love the hyperbole with which each declared their devotion. LOVED it. It's that kind of fairy tale stuff that I always wanted for myself but at the same time knew it was only possible in stories. Thanks for a wonderful, romantic chapter!
That's exacty what I'm thinking when I write Edward. What are all the most romantic things I'd love to hear? Thank you for your support!
Date: 30 Dec 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope it's awhile before shit hits the fan. Right now I'd love to get to understand these characters a bit more, and maybe see some development. I love Bella's POV and her way of showing rather than telling.
We'll have some time. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm not trusting Charlie so much by how you've described him so far. I hope that changes. Bella's powers are amazing! Are you building up to a fight with the Volturi? No, don't tell me, but I'm thinking you are. Love how you've written Renee and Bella. I like that Renee isn't a flighty air head in this story. See ya next year!
I'm trying to sort of stay in line with canon. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
My family cant do laundry on new years day either lol very bad luck if we do.
I am very worried about Charlie I hope he doesnt turn against Bella turning her into to volturi so him and his wife can escape.
That would be dastardly!