Date: 22 Jul 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
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Date: 21 Jul 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love it! He has no idea how is life is being turned upside down.
What did Tanya do? Abort his child? Have an affair?
Date: 19 Jul 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thus sounds very interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward def needs an attitude adjustment. He was out of line not following protocol but she could have handled it better.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Why are you making them constantly fight your painting him as an ogre after there make out session you could have started having him start being nicer instead it's getting worse if the story does not turn around I'm going to lose interest
Date: 18 Jul 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward has got to get his act together. He could at least act like an adult and be civil regardless of anything else. Someone needs to slap him upside the head. Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
well glad she told someone, she needed to share!
oh dr asshole, i agree, what are we going to do with you
Date: 18 Jul 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Epov please? What the hell did Tanya do to him?
Date: 18 Jul 2017 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well Bella needs to either ignore him Or she should start looking for another hospital (there are plenty) She does not need to have a bad resume.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edwards an asshole!
Date: 18 Jul 2017 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward tattled on Bella and it back fired on him lol. Poor boy is so lost he wants her but he has to pull his head out of his ass first.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Haha, love it. Love the dickyness..lol
happy writing
Date: 18 Jul 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Just as eager as the girls to know what happened in Edwards past.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think it'a about time Edward and Bella had another earthquake weather together.
Sherry
Date: 18 Jul 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
If the drunken bar night doesn't happen he could always show up at her apartment after a rough case
Date: 18 Jul 2017 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
He's obviously suffering from some kind of trauma associated with the last woman he was in a relationship with. No, that doesn't give him permission to be a dick with all other women, but it also doesn't give women permission to pry into his past and taunt him with it. I don't like this girl bitch session thing here. I've seen too many women act like this in my lifetime and really detest it when they do. But then again...it's only a story. I guess it just pushed a button of mine.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow he is in major denial what will snap him out of it
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love this. I think they need another screw session lmao. Love the chapter can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Jul 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
oooh yummy lemony time. They both have some issues to work through I think.
Date: 16 Jul 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
so yeah, that happened
Date: 16 Jul 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Were you implying that Bella was in fact a virgin???
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Author's Response:
Bella was not a virgin.
Date: 15 Jul 2017 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
They wont be able to keep there hands off each other they know they are good together ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
I hope they don't go back to treating each other like shit.
Date: 15 Jul 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another awesome chapter. Loved the lemon
Sherry.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
He better be nice and it better be a start of something she needs to apologize for her rudeness and leaving so he will soften up cause that was smokin hot
Date: 15 Jul 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Edward... 4 years?? What did she do to him?
Date: 15 Jul 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
sexquakes made by edward and bella and jasper and alice were felt in ontario hahahah jk
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
This was a great surprise!! I was expecting to have to wait for awhile for them to get to it but the earthquake seemed to speed things up nicely!
Date: 15 Jul 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow that was hot! this will change their relationship at work. maybe not at first, but how can it not? thanks for the chapter!
Date: 15 Jul 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
He was such a sweetheart... I picture their next meeting a huge fight actting like it didn't happen. But end up in the same bar with friends both end up shitface drunk and back at her place, where the ever loveable roommate just happens to catch Edward sneaking out or at least trying to, before he's busted. Well that's what I see
Date: 15 Jul 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh I love the explosive lemon. I hope there are many many many more.
Date: 14 Jul 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Holy snap wow what a way to end your shift but I have a feeling hypos is not a one time thing hehehehehe
Date: 14 Jul 2017 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
All right! We have LIPLOCK! Great story so far, as usual!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh YES finally
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Omg!!!!! Omg!!!! he goes from Dr. asshole to kissing Bella?!?!?! *Freaking out*
Date: 12 Jul 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
YEAH! THEY HAVE TOUCHED EACH OTHER.WILL IT TAKE 5 MORE CHAPTERS BEFORE THEY SPEAK IN SENTENCES TO EACH OTHER? THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
So all it took was a few "earthquakes " to bring them together???? I hope Bella doesn't push Edward away but....
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Date: 11 Jul 2017 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awe he is being so sweet FINALLY.
Date: 11 Jul 2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
He has to protect her and make her feel safe ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well, that one way to distract her. lol
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Freaking cliffie! Grrrr! I'm totally & officially hooked!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm itching to know their ages.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well that is one way to calm someone down Edward.... LOL
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Drunkella is going to be a hoot in the sack!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh the friction is soooo good!
Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh CRAP that's classic
Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
A significant chapter! I liked it a lot. I do have a question, but not about the chapter content, which was powerful and moving. It's about the stuff that comes between the end of the chapter and your A/N. There are 16 lines of what looks like programming code. I don't see this in anyone else's STARS postings. What is happening with yours. It's only in your stories.
Author's Response:
I don't know what that is and I don't know how to remove it ... I've recently gotten a new computer, but I don't know how that has anything to do with the random code.
Date: 11 Jul 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor little girl. Glad they had a truce. Was wondering who was going to kiss who first
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG I love the progress with these two!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my he kissed her now what hehehehehehe. Ore please
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow Skanya really screwed him over. Glad B went out with friends. Sadly dunno if that is the last we've heard from James.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2017 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I loved it wow what did Tanya do to him it had to be evil for him to be so extreme about women now what is next
Date: 10 Jul 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
well Tanya wins then. Edward you are dumb and grumpy.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is a new kind of Edward for you.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward needs a friend that is for sure. I think the big one is coming
Date: 08 Jul 2017 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Would love to know how you thought up that nickname ๐๐
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
I cracked up at the nickname Voldemont. Poor Edward, he does need to get laid. lol
Sherry
Date: 08 Jul 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just love where this is going so much I can't wait for more interaction between them
Date: 08 Jul 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Didn;t he recognize Bella's name when Jasper referred to his girlfriend's roommate? That's just what he needs. A blind date with Bella. What could Tanya have done to him to break him so fully? Must have been pretty bad.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wish Edward and Bella would at least get civil with each other. They were close this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm liking this Bella too.
Sherry
Date: 06 Jul 2017 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
He needed to get his ass chewed out. Bella is funny with a few drinks in her.
Date: 05 Jul 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE Snarky Bella
Date: 04 Jul 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. THANK YOU!
Date: 04 Jul 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow...what the heck did Tanya do to him....3 weeks?
Date: 04 Jul 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
well I am so glad we have a story where Bella is smart and strong. No doormat Bella in this story. thank you
Date: 04 Jul 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think there should be a few more rough spots and then have a moment that has them act out on impulse because of a hard case But then have that strange uncomfortable feeling of working together๐’–๐’–๐’–
Date: 04 Jul 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
Character ages noted. Are Jasper and Rosalie twins? I guess I'm thinking that because they usually are, but maybe not in your story. Well, well, well. Dr. Asshole actually apologized. Good for him. Electric zap upon handshake noted!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm not sure if he would have apologized if he didn't get caught. hmmmm.....
Date: 04 Jul 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
So he was burned by his fiancé Tanya. She must have been cheating on him and him finding out mist have been really, really bad. Maybe on his wedding day? I love this Bella. She is a no holds bar Linda of girl.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm.... Older group of characters and yet still act like kids. Good one.
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[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2017 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Definitely not love at first sight. lol. Looking forward to more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2017 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I'm on board this Shaky Ground.
Sherry
Date: 03 Jul 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bitch doesn't begin to cover her behavior.
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Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow. you've made Edward into a raging bitch. what gives? he has a history of hating women? is he gay? did someone hurt him in the past? he wasn't very professional, but Bella handled it well. the main thing was helping the patient, right? I'm not one to rag on Edward, but he was in the wrong. I wonder if he'll admit it. Thanks, this looks like I will enjoy reading it!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't remember reading this first chapter so I read it again. Chapter 2 posted couple days ago but I've been busy so today, Sunday, is a nice quiet, relatively cool day here and I'm going to catch up on my chapters. Edward seems like a nice, albeit a bit uptight, guy. Bella also seems pretty normal. Can't wait for them to meet! Thanks for ALL you give us, your readers!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I always love this Bella, the one that can speak for herself
Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow bella could have pulled him aside that was not cool
Date: 01 Jul 2017 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is a ass wow. Bella said she was sorry.
Date: 01 Jul 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love this empowered version of Bella!
Date: 01 Jul 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he is the stereotypical arse hat. I like that B doesn't take shit from Rose nor Edward.