Date: 03 Sep 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my gracious. Such exciting drama. This is better than any tv show!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Your really enjoying this aren't you???? Leaving us in shock amongst other emotions...... You she-devil you. (he he he)
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Date: 02 Sep 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMGOSH!!!!!!!! I am glad that Jake was with Bella when the earthquake happened. It was good for her to take care of him and not freak out. I can't believe that Jake watched his dad kill his mom. That is just awful. I hope his dad pays for everything that he has done.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh no, run edward!
Date: 02 Sep 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no. How are they going to get them out?
Date: 02 Sep 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Please post soon!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Sep 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor Jake, I hope his father goes to jail. About time Balla and Edward figured out the loved each other
Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
I don't know what to say. I'm so happy Edward didn't lose his memory & is on his way to Bella. I'm hoping Jacob will now be safe. I'm sorry Bella is hurt but I hope she's rescued soon.
Please don't make us wait - nothing like a natural disaster to put things into perspective
Date: 02 Sep 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
You and your cliffhangers are killing me! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope Edward or the rescuers get to them soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Get there Edward!! Write the next chapter stat!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
This was def. way worse than i expected!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
No don't leave us hanging like that...... great story!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm on tenterhooks π±
Date: 02 Sep 2017 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was a harrowing chapter! I'm glad Jake and Bella are together. I know someone will get to them soon. What a huge deal that Edward told his mother about Bella! Now if he can only tell her...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG.... Poor Jake. I needed a tissue warning. I love how determined Edward is about getting to Bella, but also concerned that he'll be injured more with the earth still shaking, and Jacob freaking out with Bella unconscious possibly reminding him of his mom. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh hell.... I don't know who is going to be tramatized more....Little Jake that witnessed a murder or Bella for hearing about it and the earthquake of course.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no will they find them will they be able to save her a Jake will Edward make it to her
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no will they find them will they be able to save her a Jake will Edward make it to her
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bow could you do that to me........poor jake ever so not patiently waiting for an update
Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG...this story went in a direction I wasn't expecting! Lol.. I thought for sure they would get the feels for each other by being trapped together.
I have to admit, I like the direction you took it MUCH better. Great 2 chapter update, can't wait for your next update
Date: 31 Aug 2017 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG Edward is hurt and after he relizes that he wants Bella in his life.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Of course Edward would finally fill his parents in on his heartbreak and the world literally shifts under his feet.
No amnesia, please.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
Since you created this drama it better be for the better for Edward and Isabella and hopefully he picks up his feelings for her and is thtu with the self deprecation over Tanya the bitch
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Baby steps for Edward. Their schedules may be more of a hindrance than their relationship fears at this point.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
As in Tanya? Gosh I hope not! Great story. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Edward. He deserves some happiness.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella to the rescue!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG NOOO!!!π±π¨π°π’
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella to the rescue!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my...the 1st step....I'll admit, a bit scared for Edward. I hope he remembers Bella & his group feelings for her.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Omg hope Edward is ok so happy he finally told his parents.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no!! I hope Edward is ok. I am glad that he finally told his parents what happened. Maybe now he can move forward. I also hope Bella is not freaking out to badly with this last quake.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope edward doesn't lose his memory about bella.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE THIS SO MUCH! THANK YOU
Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no. it is the bad one and he is no with her and now he is probably hurt.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well I'm glad that Bella figured things out and that Edward finally confessed to what had been done to him by Tanya to his parents.
Bella is going to be more freaked out by earth quakes since Edward got hurt by one.
If the bitch ends up in the emergency room, it would serve her right if no one treated her. grrrrr.......
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh, no! I hope Edward isn't hurt too badly. And how is Bella doing with the earthquake? I'm so proud of Edward for talking to his parents. Can't wait for the aftermath of all of this. Love this story. Til next time!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it wow Edward is ready to move on with Bella but oh snap the big one came is begging to be ok and what about Bella how bad will this freak her out
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
He's so close
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad he's falling. I'm like what she said about keeping a baby if they made one. I like that she told him she's not Tanya, reassuring him. Oh no! What happened to him? Is he OK? What a cliffie! Thanks this is an entertaining story!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my goodness!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
ohh... you better not make him lose his memory
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Have I mentioned how much I LOVE this fic?! Truly a favorite. Love the progression! Very natural, thoughtful. Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love it and hate it. I hope Edward is ok. Oh god he's going to have amnesia and forget about Bella. Oh please don't be that evil lol. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no. I hope he is ok
Date: 27 Aug 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
They've made love. I don't think they'll be able to turn back now. I'm sure things will be rocky but can't wait for them to open up more, especially Edward. Love this story
Date: 26 Aug 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter ! You write the best lemons! Keep up the great work !
Date: 26 Aug 2017 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
They are perfect together.
Date: 26 Aug 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love this chapter
Date: 26 Aug 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Very nice chapter. I like how, when they're in their own little bubble with each other, each is sweet and tender with the other. Outside of that, anything goes, it seems. I hope Jake doesn't go the way of Violet...
Date: 26 Aug 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
one night will not be enough
Date: 26 Aug 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter!! Edward is letting her in!! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2017 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad they are opening up to each other. Her birthday was really good for edward. A few more bricks fell off his wall.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2017 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the sexy times in this chapter. I feel it may be the calm before the storm. You never disappoint Josie.
Sherry
Date: 26 Aug 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh boy, more shaking to come
loving it, keep it coming
Date: 26 Aug 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow that was big for them it's a start to something more I loved it
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
As a former teacher, I identify with that helpless feeling that you can't do enough for a child who is hurting or being abused. I hated that.
Just as long as Bella and Edward are both moving in the direction of together, it's great.
Date: 26 Aug 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Don't break his heart but I don't think she will.
btw - imo, child rapists should be castrated & done to them what they did to the innocents, then left to rot.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
I so want these 2 together they are perfect for each others keep it coming
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another great chapter. I'm proud of Edward for opening up as much as he did. Bella is a miracle worker, she'll chop that wall down in no time. Josie you're a lemon queen - you know just the right amount to give us. This may be awful to say, but I hope Tanya doesn't get her happy ever after with Demetri. She doesn't deserve a husband, kids, or the white picket fence.
I'm wondering though how Edward would react if Bella accidentally got pregnant. Not good I imagine.
Sherry
Date: 22 Aug 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Very nice! I hope he lets her in. I think he won't be sorry. Thanks for the lemony goodness. Hope you are doing ok with the start of school. I know my daughter gets tired until she gets used to the schedule again after the summer off...
Date: 22 Aug 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
aw, she is breaking down his walls, sweet and sexy times!
keep it coming
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Leaving his mark on her maks me so hopeful!
Date: 22 Aug 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
good story so far.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah!! When will that pesky "wall" come down????? Soon I hope!!!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah!! When will that pesky "wall" come down????? Soon I hope!!!
READ YOU SOON
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
I feel like Edward is getting close to revealing everything to Bella and maybe start trusting her. Hopefully he will tell his mom about slutty Tanya as well.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Just one night? Highly unlikely.
This will change both of them irrevocably.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
A moment to decompress for each of the doctors.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Will Jake survive the neglect?
Date: 22 Aug 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes please. Seconds are always appreciated.
Date: 22 Aug 2017 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Such a hot sweet chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
I loved it well he let her in a little more will she let him in
Date: 22 Aug 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward's wall is slowly coming down.
Date: 22 Aug 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter ! Can't wait to read more. Addicted to this story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Damn.....I think I need a drink & a cig....neither of which I usually do!
Date: 22 Aug 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well, I need a shower after that! Edward's wall is starting to crumble. He's gonna continue to lie to himself and to Bella for now, but she's definitely breaking down his walls! Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved it!
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
He is breaking all of the rules and she is loving it ;0
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved the happy-go-lucky feeling they have here. Edward should come clean with his parents so they know why he's been so miserable for so long.
Sherry
Date: 20 Aug 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Jake they need to find him.
Date: 20 Aug 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is finding not all wemon are the same.
Date: 20 Aug 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
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Date: 20 Aug 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Glad Edward went to her party. Glad Jasper got him to dance. Loved the bet between Edward and Bella.
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a fun birthday! I love that Edward is there and his friends are there and he's ok with it. It's progress! Very much looking forward to their night of uninterrupted smexy time!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sorry I missed a few chapters I just got caught up . I love this story. But I DON'T love earthquakes. I agree with Bella on that subject. Looking forward to the bet payoff! Keep up the great work !