Date: 18 Sep 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
:O :O holy shite
Date: 18 Sep 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
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Date: 18 Sep 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
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Date: 17 Sep 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hooray she's awake and they love each other!!
Date: 17 Sep 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
So far so good. But Bella's recovery is going to take time. A long time.
Now that Jake, Bella, and Edward are all mending, what's the story with all their friends back in Seattle?
Can't wait to meet Dr. Charles Swan and Edward's parents.
Date: 17 Sep 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG that was so sweet they both are giving me a tooth acke lol. Loved it and Charlie is the best.
Date: 16 Sep 2017 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wonderful news, wonderful chapter! They both professed their feelings and intentions! I love that! Everything is turning out good. Will we see Jake's father again? Will he try to get Jake back? I hope not. I am also wondering if they will stay in Portland. Seems like a good fit. Thanks, I love the good stuff here...
Date: 16 Sep 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so happy the I Love You'd have been said
Date: 16 Sep 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yet another great chapter, so enjoying this story at the minute, please update soon x
Date: 16 Sep 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 16 Sep 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad that Edward and Bella are on the same page. If Charlie is going to tease and slightly banter with Bella and Edward, I'm going to like him.
In near future I see them attending funerals, emotional and physical therapy and maybe court if they find Jake's dad. They have a lot to deal with.
Date: 16 Sep 2017 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
Aww... I'm teary eyes that they finally revealed their feelings. I want more from Charlie. He's so awesome. Poor Jake, the kid needs some stability and love. Is it bad I'm wanting his dad lost in the rubble of the earthquake.
Sherry
Date: 16 Sep 2017 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wooo Hooo!!!! FINALLY!!! They love each other. Poor Jacob... I'm so glad Esme and Carlisle care for him. Will they be staying in Portland????
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Date: 16 Sep 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awe Edward is so sweet with Jake and Bella is awake and the said they love each other so sweet and now daddy's there
Date: 16 Sep 2017 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
ha! too funny
go edwad, get your girl!
Date: 16 Sep 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Cant wait to hear about charlie.
Date: 16 Sep 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Can't wait for more
Date: 16 Sep 2017 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yes, now moving on...
Happy writing..
Date: 16 Sep 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
I am so happy they were able to tell each other their feelings. I can't wait to hear from Charlie.
Date: 16 Sep 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Omg!!great writing love it!
Date: 16 Sep 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love love love this story!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ily's were exchanged!! Yay! I know she's injured but let the love bloom!
Date: 16 Sep 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Such a great update
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella squeezed his hand so did she hear him? So glad that Jake will be with Esme and Carlisle. What has happened to Jake's father.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it, update soon please!@!!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2017 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awe, I like how you're bringing all the characters
Together in this story. Where are Emmett, Rose
Alice and Jasper? Update soon!
Date: 12 Sep 2017 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love it Love it Love it.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
My goodness everything is up in the air where will everyone end up after all is said d and done
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
My goodness everything is up in the air where will everyone end up after all is said d and done
Date: 12 Sep 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
We the kindness of everyone, I think this was one of the better pay it forward chapters I've ever read.
Sherry
Date: 12 Sep 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
I was hoping Edward and Bela could keep Jake but I think Esme will be good for him and hopefully can adopt him.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope bella remembers him while she was under.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yay, Jake will be placed with Esme and Carlisle.
Charlie will probably want Bella to return to Florida. Will Edward's parents request he move back home as well?
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
oh my, lots of movement, glad edward is letting more in, bella opened his floodgates!
keep it coming
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love it. Im so glad jake will stay with esme.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love it, naturally!
Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
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Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hopefully Jake's abusers think Jake is dead at the moment and won't come looking. If Edward starts woring at the new hospital, I hope Bella will too after her physical therapy. It might take her a while though.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
Killing me so slowly.. LOL
on pins and needles here..
Happy writing.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
Omg love it!! Can she wake up soon
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
Excellent chapter. Bella and Edward would fit I great in the new hospital. It would be fantastic if Esme and Carlisle adopted Jake.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Another fabulous chapter! I love how this story is unfolding. As always, I'm feeling greedy for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
I see a move in his future and a new job at their place...Bella too, I'm thinking. They'll make a nice family group with Carlisle, Esme, and Jacob. I'm envisioning a happy ending. All this trauma and angst makes me shaky, so I need to do that. Thanks!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
So glad Edward took Jake with them.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Dude. This just keeps getting better. Next chapter? Soon? Yes... I know... I'm being
greedy again. But I LOVE this fic!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love them all OMG
Date: 09 Sep 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Will Jake find a home with Esme and Carlisle Cullen or with with Edward and Bella?
How long before Bella is released into Edward's care?
Will Bella want to move back to Florida?
Date: 09 Sep 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
Maybe carlisle & esme will adopt jake.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh man, I dying for Edward to confess his love to Bella. Everyone else knows but her. Jake breaks my heart. Poor kid needs some love and stability.
Sherry
Date: 09 Sep 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh man this wait is killing me...
happy writing.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
oh the drama! gah! more!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Such a thrilling story.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Jake is probably freaking out being taken away from Edward and Bella. I'm glad that Edward got a hold of Charlie and his parents.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
At least she's got a fighting chance now that she is getting medical care. What will happen to Jake? I want Bella and Edward to adopt him! In this story is Edward related to the Cullens? Good drama here. I hope it ends well...
Author's Response:
Edward is NOT related to the Cullens. They are just good samaritans, taking in Edward and Jake, who were displaced by the quake.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
No chance for a baby Masen???????๐ผ At least thre safe. ๐ฅ
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Date: 09 Sep 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh my will Bella be ok will they be able to save her leg will Jake be safe from his father and others. I loved it
Date: 08 Sep 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
:O :O :O :O :O
Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
I just caught up on this story and I love it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
Was just checking for the next update...up..date...
Soon...lol ( a few chapters I can read during the storm)
:-)
Date: 07 Sep 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
This is so exciting! I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2017 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
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Date: 06 Sep 2017 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awe, love it! He found her....
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
damn, lots of drama! keep it coming
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Will Edward's parents take temporary custody Jake? Since Bella and Edward are injured; essentially out of commission.
Let's hope Jake's father didn't survive the earth quake.
Will Bella's left leg survive a twenty-four plus hour crushing injury?
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was one massive earth quake if the aftershocks were as strong as the initial. Seattle should be an island at this point.
Date: 05 Sep 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
My heart breaks for little Jake! But I'm so proud of him and how he's dealt with this and in trying to take care of Bella! I'm glad they found her. Can't wait for more!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
Omg!! Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can't wait til their I live you'd and the sex after
Date: 05 Sep 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
Everyone has to have been so afraid. I hope Jake's family were killed in the quake. Does that make me a bad person. It should have been those evil fuckers instead of Riley.
Date: 05 Sep 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
OMGOSH!!! I can not imagine going through such devastation. So glad Edward got to her. I'm sad that Riley died.
Date: 05 Sep 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yes yes yes!!
More please!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
OMG I am in tears so happy they found her and little Jacob what a brave little boy. Edward is a man on a mission love it
Date: 05 Sep 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
This chapter was awesome!!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
He has to get her out of there as much for her sake as his own!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my!!! More please. This is awesome.
Date: 05 Sep 2017 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad they finally admitted how they feel... now only if they'll do it to each other. I hope all of our favorites make it back safely.
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh wow he found them now will they get them out I loved it
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh wow he found them now will they get them out I loved it
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
As cruel as it may sound, Jakey's abusers should be lost in the aftermath. Poor Riley, another tear-jerker moment. Jakey is Bella's hero, as well as Edward. I'm anxious to read more. I think it's time Edward/Bella packed up and moved to a less dangerous area with Jakey.
Sherry
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
I live in the Los Angeles area and have been through several major earthquakes in my lifetime. This chapter is harrowing and scary. I'm sad that Riley died but glad they found Bella in time to save her life. Her leg might be a different story. Yikes. What I read affects me a lot. Don't know why but it does...
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
I live in the Los Angeles area and have been through several major earthquakes in my lifetime. This chapter is harrowing and scary. I'm sad that Riley died but glad they found Bella in time to save her life. Her leg might be a different story. Yikes. What I read affects me a lot. Don't know why but it does...
Date: 03 Sep 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
They love each other! Now they need to tell each other! I hope that Jake's dad doesn't steal him away again. Next time Jake might not make it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 03 Sep 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
โค๏ธ Don't leave us hanging. This was awesome.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMFG NOOOOOOOO Edward is going to get to her he loves her and she loves him OMG Cant wait for them to rescue them. Jake's sperm donner is going down if the quake didnt kill him first.