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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

Jake is quickly learn from the Cullens when and how to care for a loved one. It was indeed adorable how he questioned Edward about the date and a future together.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 32

Stubbornness will take Bella through the roughest parts of her path to recovery.
Esme and Elizabeth are a super duo when it comes to taking care of their loved ones.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 32

nice update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 32

Well Bella is on the right track to getting better in all ways I loved it 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 32

Edward is trying so hard. I hope he has found a therapist. He needs to heal as much as Bella, so they can be strong for each other.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 32

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 32

I am so happy they are all getting help and really starting to heal.  Looking forward to the date cant wait.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 32

I'm glad that they seem to be weathering things together.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 32

Slowly but surely things seem to be looking up for Bella.

Sherry

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 32

Read You Soon

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 32

Good to see Bella progressing, albeit slowly. Very good to see Jake adjusting so well! Good riddance to Jake's dad. I don't know how Eleazar can think so ill of a child of his, no matter what she did. She was still his baby...I wouldn't want my children to hate me just because of some awful things I'd done, and I've done a bit of damage in my life. It pushes my buttons to think they would.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

Another great chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

It is for the best that they no longer have a hospital or want to live in Seatle. The management is a bunch of jerks. Edward and Bella will be better off without them.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 31

Keep on writing

Reviewer: Shiko Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have read all your fanfics, and they always amaze me! Keep up the good work! Great chapter, and thanks for keeping  up with this work and updating so quickly!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 31

nice update

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31

Terrible place that Bella is in. I'm not sure Elizabeth will be able to help her. Liz is a bit of a bitch. I could pat Edward on the back for sticking to his guns and what needs to be done.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 31

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 31

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 31

Edward is the man love that man OMG.  Bella is having a bad time she needs help.  I hope Elizabeth will be gental but get through to Bella.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 31

Both of them working at OHSU would be beneficial for Bella but also might be a detriment to her self-reliance.
She has a lot of physical healing and rehabilitation to focus on now. Maybe consultating on cases, as soon as her license to practice in Oregon is available, will be a way to help her heal emotionally as well.
Bella was shafted, and a lawyer needs to weigh in on her wrongful termination.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 31

I liked how Edward handled everything.  But I'm nervous about Elizabeth butting in and thinking SHE needs to be the one to help Bella when she has just enflamed her issues.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

How they treated Bella really pisses me off! I wish she would sue for wrongful termination, but I think it's more important for her to release the past, heal from her earthquake trauma, and begin her life with Edward in Portland. Thanks for a lovely chapter!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 31

Poor Bella the fear was to much and Edward he has a beautiful heart 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella really needs help. I hope we see more interaction with Jake. I miss him and his happiness. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

Very good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

Bella sure has a lot going on she needs to deal with. Elizabeth... she needs to let go. Loved Charile getting back on her. Edward and Bella need some one on one time. IDK, but I think Bella may benefit more, mentally and physically, if she did live with Edward.

Sherry

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 30

We are def. in need of lemonade!! 3 or 4 gallons worth!! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 30

Elizabeth needs to bend over backwards and suck up to Edward's woman. Her very clinical approach to questioning Bella was inappropriate for the casual setting. Charlie could have taken it a bit further as Bella's father. Edward definitely should have ripped into his mother. Elizabeth walked away from that situation unscathed.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 30

They  need a little alone time. It has been awhile. The need to celebrate.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 30

READ YOU SOON 🌡

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 30

His mom means well but shit not cool

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

nice updates

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

Elizabeth kind of pushed.  You would think a professional would realize that.  hmp.....   I can imagine that Bella feels as if she is going to get left behind.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm glad that Edward and Bella are going to see someone about their problems.  

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yeah, Elizabeth overstepped her bounds in this area. She can't expect to shrink everyone, especially not family or those so close to family, like Bella. I do hope they work it out. Seems like she has been doing this for a while, though, hence her own son's hesitancy to confide to her about his problems. We shall see. Maybe she can change. Bella has a long road ahead of her to heal her leg. I hope she makes it ok. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it more please

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella needs the extra help right now. She can move in with Edward in the Spring when they can find a house to have together. She needs to heal as does Edward.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 29

Awe she has so much love surrounding her she will be better in no time 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 29

They have a lot to be thankful for.

Sherry

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Love this story !   Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella is really struggling 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 29

I want them to have some smooth sailing.  They haven't had that yet!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

I love the infinity necklace! I have two of them myself!!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 29

Love it 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 29

There is a lot of healing yet to do.  Not sad that Tanya and that Black bastard is dead.  Edward takes such good care of her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 29

Good riddance to Tanya. Renee is not even worth mentioning. I'm glad everyone else is getting on with their lives. What about Jake's dad? Was he ever found? Not that it matters...he is with Carlisle and Esme now. Thanks!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 29

Even though everyone is aafe, I understand Bella feels like a leech and like crap.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

If Bella is sad that she'll miss Edward why not move in with him??? HELLOOOOOOO!!!!!! They!  Are!!! ADULTS!!! with careers.....not jobs. In what book does it say there's a time frame you have to pass in order to live together?????

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 29

The aftermath of the earthquake is still front and center of everyone's life right now. After routines settle in, the tension and frustrating of Bella's limits will become a source of confrontation. She will need to begin her counseling around that timeframe.
Jake is a lucky boy;and better off without his brutal father.
Thanks for the nice ending to Tanya.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it as always

Reviewer: ChloeMacManus Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

💙

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 28

I can't believe the hospital did wbat they did. Love the necklace. Can't wait to read more about interaction with Edward, Bella, and Jake. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

I hope Bella realizes that they can live together as a couple while he is healing emotionally and her physically. They are stronger together.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 28

So good.great update 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

Will Esme find a way to have both Edward and Bella on staff?
Maybe it would be better for Bella to work at a different hospital though.
Charlie is going to want his daughter to move back to Florida.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

nice update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 28

That was cold for them to let her go after all she has went through even though I know others have the right to be there to it just sucks.  Edward is my hero love him

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 28

Good so all is moving forward.  New home. I would consider that earthquake mess. ugh

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella's life is literally standing on shaky ground. There's no certainly in their lives, only they love each other.

Sherry

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow that was harsh but the hospital is no more but now Edward and Bella have their new starting point I loved it 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 28

Sometimes jumping in is worth it.

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 28

Great update!

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

Everything about that situation would be so difficult.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Despite all that has happened to them, this chapter reveals a willingness and a need, on both their parts, to be together. That's all that matters. They will figure the rest out as they go. I know they will. Wonderful, gripping story. Thanks!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

I FLOVE this story!!! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 27

No it's not too soon. She nees to shack up with him!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 26

I hope he gets to give her that sponge bath!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

I think carma has told them what to do.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 27

Who's to say there's a time frame that determines when it's ok to live together.  My husband proposed 15 days after we met and here we are 41years later and I still love him and have never regretted my decision. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 27

Nope, not too soon!! 

One of my favorites 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2017 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 27

Another great chapter. Jake had me tearing up a bit with his reunion with Bella. I loved Charlie getting in that nurse's ass. It may be a little too soon for E/B to move in together now, but now for much longer. I adore Charlie's devotaion to his daughter, but Renee is a waste of space.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 27

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

Yeah! Bella is awake and snarky as ever. She has a long way to go to get back on her feet, but she has help and she has so much love around her. They just need to have a new start in Oregon. Edward sell that house.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 25

Charlie is being too cute.

Reviewer: Geminiroyalty Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

Enjoying the story...can’t wait to read more

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

oh love charlie too

you got this edward!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 26

Charlie is a wonderful mix of snarly comments (for his ex)and tender compassion.
He and Edward will get along fine.
I'm intrigued by all the parental figures getting to know each other. That includes Carlisle and Esme.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

Charlie arrived at the most inopportune time, but he deserved to see his baby girl. I adore these characters.

Sherry

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 26

nice update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love it Charlie is the boom love him he loves his little girl so much and is not afraid to show it.  I am glad he went to talk to Edward that was cool.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love that CHarlie is being all Daddy protective. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love papa bear charlie!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

I loved it I love this Charlie he is awesome and damn Edward is telling her his past that is big

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

I can't wait for Bella to be reunited with Jake. Glad Charlie and Edward are getting along. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 26

Wonderful chapter. Full of good, or going to be good, stuff. I like Charlie. I've gotta go back and read Edward and Tanya's story in chapter 11 so it's fresh in my mind. Thanks!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

I do hope Charlie doesn't get too over protective or intrusive on Bella and Edward.  Bella is going to be pissed when she hears Edward's story.  She might want to kill Tanya more than Edward.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 26

I get Charlie's reaction but Edward is the man for her.

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

I need to see the word next at the bottom.. I know I just

Read this chapter now, but I need an update already!!

Lol, love the story

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

Very good can't wait for the next update

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