Date: 29 Nov 2019 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love this story. Is wrong for me to say, I hope Jacob is some one woman in prison.
Date: 29 Nov 2019 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love this story. Is wrong for me to say, I hope Jacob is some one woman in prison.
Date: 28 Aug 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
It’s a great story I hope your going to write a sequel
Date: 11 Aug 2019 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great story, now onto the sequel
Date: 12 May 2019 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for your thoughts and your great work. I feel honored. Please keep going!
Date: 12 May 2019 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you so much for this story!
Date: 12 May 2019 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
I absolutely love this story, I'm feeling with all of the characters and I am very happy about the love they found! It's great that You mentioned therapy. I think they need some outside counseling to get through everything that has happened to them and to move on and to build adequate relationships to Charlie, Sue and the boys' sisters. Yet this story more and more becomes a fairy tale. I knoe that most of fanfiction stories are kind of fairy tales for adults yet I appreciate it when they are as realistic as possible. But now: Edward and Bella manage everything and are never stressed out. Who would put a move the day after their best friends ' wedding while having two kids and two very demanding jobs? How did Leah get the address of Bella's apartment when even Charlie hasn't got it? And why doesn't she have any friends she can trust so that she turns to Bella? I appreciate that she does but I find it hard to understand.
I love your work and I'm happy you post it here so we can read Your thoughts, stories and dream aboutwhat their lives could be. Sorry for my criticism. t
Author's Response:
I love that you have questions, and no one in their right mind would but most of the items were already moved it was more last minute items and movers were coming to get them.
Leah knew where she lived becuase of public record. Bella will never have a decent relastionship with Charlie, she would become closer to Leah than anyone. She would go to Leah because Jake drove all her friends away leaving her alone and she hoped that Bella would understand. At that moment in time Leah was lost and Bella was the closest to her.
I never put the stressed out situations in the story, there are alot of them its only natural. I am working on the sequel to this story where I show the stress and what real life is like.
Thank you so much for reading and leaving reviews! I love reading them.
Date: 12 May 2019 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
Go for gold, Lucian! He is so smart and so protective of ective of his family. He puts Kate in his place without any effort! Great!
Date: 11 May 2019 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally Charlie tells his story. I understand Bella's reaction. She must be do angry. It will take a lot to forgive him - if she will ever be able to do it. But she is strong and Charlie is weak Perhaps she will be able to do what he could not do and reach out to him.
Date: 11 May 2019 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes!!! They are together again!!!
Date: 11 May 2019 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward lied by not telling Bella the whole story about the building and it bites him in the ass (even though I think she should have figured it out from the beginning). Bella is deeply conflicted. But she trusts him still. I hope they will find Lucian soon and nothing has happened to him!
Date: 11 May 2019 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved this chapter! Thank you!!!
Date: 11 May 2019 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Jake is a real low life. I wonder if he's still clean or carries his share of STDs. At least Charlie has changed... But why did he never try to contact Bella and apologize to her and her children? Aren't they important to him?
Edward is great, both boys want him as dad!
Date: 11 May 2019 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Damon is great! Way to go, kid!!!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love the way Edward acts! To Bella, he is already her confident and partner, even if she doesn't verbalize it. And Edward thinks of Bella the same way, he even talks with Lucien about his feelings for her. That talk was wonderful! Thank you!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! The meeting-the - parents isn't awkward at all, but then there are Sue and Leah. What a mess!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward and Bella already act as a couple without even realizing it. I love it!
I can understand that Bella is hesitant to press charges against Jake. She always wanted him to come back. Now she has to face the harsh reality about him and has to decide whether she wants to break every connection to him once and for all by getting back to him. He deserves it, that's not the question. Yet it's a tough decision for her.
Thank you for this chapter!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for this chapter!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am happy for Bella and the new apartment! But I don't get her. She is smart so she has to know that an apartment that big in a building with a doorman situated in an upscale area must cost much more than 500 $ rent monthly. Why doesn't she ask Edward about his motivations? I don't distrust him, but I can't understand why she trusts him so completely and why she is so naive.
Date: 11 May 2019 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love the way Bella got Irina the internship!
Date: 11 May 2019 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love the way Edward and Emmett are with Lucien and Damon!
Date: 11 May 2019 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is it Jake's handwriting? Did he bring over the papers? Did he go into the apartment and took Bella's money? I hope not! Thanks for the practice! I love the way Edward, Emmett and Jasper work with children of their quarter!
Date: 11 May 2019 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Has there ever been a decent man in Bella's life? As far as we know Seth is the only one. Poor Bella! At least she has Tanya, Irina and her boys.
Date: 11 May 2019 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for Edward's point of view. He isn't such a douche... And yeah, he is definitely interested in Bella. But I don't think she is one to trust easily and her boys dislike Edward already. That's gonna be tough for him.
Date: 11 May 2019 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! Edward seems to be a real douche, but the tip is very generous. Let's hope there is Moore to him than his mockery!
Date: 23 Jun 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can't stop reading your stories
Date: 25 May 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
I enjoyed your story very much. Bella was such a tenacious mother. Edward was her perfect partner. He somehow seemed to know what she needed, when she needed it and did his best to make sure she received it. They were perfect together.
I enjoyed reading Tanya in a different light. I have a lesbian niece and you nailed her character. There are so many misconceptions about a gay lifestyle.
And Jacob, well I don't believe I'll ever be able to read a "good" Jacob without wondereing what his motives are. I am such an E&B woman!
Thank you for writing for our fandom. I appreciate you gifting them to our fandom. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Date: 27 Mar 2018 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
this was great
Date: 25 Mar 2018 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope you write more stories.
Date: 15 Mar 2018 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
What a wonderful story! Thank you.
Date: 24 Feb 2018 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! Brought tears to my eyes.
Date: 19 Feb 2018 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
loved this story
Date: 04 Jan 2018 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great Story I love your writing
Date: 30 Nov 2017 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
This was a wonderful story! I am glad Bella got her HEA! Thank you for sharing!
Date: 23 Nov 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
aww, noo, it's can't be over! I really really loved this story. You did a wonderful job on it!
Author's Response:
Awe! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 23 Nov 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
It was a great ride! I look forward to the next ride!
READ YOU SOON🌺
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Date: 23 Nov 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet ending. TY for writing nd sharing
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 23 Nov 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love the way this ended, they are doing good works and they're happy. I'm excited for your new story!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 23 Nov 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am so sad this is over but so excited for the next one. Thanks so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 23 Nov 2017 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved this story and the ending is perfect! Can't wait to read your new story.
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Thank you
Date: 23 Nov 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have loved loved loved this story. Thank you for sharing it with her.
Author's Response:
Thank You!!
Date: 23 Nov 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved it wow they are so happy with a full house just as it should be
thank you for all the time effort and imagination that goes into every story you write
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 17 Nov 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Jake is such a scum sucker bottom feeder OMFG baby raper I hope he gets all that is coming to him. That was so cool of a proposal shock loved it
Author's Response:
Jake will get whats coming to him. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 17 Nov 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Another awesome chapter!!!!!! I feel sorry for Leah but I am so glad that she caught Jake and got the cops involved. I hope he pays for everything.
Author's Response:
I know Leah got a bad hand, and he will. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
😂 PERFECT!!! So the end is near... 😩
READ YOU SOON : )
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Thank you for reading and Reviewing!
Date: 16 Nov 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Really, really sweet wedding. Can’t wait for our couple to be married.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 16 Nov 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it so fun sweet and caring but also hope Jack will get what’s coming to him
Author's Response:
He will. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 16 Nov 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Billy needs to be held liable for bailing out his pedophile son. Poor Leah. Glad Sue and Charlie came for her at least.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 16 Nov 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved this chapter! So sweet, but poor Leah, I hope Jake gets his in prison
Date: 13 Nov 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
It sounds like the perfect Christmas, and I'm jealous of the house.
Date: 13 Nov 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
I've got to look at the site again, there wasn't anything there the last time.
Lucian deserves the biggest party ever. Kate is ridiculous.
Author's Response:
Yes there is stuff there now an forms you can fill out to be affliated and add to the phonebook lol. Thank you!
Date: 13 Nov 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can't remember if I've reviewed this chapter! Charlie is a piece of work after all these years.
Date: 12 Nov 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh but I don't want it to end
Date: 11 Nov 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Sequel..... Please!!!!
READ YOU SOON
Date: 10 Nov 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Nice. Will miss this family's
Author's Response:
Me too. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Nov 2017 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love it!
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Nov 2017 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh I loved what a great Christmas for all of them
Author's Response:
Yes!Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Nov 2017 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, eventful Christmas.
Author's Response:
Yes, i love it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Nov 2017 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow what a place. Adoption love it the boys are so ready to be a offical big happy family. When are Edward and Bella going to tie the knot?
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Nov 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love how much Abe has grown. Glad she can go with her but and not her wallet. Awww for engagement
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Date: 09 Nov 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 09 Nov 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
I don't want it to end!
Author's Response:
I know. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
Such a great story. I hope you write more
Date: 06 Nov 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
So wow...holy time jump, batman...excited for them to begin life as a family!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
I will check out the new site. Always looking for recommendations. This story has been great. Loving your Momella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
I will check out the new site. Always looking for recommendations. This story has been great. Loving your Momella.
Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Enjoyable. Thanks
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Nov 2017 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love it they are a family. Kate is crazy I dont think she is done yet.
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Nov 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love that he called him Dad in front of the ex!
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Nov 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved this chapter. Glad the boys are starting to call Edward Dad.
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Date: 02 Nov 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm on my way to check out that site : ) Such a sweet chapter. They are!!! a family in every way that counts. I'd really like to see Bella claim her man and put Kate in her place. ( he he he)
READ YOU SOON : )
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!, I hope you enjoy the site.