Date: 12 May 2019 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
I absolutely love this story, I'm feeling with all of the characters and I am very happy about the love they found! It's great that You mentioned therapy. I think they need some outside counseling to get through everything that has happened to them and to move on and to build adequate relationships to Charlie, Sue and the boys' sisters. Yet this story more and more becomes a fairy tale. I knoe that most of fanfiction stories are kind of fairy tales for adults yet I appreciate it when they are as realistic as possible. But now: Edward and Bella manage everything and are never stressed out. Who would put a move the day after their best friends ' wedding while having two kids and two very demanding jobs? How did Leah get the address of Bella's apartment when even Charlie hasn't got it? And why doesn't she have any friends she can trust so that she turns to Bella? I appreciate that she does but I find it hard to understand.
I love your work and I'm happy you post it here so we can read Your thoughts, stories and dream aboutwhat their lives could be. Sorry for my criticism. t
I love that you have questions, and no one in their right mind would but most of the items were already moved it was more last minute items and movers were coming to get them.
Leah knew where she lived becuase of public record. Bella will never have a decent relastionship with Charlie, she would become closer to Leah than anyone. She would go to Leah because Jake drove all her friends away leaving her alone and she hoped that Bella would understand. At that moment in time Leah was lost and Bella was the closest to her.
I never put the stressed out situations in the story, there are alot of them its only natural. I am working on the sequel to this story where I show the stress and what real life is like.
Thank you so much for reading and leaving reviews! I love reading them.
Date: 11 May 2019 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally Charlie tells his story. I understand Bella's reaction. She must be do angry. It will take a lot to forgive him - if she will ever be able to do it. But she is strong and Charlie is weak Perhaps she will be able to do what he could not do and reach out to him.
Date: 11 May 2019 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward lied by not telling Bella the whole story about the building and it bites him in the ass (even though I think she should have figured it out from the beginning). Bella is deeply conflicted. But she trusts him still. I hope they will find Lucian soon and nothing has happened to him!
Date: 11 May 2019 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Jake is a real low life. I wonder if he's still clean or carries his share of STDs. At least Charlie has changed... But why did he never try to contact Bella and apologize to her and her children? Aren't they important to him?
Edward is great, both boys want him as dad!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love the way Edward acts! To Bella, he is already her confident and partner, even if she doesn't verbalize it. And Edward thinks of Bella the same way, he even talks with Lucien about his feelings for her. That talk was wonderful! Thank you!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward and Bella already act as a couple without even realizing it. I love it!
I can understand that Bella is hesitant to press charges against Jake. She always wanted him to come back. Now she has to face the harsh reality about him and has to decide whether she wants to break every connection to him once and for all by getting back to him. He deserves it, that's not the question. Yet it's a tough decision for her.
Thank you for this chapter!
Date: 11 May 2019 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am happy for Bella and the new apartment! But I don't get her. She is smart so she has to know that an apartment that big in a building with a doorman situated in an upscale area must cost much more than 500 $ rent monthly. Why doesn't she ask Edward about his motivations? I don't distrust him, but I can't understand why she trusts him so completely and why she is so naive.
Date: 11 May 2019 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is it Jake's handwriting? Did he bring over the papers? Did he go into the apartment and took Bella's money? I hope not! Thanks for the practice! I love the way Edward, Emmett and Jasper work with children of their quarter!
Date: 11 May 2019 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for Edward's point of view. He isn't such a douche... And yeah, he is definitely interested in Bella. But I don't think she is one to trust easily and her boys dislike Edward already. That's gonna be tough for him.
Date: 25 May 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
I enjoyed your story very much. Bella was such a tenacious mother. Edward was her perfect partner. He somehow seemed to know what she needed, when she needed it and did his best to make sure she received it. They were perfect together.
I enjoyed reading Tanya in a different light. I have a lesbian niece and you nailed her character. There are so many misconceptions about a gay lifestyle.
And Jacob, well I don't believe I'll ever be able to read a "good" Jacob without wondereing what his motives are. I am such an E&B woman!
Thank you for writing for our fandom. I appreciate you gifting them to our fandom. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Date: 17 Nov 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Jake is such a scum sucker bottom feeder OMFG baby raper I hope he gets all that is coming to him. That was so cool of a proposal shock loved it
Jake will get whats coming to him. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 17 Nov 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Another awesome chapter!!!!!! I feel sorry for Leah but I am so glad that she caught Jake and got the cops involved. I hope he pays for everything.
I know Leah got a bad hand, and he will. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Nov 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
I've got to look at the site again, there wasn't anything there the last time.
Lucian deserves the biggest party ever. Kate is ridiculous.
Yes there is stuff there now an forms you can fill out to be affliated and add to the phonebook lol. Thank you!
Date: 02 Nov 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm on my way to check out that site : ) Such a sweet chapter. They are!!! a family in every way that counts. I'd really like to see Bella claim her man and put Kate in her place. ( he he he)
READ YOU SOON : )
Thank you for reading and reviewing!, I hope you enjoy the site.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
I wouldn't be so quick to forgive Charlie either. Only thing I can think of is he a)thought Jake would step up if he backed out or b) he was embarrassed. Regardless, lame ass father. I get the Lucian/Damon interaction at the end. My full sister and I were in that situation. I was older and understood more of what was going on and refused to be manipulated whereas she did. Sad what people do these days to innocent kids.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Why did Charlie never try to find Bella after he sobered up? He could have with all his police connections.
Only Charlie knows why he didint. I might do an outtake in his POV. I am still pondering the Idea. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!