Date: 25 May 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
I enjoyed your story very much. Bella was such a tenacious mother. Edward was her perfect partner. He somehow seemed to know what she needed, when she needed it and did his best to make sure she received it. They were perfect together.
I enjoyed reading Tanya in a different light. I have a lesbian niece and you nailed her character. There are so many misconceptions about a gay lifestyle.
And Jacob, well I don't believe I'll ever be able to read a "good" Jacob without wondereing what his motives are. I am such an E&B woman!
Thank you for writing for our fandom. I appreciate you gifting them to our fandom. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Date: 17 Nov 2017 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Jake is such a scum sucker bottom feeder OMFG baby raper I hope he gets all that is coming to him. That was so cool of a proposal shock loved it
Jake will get whats coming to him. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 17 Nov 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Another awesome chapter!!!!!! I feel sorry for Leah but I am so glad that she caught Jake and got the cops involved. I hope he pays for everything.
I know Leah got a bad hand, and he will. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Nov 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
I've got to look at the site again, there wasn't anything there the last time.
Lucian deserves the biggest party ever. Kate is ridiculous.
Yes there is stuff there now an forms you can fill out to be affliated and add to the phonebook lol. Thank you!
Date: 02 Nov 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm on my way to check out that site : ) Such a sweet chapter. They are!!! a family in every way that counts. I'd really like to see Bella claim her man and put Kate in her place. ( he he he)
READ YOU SOON : )
Thank you for reading and reviewing!, I hope you enjoy the site.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
I wouldn't be so quick to forgive Charlie either. Only thing I can think of is he a)thought Jake would step up if he backed out or b) he was embarrassed. Regardless, lame ass father. I get the Lucian/Damon interaction at the end. My full sister and I were in that situation. I was older and understood more of what was going on and refused to be manipulated whereas she did. Sad what people do these days to innocent kids.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Why did Charlie never try to find Bella after he sobered up? He could have with all his police connections.
Only Charlie knows why he didint. I might do an outtake in his POV. I am still pondering the Idea. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 19 Oct 2017 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad that Jake did not cause any problems. Jake has 4 other kids but Bella called him a pedophile. How young were the girls that gave birth to these other 4 kids?
They were between ages 16 and 18. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 14 Oct 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
I wish Edward had told her that he was intentionally keeping the apartment empty because he didn't want a noisy tenant under him. Maybe then she would she would realize that he wasn't taking any money on the apartment Anyway by his choice and that even the 500 she's giving him is more than he was getting before
Date: 13 Oct 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, thank God!! I don't know what I thought was gonna happen to Lucian but I'm glad he was found safe. He used good judgement and thought things through. Bella sees that Edward had the best intentions, care and concern for her and the boys. She deserves it.
Really good chapter, thank you! Looking forward to the next one. -RoseE. x
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Date: 12 Oct 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I did not expect Lucian to go to co front Jacob. I thought him leaving school had to do with not getting to see Edward. Glad they talked and got everything out in the open. Can't wait for more.
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Date: 06 Oct 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
instead of sitting down and confronting Edward like an ADULT!!! she runs like a hurt little girl. SERIOUSLY....Now that her son is missing it's OK to turn to Edward. I call that CHILDISH AND UNGRATEFUL!!!!!!! but maybe she'll OPEN her eyes and APPRECIATE Edward for being there for her and her sons!! Grow up Bella!!!
READ YOU SOON : (
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