Date: 02 May 2018 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 176
Thanks so much for thanking me it makes feel good.
I loved the ending it was so sweet I am sad it is over but now I get to look forward to what you do next. Thanks again for a great story :)
Date: 29 Apr 2018 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 176
Very very good story : I loved it !!
Date: 25 Apr 2018 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 176
I started this and couldn't stop til I reached the end, I'll pay for it tomorrow when I head into work, but this was great! Thank you for such a nice and realistic story.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2018 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 176
Thank you for a lovely story, I really enjoyed it!!! well done
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 176
Thank You.
It's been a great adventure reading this period piece.
I look forward to more intriguing reads from you.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 176
Such a fantastic story. I was pleased that you gave them a not so happily ever after. The popularity of your story shows how much we love historical drama in the fandom. Well done and thank you.☮ Ajfflady
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 176
Awe what a sweet ending thank you
Date: 21 Apr 2018 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 176
loved. loved. loved your story!!! thank you for sharing...
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2018 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 176
:) loved this story. Going to miss it
Date: 20 Apr 2018 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 176
You are more than welcome. I have truly loved reading your story. I am sad to see it end. But thank you for sharing it with us.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2018 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 176
Awesome story, so going to miss it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2018 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 175
Awe so sweet
Date: 19 Apr 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 175
Happy ending for Jasper and Alice love it
Date: 19 Apr 2018 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 175
Yes!!!!!!!! I just knew that he would grant them marriage after what Jasper did for them.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2018 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 175
That was a very generous offer from the King and Queen.
As a Marquess, will Jasper remain in Court or just make special appearances?
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2018 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 174
Thank you so much for the update...well done...The King & Queen are happy again their darling daughter is home...until you post again
Date: 19 Apr 2018 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 174
wished we could have read some dialogue between edward and jane and marcus.
though jane didnot have a trial, perhaps have edward visit these 2 with his guards and jasper prior to the beheading... it would have been interesting
for us to see how crazy jane is and what marcus had to say. of course, when the
engagement was called off, which was all legal, they didnot have to notify the girl, that was the way things
worked in those days...so just curious to see where jane and marcus was coming from
blaming bella in some way and edward as well since all of this was done when they were children. i would think jane and marcus should have been angry at their father
more than anyone else but displaced their anger onto bella...and edward.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 174
I am so happy that Elizabeth is finally home with her family.
Date: 18 Apr 2018 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 174
so happy they are missing there heads. Baby is back Baby is back so happy
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2018 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 174
I'm so loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 174
A new day Dawn's for the Royal family.
Will James seek any form of retribution on behalf of his siblings? He was aware of the plot.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 174
A new day Dawn's for the Royal family.
Will James seek any form of retribution on behalf of his siblings? He was aware of the plot.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2018 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 173
Will they have more children?
Date: 17 Apr 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 173
So excited the baby is coming home
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 173
Oh wow it is all out and now they can be free
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 173
I am glad they can become a family again. I hope they do not send her away again like alot of royals do with their children.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 172
Will Edward pardon his cousins for their traitorous actions? Or seek the proper punishment for their deeds against the crown?
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 172
Oh wow keep on writing
Date: 16 Apr 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 172
Jane feels betrayed and it has made her crazy. Marcus wants power.
Date: 16 Apr 2018 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 172
How did Edward's father broke this agreement? I would think that Jane's father would be very mad when it was broken.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 171
Wow oh wow I found this little jem today and I love it please update soon
Date: 16 Apr 2018 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 171
More than a little unrealistic to expect Edward to remember a previous betrothal since he was so young when the match with Isabella was made. How old is Jane?
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 171
Does Edward know of the infant betrothal? He was promised to we'd into the Swan kingdom in his early youth. Did Edward's father every truly propose a marriage agreement to Lady Jane or is it all in their heads?
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 170
Interesting. James is not as much the force behind the plot as Jane.
Where does Marcus fit in?
Date: 16 Apr 2018 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 171
Well well well!!!!!!!! Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 169
Hm, keep badgering him Jasper. James is getting nervous.
Date: 16 Apr 2018 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 170
I wonder what the Duke will think when he finds out what his brother and sister have done.
Date: 16 Apr 2018 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 169
The Duke does not know what his brother and sister have done.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 171
I do not believe for one second that he was promised to her; he would know more about who she was, if so. I am so rivited!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2018 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 170
Jasper is making him sweat when is he going to go after the other brother?
Date: 15 Apr 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 169
To bad they didnt have spot lights back then lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2018 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 168
Wow, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 168
I'm surprised jane isn't freaking out more. I do think she will tell that her brothers were in cahoots with her trying to save her own hide.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 168
That shocked them they though they where so smart
Date: 13 Apr 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 167
I feel so sad for Rosalie
Date: 13 Apr 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 166
Jasper is a good friend
Date: 13 Apr 2018 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 165
Shit has just got real WOW Jane will be missing her head.
Date: 13 Apr 2018 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 164
Bella says it like it is lol
Date: 12 Apr 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 168
The is Duke is James who is married to Rosalie. If I remember correctly James does not know what Jane and Marcus have been plotting.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 168
The element of surprise was in the favor of the King's guard.
What about Marcus?
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 167
Wonderful story can't wait to read more
Date: 11 Apr 2018 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 167
I was one of the many that wanted James to have a daughter. He was so arrogant about how he had all sons. Glad Rosalie is doing well after giving birth.
Date: 11 Apr 2018 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 166
Maybe since Jasper has done so much for Edward, Edward will grant the marriage between Jasper and Alice after all of this is said and done.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2018 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 167
It is an odd pairing up between Rosalie and James. I'm sure this all plays into your story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2018 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 166
Let's hope Jasper's successful and returned in one piece
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2018 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 165
Love your story can't wait to read more! Hope you're feeling better!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2018 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 165
thank you for the update...well done
Date: 09 Apr 2018 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 165
so he did not know she was betrothed to him first. Wonderful family. Keep records on that stuff. At least he has not slept with her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2018 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 165
Will James and Marcus turn away from their sister? Or will they ramp up their attack on the royal family?
Date: 09 Apr 2018 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 164
OMG I cant wait for find out more. Bella is a stand by her man kind of girl.
Date: 09 Apr 2018 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 162
I think this is good news now they know who it is
Date: 09 Apr 2018 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 161
He loves his wife and now he is learning how to show her
Date: 09 Apr 2018 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 160
He was very good lol
Date: 09 Apr 2018 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 159
So happy for her she is getting her first O
Date: 09 Apr 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 158
About time he paid attention to what he was doing
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 157
He is being a good student and learning as he goes.
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 156
trust all about trust so happy for them
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 155
such a good man
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 153
He will be a better husband.
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 152
She is Jaspers brother?.
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 150
she is the set up?
Date: 09 Apr 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 149
so sad to send the baby away
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2018 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 164
They're getting closer to the bottom of things. Loving it.
Date: 08 Apr 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 164
Cant wait till they confront them.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2018 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 164
Very good question Queen.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2018 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 163
The traitor has been revealed.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2018 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 163
The traitor has been revealed.
Date: 08 Apr 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 164
Glad they know who the culprit is. Will Edward remember he was originally promised to Jane?
Date: 07 Apr 2018 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 163
His mistake back to hurt him and his family
Date: 07 Apr 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 163
Uuuuu Jane you are done for finally
Date: 07 Apr 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 163
hope you get feeling better...great chapter...
Date: 07 Apr 2018 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 163
Finally!!!!!!!!!! They know. Does Edward even know that Jane was promised to wed Edward before it was decided that Isabella would be wed to him?
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 162
Have the king and Queen figured out who is behind the scenes trying to separate them?
Date: 06 Apr 2018 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 162
What has Jasper learned? Who is his bastard sister?
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 162
Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2018 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 161
welocme back!!! Thank you for the update...Well done..They are on a roll. Let's hope Jasper plan works and Elizabeth can come home to her parents..until you post again
Date: 05 Apr 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 161
i love this story and can feel the ambience of the period.
i do like that they are discovering each other physically at least
in this scene...i don't like the thought that he performed this act
for his mistresses before his wife whom he supposedly love.
i realize he is somewhat clueless and the idea of the king
having mistresses is a "no biggi" during the time but just the fact
that he did all this with his mistresses but not for his wife...
just irks me. i certainly hope he never has another mistress
after his declaration of love for the queen...