Date: 30 May 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ding Dong, the witch is dead... which old witch, the wicked witch... Ding Dong the Wicked Witch is deaaaaaaaad!!!!! SNICKER!!
Date: 30 May 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Keep walking, Tanya. But Bella, no matter how much you love Edward you need to think long and hard about his behaviors throughout this.
Date: 30 May 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
Okay okay, I'm glad she knows, but come on, they wouldn't just let her barge in the room. Tanya's not the patient. Can't wait for more Edward Bella alone time
Date: 30 May 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG OMG !! HAVE TANYA WALK IN!!!!! PLEASE!! I know you already have it written but please? pretty with cherries on top? lol
Date: 30 May 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh yes yes yes more action from these two.
Date: 30 May 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yikes. Didn't see that coming
Date: 30 May 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
OOOOH !!! YEAH YEAH!!!! Go Kate!!!! Muuuuhahahahaha can you have Edward walk in on that or something PLEASE???????? I know you won't.... but it would ROCK!!! BOoooo on the Tanya and Edward mix lol. Luv ya!! Oh and yes you know it is just plain horrible of Edward to want to gift Tanya with his and Bella's baby (probably to save their marriage or whatever). It isnt a piece of jewelry or a puppy.... GAH!
Date: 30 May 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
If he ends up with Tanya and the baby at the conclusion of this.... I am going to lose all faith in humanity... LOL
Date: 30 May 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great story can't wait to read more
Date: 30 May 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't see this going well.....
Date: 30 May 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm kind of nauseaus myself.
Date: 30 May 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please, for the love of GOD, do not give that bitch their baby.... I'm begging you ....
Date: 30 May 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
What. Bella can't give her baby to them. That's crazy. They should have said she was already pregnant too bad Tanya
Date: 30 May 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm enjoying the updates so keep them up 😀
I don't like any of these people. Edward is selfish, Bella is weak and Tanya is, well she's Tanya and I always dislike her lol
Date: 30 May 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
This is the kind of story I could devour in a night.
Poor Tanya. She was hurt when she wasn't part of the "process"...how will she feel when she learns that there was no "process"?
Date: 30 May 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
He is a bastard...to his wife, to Bella. The dates won't align, the insurance won't be charged. The proces isn't as simplistic as Edward makes it seem. Bella would be given fertility drugs to make conception as likely as possible. The sperm would have to be tested before using. Bella would have to be tested. I don't really care about the technicalities, but I do about the characters...and I really despise Edward. I trust B won't end up with him.
Date: 30 May 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
What story? They haven't started the insemination process yet. The birth date won't correspond with the supposed conception date? What are they doing? This is a mess that will leave both women in pain.
Date: 30 May 2017 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! I love this story. Get rid of Tanya asap. More more more please
Date: 30 May 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
"...stuck on stupid..." Perfect definition/description of this Edward.
Date: 30 May 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Drabble drives me crazy...at least you post frequently.
I hope Bella lays claim to this child.
Date: 30 May 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hehehe, this should be fun explaining to Tanya! Loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 30 May 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
LMFAO!!!! OMFG !!!! I LOVE THIS DEVELOPMENT!!! I knew i could trust you momma!!
Date: 30 May 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
OH No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 May 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
His behavior is all kinds of wrong. He's celebrating with his wife, happy in his marriage. But he still doesn't know if he even wants this baby. What about the life he is bringing this baby into? He is very selfish and very male...taking the line of least resistance and whatever sex is offered to you.
I'm not liking Bella either. Sleeping with a married man, taking whatever E throws at her.
I am enjoying this story and loving the frequent updates. Somehow, Tanya is the only one I can like here.
Date: 30 May 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am sure they both are going to pass out!
Date: 29 May 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Celebrating what good news? He doesn't even know if he wants a child...why would he use his friend this way? He feels stuck..I guess in his relationship. He needs to figure all this out.
Date: 29 May 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
A cheater and a liar, who can't figure out what he wants.
Date: 29 May 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ughh I don't want him having sex with Tanya after he has been with Bella.
Date: 29 May 2017 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
Down with the Tanya!!! Sorry i ALWAYS hate her... ok maybe not always, but when she is with Edward that way ... yeah I ALWAYS hate her with Edward it makes my skin crawl. Looking forward to more!!
Date: 29 May 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hopefully he will only be having sex with Bella now.
Date: 29 May 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope they will be fine. I thought for sure they would be having a lot more sex than just the one time. Lol
Date: 29 May 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
He could never hurt her. I beg to differ. When he asks her to still carry a baby for him and Tanya, might hurt a bit.
Date: 29 May 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Really like these characters
Date: 29 May 2017 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for another exciting chapter
Date: 29 May 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really liking this chapter
Date: 29 May 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loving this story
Date: 29 May 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Go Edward, be with Bella
Date: 29 May 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad he has a key to her place
Date: 29 May 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Edwards not letting this one go
Date: 29 May 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking the story
Date: 29 May 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. I can't wait to meet Bella
Date: 29 May 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved this chapter and it was much longer which was amazing.
Date: 29 May 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward really should rethink the whole "having a baby with Tanya" thing...no matter how they choose to accomplish it.
Date: 29 May 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wooooo Hoooooooo.... um dare I ask .. what about the ...cough.. wife...cough
Date: 29 May 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
They are way too short. Of course we want more. 😀
Date: 29 May 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
"I've never been more turned on before in my life."
"My girl is so turned-on"
...really, Edward?
Date: 28 May 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella needs to be strong don't do it you will be blame as the other Tanya will blame you for anything that goes wrong with them don't give in stop
Date: 28 May 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
The story they are referring to is Simply Promised by mmsimful. And it is NOT the same, it is simply another "surrogate for Tanya" story. Don't fret lovie XOXO.
Date: 28 May 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
this chapter made me super sad because it is obvious his asking her that REALLY upset her. Now sure why he is so clueless about that, if he is her BEST friend and all. I really hope she tells him to shove it
Date: 28 May 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
I want to agree with some other reviewers.... Asking his best friend to have his and his wife's baby is something that should have been handled alot more delicately. And Bella rushing off meant "hell freaking no". I get that he is married going into this so i shouldn't feel like he should put Tanya's feelings over Bella... I GUESS. But after the doctor's appointment that her ovaries don't work right, it would be more of an "Bella and Edward having a baby to give to Tanya to mother" and that I say HELL NAW! to lol.... ENjoying this and cant wait to see where it goes... hopefully goes with Tayna out tha DOOR :D
Date: 28 May 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh now this is gettong better.... snicker....
Date: 28 May 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Why does he feel she's obligated to talk to him...to carry his baby? He and Tanya are being very selfish. I think Bella's actions speak to her answer.
Date: 28 May 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love E/B stories, so this one scares me right now. I really cringe when i read E/T stuff, especially when she is a "sweet" person. Is it hateful of me to want her to turn out to be a bitch and for E/B to be together? Just saying... not criticizing... XOXO
Date: 28 May 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I migh be wrong about this, but I think asking Bella to be their surrogate is Tanya's way of driving a wedge between Edward and Bella. I think she knows that their might be feelings of more that just being best friends (at least on Bella's part) so this is her way of pushing them apart. Obviously they probably have money because fertility clinics are not cheap. Why not just pay someone to carry the baby for them? Better yet, doesn't Tanya have any friends of her own that she could ask?
Date: 28 May 2017 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
He needs to think more about Bella's feelings
Date: 28 May 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Carrying someone else baby. Wow that's huge. And Edward just kinda blurted it out there. I think no response should be an answer. You always hear " it never hurts to ask" I beg to differ. It may not hurt you but the other person can be.
Date: 28 May 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh hell no edward why why are you doing
Date: 27 May 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to more
Date: 27 May 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I'm looking forward to the rest. Can't wait
Date: 27 May 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see where this goes.