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Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

Ding Dong, the witch is dead... which old witch, the wicked witch... Ding Dong the Wicked Witch is deaaaaaaaad!!!!! SNICKER!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

Keep walking, Tanya.  But Bella, no matter how much you love Edward you need to think long and hard about his behaviors throughout this.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

Okay okay, I'm glad she knows, but come on, they wouldn't just let her barge in the room. Tanya's not the patient. Can't wait for more Edward Bella alone time 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 26

OMG OMG !! HAVE TANYA WALK IN!!!!! PLEASE!! I know you already have it written but please? pretty with cherries on top? lol

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh yes yes yes more action from these two.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love Love it! 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

Yikes. Didn't see that coming 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

OOOOH !!! YEAH YEAH!!!! Go Kate!!!! Muuuuhahahahaha can you have Edward walk in on that or something PLEASE???????? I know you won't.... but it would ROCK!!! BOoooo on the Tanya and Edward mix lol. Luv ya!! Oh and yes you know it is just plain horrible of Edward to want to gift Tanya with his and Bella's baby (probably to save their marriage or whatever). It isnt a piece of jewelry or a puppy.... GAH!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

If he ends up with Tanya and the baby at the conclusion of this.... I am going to lose all faith in humanity... LOL

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

I don't see this going well..... 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm kind of nauseaus myself. 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 20

Please, for the love of GOD, do not give that bitch their baby.... I'm begging you .... 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

What. Bella can't give her baby to them. That's crazy. They should have said she was already pregnant too bad Tanya 

Reviewer: Journeyedgrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm enjoying the updates so keep them up 😀

I don't like any of these people. Edward is selfish, Bella is weak and Tanya is, well she's Tanya and I always dislike her lol 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 22

This is the kind of story I could devour in a night.

Poor Tanya.  She was hurt when she wasn't part of the "process"...how will she feel when she learns that there was no "process"?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

He is a bastard...to his wife, to Bella.  The dates won't align, the insurance won't be charged.  The proces isn't as simplistic as Edward makes it seem.  Bella would be given fertility drugs to make conception as likely as possible.  The sperm would have to be tested before using.  Bella would have to be tested.  I don't really care about the technicalities, but I do about the characters...and I really despise Edward.  I trust B won't end up with him.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

What story?  They haven't started the insemination process yet.  The birth date won't correspond with the supposed conception date?  What are they doing?  This is a mess that will leave both women in pain.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow! I love this story. Get rid of Tanya asap. More more more please 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 19

"...stuck on stupid..."  Perfect definition/description of this Edward.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

Drabble drives me crazy...at least you post frequently.

I hope Bella lays claim to this child.

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hehehe, this should be fun explaining to Tanya! Loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

LMFAO!!!! OMFG !!!! I LOVE  THIS DEVELOPMENT!!! I knew i could trust you momma!!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

OH No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

His behavior is all kinds of wrong.  He's celebrating with his wife, happy in his marriage.  But he still doesn't know if he even wants this baby.  What about the life he is bringing this baby into? He is very selfish and very male...taking the line of least resistance and whatever sex is offered to you.

I'm not liking Bella either. Sleeping with a married man, taking whatever E throws at her.

I am enjoying this story and loving the frequent updates. Somehow, Tanya is the only one I can like here.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am sure they both are going to pass out!  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) :) 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Celebrating what good news?  He doesn't even know if he wants a child...why would he use his friend this way?  He feels stuck..I guess in his relationship.  He needs to figure all this out.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

A cheater and a liar, who can't figure out what he wants.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

Ughh I don't want him having sex with Tanya after he has been with Bella.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

Down with the Tanya!!! Sorry i ALWAYS hate her... ok maybe not always, but when she is with Edward that way ... yeah I ALWAYS hate her with Edward it makes my skin crawl. Looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hopefully he will only be having sex with Bella now.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope they will be fine. I thought for sure they would be having a lot more sex than just the one time. Lol

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

He could never hurt her.  I beg to differ. When he asks her to still carry a baby for him and Tanya, might hurt a bit.  

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

Really like these characters

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for another exciting chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

I really liking this chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loving this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

Go Edward, be with Bella

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad he has a key to her place

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

Glad Edwards not letting this one go

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm liking the story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. I can't wait to meet Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) :) 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter and it was much longer which was amazing. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

Edward really should rethink the whole "having a baby with Tanya" thing...no matter how they choose to accomplish it.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wooooo Hoooooooo.... um dare I ask .. what about the ...cough.. wife...cough

 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

They are way too short. Of course we want more. 😀

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

"I've never been more turned on before in my life."

"My girl is so turned-on"

...really, Edward?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

Good plan.

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella needs to be strong don't do it you will be blame as the other Tanya will blame you for anything that goes wrong with them don't give in stop

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

The story they are referring to is Simply Promised by mmsimful. And it is NOT the same, it is simply another "surrogate for Tanya" story. Don't fret lovie XOXO. 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

this chapter made me super sad because it is obvious his asking her that REALLY upset her. Now sure why he is so clueless about that, if he is her BEST friend and all. I really hope she tells him to shove it

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I want to agree with some other reviewers.... Asking his best friend to have his and his wife's baby is something that should have been handled alot more delicately. And Bella rushing off meant "hell freaking no". I get that he is married going into this so i shouldn't feel like he should put Tanya's feelings over Bella... I GUESS. But after the doctor's appointment that her ovaries don't work right, it would be more of an "Bella and Edward having a baby to give to Tanya to mother" and that I say HELL NAW! to lol.... ENjoying this and cant wait to see where it goes... hopefully goes with Tayna out tha DOOR :D

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh now this is gettong better.... snicker.... 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

Why does he feel she's obligated to talk to him...to carry his baby?  He and Tanya are being very selfish.  I think Bella's actions speak to her answer.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love E/B stories, so this one scares me right now. I really cringe when i read E/T stuff, especially when she is a "sweet" person. Is it hateful of me to want her to turn out to be a bitch and for E/B to be together? Just saying... not criticizing... XOXO

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

I migh be wrong about this, but I think asking Bella to be their surrogate is Tanya's way of driving a wedge between Edward and Bella. I think she knows that their might be feelings of more that just being best friends (at least on Bella's part) so this is her way of pushing them apart. Obviously they probably have money because fertility clinics are not cheap. Why not just pay someone to carry the baby for them? Better yet, doesn't Tanya have any friends of her own that she could ask? 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

He needs to think more about Bella's feelings 

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Carrying someone else baby. Wow that's huge. And Edward just kinda blurted it out there.  I think no response should be an answer.  You always hear " it never hurts to ask"  I beg to differ.  It may not hurt you but the other person can be. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh hell no edward why why are you doing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sue blair Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well, I'm looking forward to the rest. Can't wait

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see where this goes.

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