[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
I like boss bad ass Bella. Angela and the principal were both being douches.
Date: 18 Nov 2018 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
A wonderful story. Well written too.
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting and well written. I love it.
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting and well written. I love it.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sounds like the principal will need to adapt or buh bye. Don't blame Bella for shutting up the parents either. Esp since they keep pushing her to do what they want not necessarily what she does.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great to see you again. I love the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is so interesting. I think it might refer to the pronipal or Marcus . Hmmm.....
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs to get a grip. Wonder how long till Charlie calls her out on the lying.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love Loved it can't wait to read more
Date: 16 Nov 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
I guess Bella better hit the books and try to figure this out on her own.
Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh okay. That's a lot more responsibility than I thought she'd have. What an oddly stacked society, no wonder they try to kill each other. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Bella.....But at least she knows or seems to know what to keep to herself for now.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
They better keep her away from Edward’s dad. Great chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 06 Nov 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVED her putting Marcus in his place!!! Yummy Bella taking charge.
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad she stood up to Marcus instead of cowering.
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Sounds like Daddy isn't going to be too happy with her. Hopefully she'll put them in thier places.
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Go Bella. Love that she is making her own destiny and not what they are trying to shove onto her.
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Go Bad Ass Bella. She is right to question anything R and C say.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yes, Bella. Rip your enemies to pieces in ways they can't recover from. I'm here for you strong, decisive Bella A. Bloom and grow sweet huntress, bloom and grow.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella's power is amazing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved how Bella handled Marcus and that bitch Chelsea too. Edward and Bella both deserved some really hawt sexy times. Dam!
Date: 03 Oct 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love the way Bella handled Marcus. He deserved it. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
Date: 28 Sep 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hate seeing Edward as evil especially after meeting his family. He doesn't seem as evil.
Date: 28 Sep 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
I have a question that I can't believe Bella hasn't asked Edward. If he was forced to befrienc her, how can she be sure that his feelings are true and honest.
Author's Response: Do you remember the chapter where he surprised her in the cottage kitchen? He said then, and I quote directly: "You cast a Promise Spell. I wouldn't have found you if I didn't love you. Even if I'd come here, this place would have looked empty to me if my feelings for you weren't true." That's why she doesn't question him any longer! :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG! Love Love Love it ! Can't wait to read more .
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
I don't like Marcus or Chelsea at all.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I can’t wait till Bella shows Marcus her power. That will put him in his place. Great chapter.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
No one saw neutrality as a possibility? If she was prophesied then... someone along the line should've thought "Oh maybe!", and especially as it became clearer what her family ties were. I'm still shocked about that because as soon as it was like 'pick a side' I thought evil then I was like no, neutral, lead both sides. Anyway enough of that, that's an interesting spin on Marcus you've done and I'm really into it. Last thing, the whole huge coven thing doesn't really make sense to me. It makes more sense for it to be a smaller affair. (Even the normal V in the books just throw me for a loop) but again I like your uss of elements from the original story. Things are so pleasantly cannon.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow at the beginning of this story I wasn't sure about it but I kept reading and I love it it's such a great story, I got to the end of chapter eleven and realised there was no next chapter I was upset I love it
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
So happy to find this update in my inbox!! But it is killing me to know if Edward really cares for Bella or is he using her. Ugh!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope she puts then on their butts. Great chapter. Too bad there isn't away for her to make him immortal. That away he can stay with her. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
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Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)
Date: 28 Aug 2017 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good for her to forge her own path.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh goodie, my true neutral is here.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Just be the ultimate neutral Bella.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Renee and Charles are both fools, and Bella should do more independent study. Who was her spirit guide?
Date: 13 Aug 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
"That's what you get when you let your heart win. Woah." Was my first thought.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
At least part of all this could've been prevented if they were being responsible. The whole "Oh hey we aren't your parents and you're a witch" part could've been done years ago.
Date: 25 Jul 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward should never be evil.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think it was edward's dad. I could see him still wanting revenge.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was a shock about his dad! Everything is so intertwined!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Her powers are so strong! I love what you had added here!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Renee & charlie are so interesting. It makes me wonder if charlie is on the cusp of jumping for joy since he won't have to live with renee anymore.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Charlie is so creepy. Makes since why he allowed edward to date her.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie's reaction is priceless becuase he has been such a jerk all this time.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
The alcohol is still making me wonder why he didn't just hide it himself? He wanted her to get caught.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
What is the deal with that alcohol? Or is it a potion?
Date: 26 Jun 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad B is challenging R and C. She shouldn't take them at their word. I wouldn't esp with as much as they've lied/kept from her.
Date: 26 Jun 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think it's Angela and she is angry that she lost her hold on Bella and this is her way of seeking revenge. That's my guess anyway😀
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
So I read the original one shot and this is a total plot twist that I wasn't expecting at all! But I'm absolutely loving it! Can't wait for more and I need it soon!
Date: 20 Jun 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Glad he is telling her what everyone else wants to hide from her.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love your story! Can't wait to read more.I don't know if anyone has what I have on this page but all of your words are on top of each other it's hard to read it.
Author's Response: So glad you like the story! :-D The text is very close together, but not on top of each other from my page... I will see if I can fix it somehow to give more space in-between the lines though!
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Renee and Charlie are both hindering her with all the fighting. Glad she is thinking about things though
Date: 11 Jun 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella will be awesome enough to find a way to do both. THough I'm strting to think that renee and charlie need to get their shit together and teach her what shee needs to know. Maybe Bella should take more of a take charge attitude like she did with the spirit guide.
Date: 08 Jun 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like Renee wants to spoon feed her. I'd be frustrated if I were Bella
Date: 08 Jun 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yea Charlie is a douche....Negan is just insane.
Poor B
Date: 06 Jun 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story. Can I please have the link? Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you! Feels good to hear that :) h t t p : (double slash) fav (dot) me (Slash) dbbs4f1
Date: 28 May 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yes you really need to get that checked out pronto! Hope you are better soon! Love the story!
Date: 28 May 2017 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
I swear Bella ended up neutral in a one-shot... was this a one shot once upon a time? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi! Yes, it was a one-shot! It's called Battle As Old As Time and is still up on my page. It was my entry for a halloween contest and so many people requested for me to make it into a multi-chap, so here it is :)
Date: 24 May 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't blame her for being pissed and overwhelmed by everything they've dropped on her all at once.
Date: 16 May 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm now you have me wondering. (I didn't read BOAT). He's the devil? She's got ESP? Surprised Banshee didn't demand a blood test.
Date: 16 May 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. Already don't like Charlie, which is rare
Date: 14 May 2017 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm you have peaked my intrest in what does our edward dabble in?
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I haven't read your one shot, but Charlie seems like he is probably an abusive bastard to Renee and will be soon to Bella. ugh.... I wonder who the banshee is..... And I wonder if they are witches............. hmmm
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great please keep going & update soon😊