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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG! Love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2019 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad she came clean to Edward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 23

well at least she finally told him.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

Well one of the good things going for our couple is that they have complete honesty now, I hope.    I'm dying to know who put that weak curse on them and who the real seer will be.    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hopefully it was only a dream. Edward and Bella need to be together no matter what. Post chapters as you write them. I want to know what is going on with these two.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bruh. Stop. I'm trying to have a wholesome romance here! 

Can't wait to see what's to come!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 22

Dun Dun Dun indeed.

 

Do updates when you can.  I read when I can..... :-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: ugagirl120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2019 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

Keep updating please!!!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. While I'd never intentionally curse my own bloodline, had I been in her shoes my thoughts would be to curse the bloodline of the men that harmed me. In this case it would unfortunately curse me, and my descendants. As such, I can understand Sarah. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2019 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

Omg! Love your story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2019 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm sure that violent crap happened in the past even more than we think.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Sarah.  Her father should have supported her 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

That was certainly creepy. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2019 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

This guy seems creepy like James.

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Alistar???

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Alistar???

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well this chapter was really interesting....   I curious to learn what Bella will find out.  And I hope Edward can protect her while she is 'out'.     

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well this chapter was really interesting....   I curious to learn what Bella will find out.  And I hope Edward can protect her while she is 'out'.     

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: Abond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

Id's the necromancer Caius???

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2019 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

Interesting the twists and turns you are taking. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2019 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

#Goddess Bella slays all day.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Like to smack Charlie upside his head.  Glad she is learning balance of powers.

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

her Father? Maybe

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2018 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

Like that B is seeing the shades of grey between the good and evil sides.  Renee is a bit uppidy if you ask me.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

Test review

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it might be about Edward and his ass if a dad.  He is sure evil.  Lol

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! What is Bella’s new feelings about? I hope nothing bad happens to Edward. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! What is Bella’s new feelings about? I hope nothing bad happens to Edward. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love B having a spine. 

Reviewer: Laura Elizabeth Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

I really love this story. And your Bella is just right. It's good that she treated Rebecca as equal because that was the right thing to do. And she is not favoring the Evil side. At least not up to here. The Good Witches were wrong in these cases.
Please, please update again soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2018 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

A wonderful story. Well written too.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting and well written. I love it.

 

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting and well written. I love it.

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Sounds like the principal will need to adapt or buh bye.  Don't blame Bella for shutting up the parents either. Esp since they keep pushing her to do what they want not necessarily what she does. 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is so interesting.    I think it might refer to the pronipal or Marcus .   Hmmm.....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella needs to get a grip.   Wonder how long till Charlie calls her out on the lying.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love Loved it can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

I guess Bella better hit the books and try to figure this out on her own.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh okay. That's a lot more responsibility than I thought she'd have. What an oddly stacked society, no wonder they try to kill each other. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Bella.....But at least she knows or seems to know what to keep to herself for now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

They better keep her away from Edward’s dad. Great chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOVED her putting Marcus in his place!!!   Yummy Bella taking charge.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad she stood up to Marcus instead of cowering.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Sounds like Daddy isn't going to be too happy with her.  Hopefully she'll put them in thier places.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

Go Bella.  Love that she is making her own destiny and not what they are trying to shove onto her.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Go Bad Ass Bella.  She is right to question anything R and C say.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yes, Bella. Rip your enemies to pieces in ways they can't recover from. I'm here for you strong, decisive Bella A. Bloom and grow sweet huntress, bloom and grow. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella's power is amazing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

I loved how Bella handled Marcus and that bitch Chelsea too.    Edward and Bella both deserved some really hawt sexy times.  Dam!   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love the way Bella handled Marcus. He deserved it. Can’t wait till the next chapter. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hate seeing Edward as evil especially after meeting his family. He doesn't seem as evil.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have a question that I can't believe Bella hasn't asked Edward. If he was forced to befrienc her, how can she be sure that his feelings are true and honest.



Author's Response: Do you remember the chapter where he surprised her in the cottage kitchen? He said then, and I quote directly: "You cast a Promise Spell. I wouldn't have found you if I didn't love you. Even if I'd come here, this place would have looked empty to me if my feelings for you weren't true." That's why she doesn't question him any longer! :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG! Love Love Love it ! Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

I don't like Marcus or Chelsea at all.   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

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