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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2019 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

Interesting the twists and turns you are taking. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2019 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

#Goddess Bella slays all day.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Like to smack Charlie upside his head.  Glad she is learning balance of powers.

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

her Father? Maybe

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2018 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

Like that B is seeing the shades of grey between the good and evil sides.  Renee is a bit uppidy if you ask me.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

Test review

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it might be about Edward and his ass if a dad.  He is sure evil.  Lol

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! What is Bella’s new feelings about? I hope nothing bad happens to Edward. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! What is Bella’s new feelings about? I hope nothing bad happens to Edward. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love B having a spine. 

Reviewer: Laura Elizabeth Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

I really love this story. And your Bella is just right. It's good that she treated Rebecca as equal because that was the right thing to do. And she is not favoring the Evil side. At least not up to here. The Good Witches were wrong in these cases.
Please, please update again soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2018 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

A wonderful story. Well written too.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting and well written. I love it.

 

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting and well written. I love it.

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Sounds like the principal will need to adapt or buh bye.  Don't blame Bella for shutting up the parents either. Esp since they keep pushing her to do what they want not necessarily what she does. 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great to see you again. I love the chapter.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is so interesting.    I think it might refer to the pronipal or Marcus .   Hmmm.....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2018 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella needs to get a grip.   Wonder how long till Charlie calls her out on the lying.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love Loved it can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

I guess Bella better hit the books and try to figure this out on her own.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh okay. That's a lot more responsibility than I thought she'd have. What an oddly stacked society, no wonder they try to kill each other. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Bella.....But at least she knows or seems to know what to keep to herself for now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

They better keep her away from Edward’s dad. Great chapter. Can’t wait till the next chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOVED her putting Marcus in his place!!!   Yummy Bella taking charge.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad she stood up to Marcus instead of cowering.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Sounds like Daddy isn't going to be too happy with her.  Hopefully she'll put them in thier places.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

Go Bella.  Love that she is making her own destiny and not what they are trying to shove onto her.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Go Bad Ass Bella.  She is right to question anything R and C say.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yes, Bella. Rip your enemies to pieces in ways they can't recover from. I'm here for you strong, decisive Bella A. Bloom and grow sweet huntress, bloom and grow. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella's power is amazing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

I loved how Bella handled Marcus and that bitch Chelsea too.    Edward and Bella both deserved some really hawt sexy times.  Dam!   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love the way Bella handled Marcus. He deserved it. Can’t wait till the next chapter. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hate seeing Edward as evil especially after meeting his family. He doesn't seem as evil.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have a question that I can't believe Bella hasn't asked Edward. If he was forced to befrienc her, how can she be sure that his feelings are true and honest.



Author's Response: Do you remember the chapter where he surprised her in the cottage kitchen? He said then, and I quote directly: "You cast a Promise Spell. I wouldn't have found you if I didn't love you. Even if I'd come here, this place would have looked empty to me if my feelings for you weren't true." That's why she doesn't question him any longer! :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG! Love Love Love it ! Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

I don't like Marcus or Chelsea at all.   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I can’t wait till Bella shows Marcus her power. That will put him in his place. Great chapter.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 11

No one saw neutrality as a possibility? If she was prophesied then... someone along the line should've thought "Oh maybe!", and especially as it became clearer what her family ties were. I'm still shocked about that because as soon as it was like 'pick a side' I thought evil then I was like no, neutral, lead both sides. Anyway enough of that, that's an interesting spin on Marcus you've done and I'm really into it. Last thing, the whole huge coven thing doesn't really make sense to me. It makes more sense for it to be a smaller affair. (Even the normal V in the books just throw me for a loop) but again I like your uss of elements from the original story. Things are so pleasantly cannon. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

love it

 

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh wow  at the beginning of this story I wasn't sure about it but I kept reading and I love it it's such a great story, I got to the end of chapter eleven and realised there was no next chapter I was upset I love it

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)

Reviewer: bmoregirl311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 11

So happy to find this update in my inbox!! But it is killing me to know if Edward really cares for Bella or is he using her. Ugh!!



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

I hope she puts then on their butts. Great chapter. Too bad there isn't away for her to make him immortal. That away he can stay with her.  Can't wait till the next chapter. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Good for her to forge her own path.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh goodie, my true neutral is here.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

Just be the ultimate neutral Bella.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Renee and Charles are both fools, and Bella should do more independent study. Who was her spirit guide?

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

"That's what you get when you let your heart win. Woah." Was my first thought. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

At least part of all this could've been prevented if they were being responsible. The whole "Oh hey we aren't your parents and you're a witch" part could've been done years ago. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

Edward should never be evil. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

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Date: 25 Jul 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

I think it was edward's dad.  I could see him still wanting revenge.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was a shock about his dad! Everything is so intertwined!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Her powers are so strong! I love what you had added here!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Renee & charlie are so interesting. It makes me wonder if charlie is on the cusp of jumping for joy since he won't have to live with renee anymore.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Charlie is so creepy.  Makes since why he allowed edward to date her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Charlie's reaction is priceless becuase he has been such a jerk all this time. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

The alcohol is still making me wonder why he didn't just hide it himself?  He wanted her to get caught.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

What is the deal with that alcohol? Or is it a potion?

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