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Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 10:11 AM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

I had started to read this years and a while back I decided to wait for you to finish it.  I just now got to read it from start to finish and I LOVED IT!   I loved it so much I'm gonna go back and reread it now.  This story was amazing and I'm so so sad that it's over.  If you ever publish this I'll be one of the first in line to purchase it.  I also hope you write another story in this realm.  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 10:10 AM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

I had started to read this years and a while back I decided to wait for you to finish it.  I just now got to read it from start to finish and I LOVED IT!   I loved it so much I'm gonna go back and reread it now.  This story was amazing and I'm so so sad that it's over.  If you ever publish this I'll be one of the first in line to purchase it.  I also hope you write another story in this realm.  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 10:10 AM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

I had started to read this years and a while back I decided to wait for you to finish it.  I just now got to read it from start to finish and I LOVED IT!   I loved it so much I'm gonna go back and reread it now.  This story was amazing and I'm so so sad that it's over.  If you ever publish this I'll be one of the first in line to purchase it.  I also hope you write another story in this realm.  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 10:10 AM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

I had started to read this years and a while back I decided to wait for you to finish it.  I just now got to read it from start to finish and I LOVED IT!   I loved it so much I'm gonna go back and reread it now.  This story was amazing and I'm so so sad that it's over.  If you ever publish this I'll be one of the first in line to purchase it.  I also hope you write another story in this realm.  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2019 2:58 PM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

This was a sad ending but it was still happy because she was able to have her son

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2019 2:58 PM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

This was a sad ending but it was still happy because she was able to have her son

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2019 7:04 AM Title: Alternative Ending - ANGST

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2019 1:32 PM Title: Epilogue

This was an awesome ride. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2019 10:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank uou

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2019 10:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank uou

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2019 10:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank uou

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2019 10:21 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2019 7:08 AM Title: Epilogue

Nice, nice, nice. It was a fun ride, thank you for sharing this story. 

 

Also also, an alternative ending means an alternative epilogue right?



Author's Response:

Basically, yeah. The alt. ending will melt together with the alt. epilogue :)

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2019 8:28 PM Title: Epilogue

:}

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2019 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2019 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 28

Talk about intense......    Dam!    That Chelsea was a complete bitch.   I'm glad that she's gone.    That is pretty sad about their baby though.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2019 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 27

I hope they are ready for pure evil. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2019 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad Alec is giving them the tools they'll need

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2019 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 27

Let's kick Chelsea's arse and mop the floor with her tears! I'm excited for the end while I'll miss the story I'm just looking for the characters to have peace and also see Badass Bella take her rightful place as leader of all witches. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2019 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2019 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Hell, Alec had made me hella scared of Chelsea too.  I really hope Bella and Edward have trained well enough.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2019 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

wowser  So much going on.  Glad B went right to E and told him everything.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

So excited for what it going to happen.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well Chelsea has already killed her brother.   It's not that much further to imagine her killing her son and his mate.    I wouldn't be that upset at the thought of killing her if I was Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well Chelsea has already killed her brother.   It's not that much further to imagine her killing her son and his mate.    I wouldn't be that upset at the thought of killing her if I was Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well Chelsea has already killed her brother.   It's not that much further to imagine her killing her son and his mate.    I wouldn't be that upset at the thought of killing her if I was Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bruh. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2019 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

Okay well that reveal better come next chapter! And early! 

I'm looking forward to whatever comes next, hard pill to swallow knowing that the end is nigh.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2019 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Gotta love the more mysteries they are faced with.  Sometimes feels like one step forward and 2 the the side..  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2019 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

I hope Bella finds out what she needs to learn soon.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2019 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

It seems like Edward is learning more than Bella.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2019 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2019 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

Nice. We're going to uncover the mystery Scoobs. 

As always, I am enjoying this story and impatiently await the next update. I hope life as hectic as it is, is also fulfilling. See you next time!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2019 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 24

Glad they are working together to find the library.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2019 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Can't wait for for of the mystery to unravel.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2019 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thank goodness Bella stuck to her guns and that Edward was there to help and believe in her.   Even though he was a sulker at times, he was a great help.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2019 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: _BookLover96_ Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2019 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love this story! Can’t wait for the next update!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG! Love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2019 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad she came clean to Edward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 23

well at least she finally told him.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

Well one of the good things going for our couple is that they have complete honesty now, I hope.    I'm dying to know who put that weak curse on them and who the real seer will be.    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hopefully it was only a dream. Edward and Bella need to be together no matter what. Post chapters as you write them. I want to know what is going on with these two.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bruh. Stop. I'm trying to have a wholesome romance here! 

Can't wait to see what's to come!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 22

Dun Dun Dun indeed.

 

Do updates when you can.  I read when I can..... :-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: ugagirl120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2019 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

Keep updating please!!!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. While I'd never intentionally curse my own bloodline, had I been in her shoes my thoughts would be to curse the bloodline of the men that harmed me. In this case it would unfortunately curse me, and my descendants. As such, I can understand Sarah. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2019 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

Omg! Love your story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2019 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm sure that violent crap happened in the past even more than we think.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Sarah.  Her father should have supported her 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

That was certainly creepy. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2019 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

This guy seems creepy like James.

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Alistar???

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Alistar???

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well this chapter was really interesting....   I curious to learn what Bella will find out.  And I hope Edward can protect her while she is 'out'.     

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well this chapter was really interesting....   I curious to learn what Bella will find out.  And I hope Edward can protect her while she is 'out'.     

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: Abond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

Id's the necromancer Caius???

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2019 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

(:

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

Interesting the twists and turns you are taking. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2019 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

#Goddess Bella slays all day.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Like to smack Charlie upside his head.  Glad she is learning balance of powers.

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

her Father? Maybe

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I find this story fascinating.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2018 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

Like that B is seeing the shades of grey between the good and evil sides.  Renee is a bit uppidy if you ask me.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

Test review

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it might be about Edward and his ass if a dad.  He is sure evil.  Lol

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! What is Bella’s new feelings about? I hope nothing bad happens to Edward. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter! What is Bella’s new feelings about? I hope nothing bad happens to Edward. Can’t wait till the next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love B having a spine. 

Reviewer: Laura Elizabeth Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

I really love this story. And your Bella is just right. It's good that she treated Rebecca as equal because that was the right thing to do. And she is not favoring the Evil side. At least not up to here. The Good Witches were wrong in these cases.
Please, please update again soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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