Date: 06 Aug 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 67: Redemption
OHF*CK!!!! I figured it was Paul that killed Seth once Edward had said, "they still hadn't caught the person." I knew Paul was in love with his best friend!!! AND OMFNG HE JUST SHOT EDWARD!!!! :O
I love this story and I am so friggen excited for the next update!! ;)
Date: 05 Aug 2017 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 66: Hurt
whew!
Date: 05 Aug 2017 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 66: Hurt
NO! No, no, no!! OMG!! :'(
Date: 05 Aug 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 65: Paul's Story
HOLYSH*T!!!! WOW!!! OMG!!!
I love this story! ;)
Date: 05 Aug 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 66: Hurt
So glad he called Dr Howell
Date: 05 Aug 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 65: Paul's Story
i had a feeling paul was the one wow awesome heart wrenching chappy
Date: 05 Aug 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 65: Paul's Story
Oh shit! I knew it. Paul you dirty dog
Date: 04 Aug 2017 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 65: Paul's Story
Pardon my French but....oh shit. I suspected Paul had been part of the events of that night about 2_3 chapters ago. I'm hoping Edward makes it through this.
Date: 04 Aug 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 65: Paul's Story
Darn. I saw this coming and I really hoped I was wrong
Date: 04 Aug 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 65: Paul's Story
Poor Edward. I hope he doesn't slip
Date: 03 Aug 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 64: A Fresh Start
I am afraid i know what Paul is hiding.... And oh boy is THAT the mind-F@#$ of a lifetime... You, my dear, write some amazing stuff i tell ya.
Date: 03 Aug 2017 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 64: A Fresh Start
I wonder if Paul had somethind to do with Seth's accident.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 03 Aug 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 64: A Fresh Start
:)
Date: 03 Aug 2017 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 64: A Fresh Start
Absolutely fantastic! ;)
Date: 01 Aug 2017 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday
This is absolutely fantastic!! I am so proud of Edward and Bella!! ;)
Date: 01 Aug 2017 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 63: New Year and New Beginnings
:)
Date: 01 Aug 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday
Bella is my hero I love how she put that bitch in her place
Date: 31 Jul 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday
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Date: 31 Jul 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday
:)
Date: 31 Jul 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 30 Jul 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 61: Acceptance
OMG!! I am so proud of Edward! :)
Date: 28 Jul 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 61: Acceptance
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 61: Acceptance
Great, great chapter. I don't usually cry at fiction but this one had me choked up. I don't know whether to hug you or I don't know just something like walk away and get a hold of my self. I believe that Elizabeth is going to be quite the bitch at this party. She is cold and demeaning at the best of times toward Edward so I think it will come to a head. Lookout fellow celebrants, you're in for an outright war.
Date: 27 Jul 2017 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 61: Acceptance
That was a big step for Edward that was one of the hardest things to do.
Date: 27 Jul 2017 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
Edward is a bigger man that most to ask Elizabeth to come to the party. I think it will be very interesting if she shows up
Date: 25 Jul 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
Edward did the right thing in reaching out to Elizabeth. I'm proud of him
Date: 25 Jul 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
I absolutely believe Edward did the right thing! I am so proud of the man he is!!! I love this story and I get so very excited when I receive the update alert!! :P
Date: 25 Jul 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
Great chapter. I'm glad you had Edward reach out to Elizabeth, it was the rightthing to do.
Date: 25 Jul 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
:)
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
:))
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 60: Reaching Out
:))
Date: 24 Jul 2017 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 59: Old Friends
Edward needs Paul and Paul needs Edward to feel the connetion to Seth they are helping each other.
Date: 24 Jul 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Ok I love your story, but I am little scared about Paul, will we ever get an inside of what Paul is thinking, I dont charlie to be taken away from bella and edward. Charlie is bella and edward child.
Date: 24 Jul 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 58: Thanksgiving
What a great day all the way around they are all so lucky to have each other. love it
Date: 23 Jul 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 58: Thanksgiving
:)
Date: 23 Jul 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 58: Thanksgiving
This is the absolutely best Thanksgiving dinner ever!!! ;) I love this chapter so much!! Honestly, I had to wipe away tears while they were all saying what they are thankful for! I am excited for more of their story! :D
Date: 22 Jul 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 57: Chief Swan
ehh I got a great uncle paul, an uncle paul,a 2nd cousin fr paul my uncles son paul and of course my fem cousin married a paul so a few charlies are ok
Date: 22 Jul 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 57: Chief Swan
I love this! I think Two Charlie's is great! Seeing as how Bella is going to be 'mom' to Charlie. ;) lol
Date: 21 Jul 2017 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 57: Chief Swan
Edward is a mess lol Charlie will love him and love little Charlie to
Date: 19 Jul 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 56: House Hunting
:)
Date: 19 Jul 2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 56: House Hunting
Behind every good man is a very smart women lol. So excited for them to own a house
Date: 18 Jul 2017 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 55: You'll Be in My Heart
Cried all the way through this chapter.
You have captured the sad reality that a lot of people live with; drugs, drink, abandonment, giving up a child, in a beautiful story. Its a story of hope & love and I wish that all the troubled people living this kind of nightmare right now could read it.
Thank you
Date: 18 Jul 2017 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 55: You'll Be in My Heart
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Date: 18 Jul 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 55: You'll Be in My Heart
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 18 Jul 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 19: Birthday Party
good for carlise
Date: 17 Jul 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 55: You'll Be in My Heart
:)
Date: 17 Jul 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 55: You'll Be in My Heart
That is so sad but answers a lot of ?
Date: 15 Jul 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 54: Family Time
I absolutely love this and I am dying for more!! The song choice is perfect!! ;)
Date: 14 Jul 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead
Awww...Edward is all grown up! I am so proud of him! I love them! ;)
Date: 14 Jul 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 52: Opening Up
I LOVE THEM! ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 54: Family Time
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Date: 12 Jul 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 54: Family Time
I loved it that was a great lunch it helped that Edward was relaxed lol
Date: 11 Jul 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 54: Family Time
Was wondering if Carlisle kept all of Esme's letters and such.
Date: 11 Jul 2017 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead
He is getting everything he never thought he would have
Date: 11 Jul 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 52: Opening Up
I like the Charlie thing you have the bad the good and the inocent lol. I am so glad that Edward is able to be so open with Bella.
Date: 10 Jul 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead
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Date: 10 Jul 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead
aww for E getting so flustered about home and more kids. LOL
Date: 10 Jul 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 52: Opening Up
Wonder if Seth knew about Edward? You'd think Elizabeth would have let it slip or something. Ah well. Glad B is there to support E
Date: 10 Jul 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead
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Date: 10 Jul 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 51: Esme's Story
Still can't have too much sympathy for Elilzabeth. While she didn't physically abuse E, she certainly mentally did.
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 50
He definitely deserves some answers from Esme, Carlisle, and Elizabeth. The latter is a lost cause though
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead
:)
Date: 10 Jul 2017 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 51: Esme's Story
I can understand Esme I grew up watching my mother get the crap beat out of her and never got why it is a cycle because you think that thing will be different. I am happy that they are talking
Date: 10 Jul 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
Things are coming together and I cant wait for his meeting with Charlie.
Date: 08 Jul 2017 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 51: Esme's Story
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 51: Esme's Story
You had me π’ tearing up
Date: 08 Jul 2017 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 51: Esme's Story
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Date: 07 Jul 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
Charlie is still her grandson. So how is it good bye? Also, she's allowed to feel hurt, Carlilse was a snake for what he did.
So he gets no pass from me.
Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
She treated him worse than gum on the bottom of her shoe. Despite Carlisle's affair, she chose to treat a child that way. She deserves no sympathy in my eyes. Charlie is supposed to be her child's child and she doesn't seem to care about him at all either. She is pathetic.
Date: 07 Jul 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
This is really great! I am so proud of Edward being so strong. Elizabeth is an awful woman.
Date: 07 Jul 2017 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
She is a sad lonely person. I still believe no mater what she should not have taken it out on Edward
Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
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Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
:)
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
She is still Charlies grandmother. I hope that she will be allowed to have some contact with him.
when my parents got divorced my mom still allowed my dads mother to be a part of our lives. I how that Edward will allow this for them both.
Date: 07 Jul 2017 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 49: Good Riddance
I teared up too. I think the reason is even though she was awful to Edward, she still let Carlisle bring him home and took care of him. It's like you said, it's a chapter closed. I am really enjoying this story!
Date: 06 Jul 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
That was a hard lunch but now it is out of the way they can talk.
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
ACK Ya killing me with the suspense!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 47:Preparation
like that he is willing to try with his dad.
Date: 05 Jul 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
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Date: 05 Jul 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
OMG! I love it! ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
Loved this chapter. My daughter is adopted and has meant her birth parents and the way you've written this is so emotionally accurate from our personal experience.....with the exception of being lied to about it.
Date: 04 Jul 2017 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
:)
Date: 04 Jul 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 48: Glimpse at the Past
Always glad of an update. I'm going to guess that Esme's husband figured out Edward wasn't his & forced Esme to get rid of him
Date: 02 Jul 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 47:Preparation
Edward needs to relax lol. Loved Bella's POV on the blog she was so ready for that :)
Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 47:Preparation
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Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 47:Preparation
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 30 Jun 2017 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 46: A Proposal
That ended pretty good she sure was surprised lol
Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 46: A Proposal
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 30 Jun 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 46: A Proposal
I LOVE THIS!!! ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 46: A Proposal
LOl Love the distraction..... Sweet proposal though
Date: 30 Jun 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 46: A Proposal
I am really enjoying this story, and your updating schedule keeps up my interest. When authors take so long to update its easy to get distracted by other stories and lose interest. Good job!
Date: 30 Jun 2017 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 46: A Proposal
Not the props al he wanted to givr, but I think Bella's happy with it