Date: 09 Dec 2017 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
This was great! I love how she got him all worked up with words first. It's interesting to see that side of him come out. He's usually so buttoned down and aloof. He's trusting her and let loose during sex. Wonderful. I loved it. Thanks for this and all your other steamy and well written stories.
My last few days were hectic, but the fires pass around my house and I am back home safe after 3 days at my daughter's house.
Author's Response:
Spso glad your safe sweetie I did think about you xx
Date: 09 Dec 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
This was great! I love how she got him all worked up with words first. It's interesting to see that side of him come out. He's usually so buttoned down and aloof. He's trusting her and let loose during sex. Wonderful. I loved it. Thanks for this and all your other steamy and well written stories.
My last few days were hectic, but the fires pass around my house and I am back home safe after 3 days at my daughter's house.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love this chapter, i think Edward needs someone llike Bella
Date: 05 Dec 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2017 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
They handled the awkwardness of the situation wonderfully. A case of 'sit on it and rotate'. I bet 2 of the Mrs Cullens looked like they were sucking on lemons. Lol. Wonderful update. Thanks
Date: 04 Dec 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well here we go the battles of the ex and the new to be. and of course Mama
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
Damn Edwards mother is a royal b****, completely ignoring Bella. If I was Bella I would have been rude right back, his mother really is a complete snob. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Melissa
Date: 03 Dec 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yikes that was uncomfortable! Bella handled herself admirable and even managed to calm down here uptight guy. Thank goodness Emmett and Rose came in and provided some much needed comic relief, as it were. Great chapter! I like Edward's dad. His mom...not so much.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 28
I’m so glad Edward’s parents and ex saw his with Bella and how different he is with her. She’s changing him for the better. I think with a little bit of confidence for Rose, and her and Bella will be a force to be reckoned with. Loved it!
Date: 02 Dec 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
I love how she is changing him a little making him friendly :) Amazing chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
With rosey and bella joining the family, edward is going to be a new man.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
#team Bella and Rosalie all the way
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Can't say it enough,Love your story can't wait to read more of it . O and I love this Bella kick ASS !
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
So what the hell does Esme think??? Edward is going to get back with that stealing whore bag Tanya??? What kind of mother would want that??? You would think everyone in Edward's family would hate Tanya, despite Elezar.
Date: 30 Nov 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
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Date: 30 Nov 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
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Date: 26 Nov 2017 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yay! sex, sex, and more sex! at last! it is intersting seeing Edward struggling to be a more casual persona with Bella when his tendency is to be in boss mode all the time. He's cute. I'm SO glad he broke tradition and didn't go to his parents for breakfast and decided to stay in bed with Bella and begin to build his stamina all over again!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ok so i know for a fact because i have read your lemons & they are well written so where in the heck were the details for all the messing around that they got up to? I'm expecting edward to be a dirty talker & maybe bella too but we got nothing but some sore muscles in the shower as a description? I'm hoping you didn't lose lose your lemon mojo!!
Date: 25 Nov 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it! I’m sure the phone was his mother looking for him. I’m glad Edward took the time to just focus on Bella. Can’t wait for what’s next.
Hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving, if you celebrate. I managed to survive the food coma and shopping!
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well I am happy they are having yummy sexy times. And that they are both compromising a little.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Did tanya leave a camera in his office or a spy cam. I don't trust her at all!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
Women scorned sure make worthy enemies. He needs to watch out for skanya and her family.
Date: 17 Nov 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
I almost feel sorry for Mike. And Jasper Yay! Edward is free. Look out, Bella! He will be relentless in his pursuit, I’m sure! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Nov 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
This was a long slow burn, but FINALLY! I love that Bella nonplussed him big time! Love that his people thought she was trying to kill him. Well, don't love that so much as love that she was able to "get" him with her sense of humor. They match up well. Can't wait to read your lemon next chapter! I bet it's great! Congrats on your fitness routine and I wish you continuing success. Thanks for this and everything!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
thank you for the update....well well Edward is ready to make Bewlla the Next mrs. Cullen and I think she's ready...until you post again..well done
Date: 17 Nov 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Someones head is going to roll. Congratulations Edward.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love Love it ! Can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ah, come on! Thatβs a horrible place to end that chapter! Hehe. Canβt wait for more. π
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my goodness that’s hilarious, he chokes on his drink because if something she said and they accuse her of hurting him. Poor Bella and Edward. Can’t wait to read what comes next.
Melissa
Date: 12 Nov 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2017 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
LOL ! Great chapter ! Love your story can't wait to read more more
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2017 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
Now is seth going to be in trouble for interrupting?
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks
Date: 11 Nov 2017 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Uh oh! Seth may have overreacted! How will Edward and Bella react?! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Loving this story.
Date: 11 Nov 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Now we're getting somewhere. Now we're seeing some action. Just a slight crack in his armor there at the end when he choked on her question. All was perfectly staid and logical leading up to this and then she got him. Wham! By being her charming, disarming self, she got him good. And they, his people, seem to think she tried something on him? This is too good. I really can't wait to see what comes next. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
HAHAH Oh Edward can't handle some dirty talk lol. Amazng Chapter..
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2017 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
This is good, but it’s also the slowest burn I’ve read in a pong time. Maybe too slow?
Author's Response:
Sorry if it is too slow, but I hate the stories where they meet , fall in love and get it on all in the first few chapters and then spend the rest of the story trying to find there way back together. I much prefer to build a solid base first. Hope you stick with it but i'll understand if you don't xx
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2017 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Did Seth think Bella was poisoning or choking Edward with something? Dam! How stupid are his employees? LOL
Author's Response:
I suppose Seth just heard choking and reacted, thinking his boss was in trouble. x
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love Love your story can't wait to read more and more!
Date: 06 Nov 2017 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
They need some fun tonight. They are both so stressed.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you so much for the update...Edward will finally beable to see Bella in her lingerie, LIVE!! no pictures...lol..Edward is to funny, he really likes Bella....I hope Edward likes the restaurant that Bella picked. Let's hope they enjoy their evening with no unwanted vistors or phone calls. Until you post again...WELL DONE!!!
Date: 05 Nov 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 05 Nov 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looking forward to their date! Can’t wait.
Date: 05 Nov 2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it hope you update soon.
Date: 05 Nov 2017 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Really enjoyable. The mystery continues and remains an intriguing read. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
poor Bella ..... I would be spooked as hell also if I knew someone was following me.
Date: 04 Nov 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love how Em and Edward interact. It could almost be a comedy routine if it weren't so serious. I hope they get to the bottom of this Jarvis scenario soon. I'm glad Bella decided to go ahead and dress up, as planned, for Edward.Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
I really hope they get one night to let loose with each other!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh goodness edward is going to go ballistic! Bella is never leaving his site again. I hope she gets to wear the lingerie
Date: 30 Oct 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can't wait for you to update again. I need some answers and I'm sure Edward is freaking out.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
More confused but an enjoyable update. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
More confused but an enjoyable update. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was weird and interesting, so Mr Jarvis is a military man but they didn’t hurt quill which is weird but they had his devices so I could Kyle to trust any of them after they got ahold of them or his Range Rover. I don’t understand what the point of taking my quill was unless it was for his devices. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Melissa
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am horribly confused. what is going on? I cannot wait to find out.
Date: 28 Oct 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad they let Quil go. I still don't know what happened here, despite you seeming to think this chapter made things obvious. Sorry. Is one of Edward's men a Jarvis spy? Not Quil, obviously. I'll be patient and all will be revealed in time. Thanks for everything.
Author's Response:
I tried to show in this chapter that there are bigger things at play than just a stalker.
Date: 28 Oct 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
I got chapter 23 today and realized I hadn't read chapter 22 yet. I am not sure if I got no notification or just missed it, as I have been on vacation the last week. Oh well, I am catching up now.
Mr. jarvis is creepy to the max! I hope Emmett can find him and take care of the problem. Too bad that Bella felt the need to delete all those delicious pics from her phone. I'm sure Edward would have loved them! Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 28 Oct 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
excellent can not wait for EPOV
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm MORE confused!!! Do we have to wait a whole week for the next chapter?! This cliffhanger is too much!
Date: 28 Oct 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
No confusion amazing chapter
Date: 28 Oct 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
confueses me more, who took quil and why bring him back
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank goodness jarvis didn't get that picture! I'll be surprised if edward makes it through dinner without tearing her dress off!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love that she waved!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
So i wonder did bella like the kiss?
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love love it can't wait to read more
Date: 23 Oct 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella needs to talk to Edward. He is not going to be happy that she hung up on him.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
LOL Bella is so naughty but Mr Jarvis is a right creep.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
Sorry that you've had a hell of a week. Hopefully this next one will make up for it. In the meantime, a thrilling chapter Thank you
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope emmet brings Bella to Edward
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2017 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
At least Bella knew to stay in public and call Emmett. I wonder who this fucker is. I also wonder if he killed Bella's missing driver. hmmmm..... Glad Edward liked the lingerie. ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
How is Mr Jarvis getting to close to Bella I mean really next time he wonβt call her heβll be there in front of her yay Edward likes the picture Bella send him I donβt think Edward will like what happened today
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
Really loved this chapter. :)
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 19 Oct 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
I would be so completely and totally freaked out! I’m shocked that Bella sent that picture to Edward but I love how affected he is by her and her picture. LOL. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I love this story more and more with each chapter!!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
I would be so completely and totally freaked out! I’m shocked that Bella sent that picture to Edward but I love how affected he is by her and her picture. LOL. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I love this story more and more with each chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
love the update :)
Date: 19 Oct 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward is gone, but Bella is getting there. They will be a true couple soon.
Date: 14 Oct 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love Edward's cold gruffness. When it comes down, it's a sight to see. Thanks for this. I like it a lot!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
That's exactly why I hate those type of restaurants too. Edward needs to loosen up and tell Bella some truths on this date or I fear Bella won't be going out with him anymore.
I'm still strongly disliking Esme in this. ugh........
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Compromise. It has possibilities. Really enjoyed reading these two. Thank you for updating
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2017 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
I would have rather liked to have read about a double date. :D
Date: 09 Oct 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just love Edward. Bella is good for him. She gets him out of his stuffy rut.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 08 Oct 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved their date! Perfect in my mind. Can’t wait for more interaction between them!
Date: 08 Oct 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
So enjoyed this chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awwww.... to short!!! We were just getting to know Edward ( lol)
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 07 Oct 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
He better be careful, she is not your usual bimbo Edward
Date: 07 Oct 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Was her one fingered salute to him there at the end made in anger or in jest? I couldn't tell. Seems like a nice enough lunch, though. He could get over himself a bit more, but I guess considering he is the head of a mob family, all things considered, he did pretty well impress her. I give him points for really trying! Thanks for your words. They're always good.
May I ask a quick question? Is your story "The Body" finished? It isn't marked complete but you haven't updated in a good long time.