[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 48
Hopefully they just kill both of the cheaters. ugh.......
Date: 08 Apr 2018 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 48
Denali and Esme have to know that they are on to them since Denali was with Bella during the whole questioning ordeal. Wonder if they will start ramping up their supposed takeover, but of course Edward will cut them off at the knees, won't he??!!??
Can't wait to see which way you take things, although you will probably write something to keep me in suspense, something I haven't even thought of yet........ 😍—😁
Thank you
Date: 08 Apr 2018 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 48
Edward shouldnt be worried about that Bella likes it. I cant believe the twist of Edwards mom. OMG so amazing!
Date: 07 Apr 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 48
so...Denali is in cahoots with Esme. They should have known Edward would find out...find them. Will it be a problem for him to off his own mother? I'm torn here. I'm an E and B fan all the way, but I'm also a mother. I can't imagine one of my sons killing me, but then again I also can't imagine me wanting to do what she has done to her son, knowing the rules. E and B need to marry already so B won't be subject to being nabbed by the cops/feds and urged to turn on him. Wonderful stuff, this is. I'm loving it!
Date: 01 Apr 2018 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 47
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 30 Mar 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 47
This is another very telling chapter. I loved it! So Edward was surprised at Denali's presence where Jarvis held Bella? I take that to mean Denali is against Edward and working to bring him down. Interesting. Bella was strong when they held her, but now i detect a bit of doubt in her as to where she stands with Edward. He keeps trying to reassure her, but is not very practiced on expressing his feelings. That he stepped into her shower half dressed was a good clue for her that he cares. I loved that part. Gun and all! Is Emmett also suspected to be disloyal? Sorry, I can't remember but it seems so in this chapter. I do love reading this story of yours, as always. You provide quality entertainment. I am grateful! Thank you...
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 47
She is finally home
Date: 30 Mar 2018 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 47
I wonder who Edward is yelling at now?! I feel sorry for Denali when Edward gets a hold of him and Edward’s mom! The writing is on the wall! He said those 3 words!!! I can’t wait to see what’s next!!
Date: 30 Mar 2018 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
Great chapter! I almost had a heart attack when she said she was leaving. I thought Jarvis and Denali had really succeeded. Can’t wait to see what they do as a couple to the villains. I believe Bella is a force to be reckoned with like a Edward. Perfect couple!
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2018 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 47
I'm so relieved they are back together and Edward poured out his feelings. Him getting in the shower fully dressed to do it was really hot. LOL . I sure hope death is coming for Denali and Esme.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 46
Brilliant on many levels. Thanks
Date: 26 Mar 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 45
Fantastic chapter. Love your characters. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2018 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 46
I'm so glad she is finally out. I think she is ready to join the mob and destroy every agent that was in that warehouse.
Date: 26 Mar 2018 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 46
OMG! This was an amazing update!
Date: 25 Mar 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 46
I’m disappointed that your story didn’t place, but it’s still a favorite of mine!!!
Aro Volturi has just seriously fucked up! I can’t wait for the next chapter! I’ll be anxiously waiting!
Date: 25 Mar 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 46
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 46
I would think that everyone around Bella, Charlie included, would go after Aro and Denali.
Date: 24 Mar 2018 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 46
Thank god she is finally out of there! They really messed with her head, even though she was strong and didn't reveal anything to them. Edward will make them pay. Will he be hurt that she doubted him, even though she didn't reveal that to THEM, or will he believe that she stayed strong and true? Loved this chapter.
Date: 24 Mar 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 46
Love love love this story and can't wait until the next chapter!! Thank you
Date: 24 Mar 2018 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 46
Ok 1 yay she’s out and with Edward 2 Jarvis and Denali you all better run 3 if Edwards mom had something to do with this she’s going down 2 3 Jarvis you just made your worse enemy ass Denali you better run your are 1st
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 46
Finally, get to writing
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 45
Thank you for the update.....Edward is on his way to his girl..him & everybody else..lol...I can't believe Esme would do this to her family..Yes Carlisle has a piece on the side I think or he is just using her for info I'm not sure....I hope Charlie & Billy are okay...Bella is very smart..thank god Edward never spoke to her about business so she couldn't answer any questions...Edward can't wait to tell his girl how he really feels about her...let's hope she is not scared of what they implied. I really can't wait for next chapter..Ihope you are well so we will get our next installment!!! until you post again,,WELL DONE!!! MY FRIEND
Date: 18 Mar 2018 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 45
It’s about time they are going to get Bella! I wonder who else is a mole. It has to be someone close to Edward that is giving information. I really hope Charlie and Billy are both ok. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 45
Bella is coming home! Hooray! I'm thinking they are going to ravage each other!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2018 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 44
She is as wise as edward and will make a perfect mob wife!!
Date: 17 Mar 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 16 Mar 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 45
Uuuuu yes Bella smart Chica Edward emmet be careful Alice is a force of nature you don’t want her to go ape on you for messing with her husband
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2018 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 45
Time for Esme, Denali and his daughter and Aro to die...... I hope Edward really likes Bella's shrewdness.
Date: 16 Mar 2018 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 45
wow this was a great chapter! i hope Bella isn't confused about loyalties. I hope she was just trying to confuse and befuddle Jarvis and Denali. I think Denali is the rat and hope Edward nails him, if he is. Thanks!
Date: 16 Mar 2018 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 45
OMg I am so happy Bella is just playing with them. a holes
Date: 16 Mar 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 45
Go Edward!! Go get our girl from the clutches of those evil SOB's!! Whoo hooo
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yay! To the rescue! I'm loving this so much xx
Date: 15 Mar 2018 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yay! To the rescue! I'm loving this so much xx
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 45
OMG I CANT WAIT!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 44
Congrats on getting through and being on the mend. I have enjoyed these chapters. I view them as character development. Bella has shone through. These suckers have no idea. I hope Edward lea4ns some anger management sometime or other. ☺️
Date: 12 Mar 2018 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 44
Love your story.
Date: 11 Mar 2018 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 10 Mar 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 44
I hope you are soon feeling well
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2018 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 44
I hope Bella's plan to fake out the scum bags really works. I mean other scum bags are watching her expression as she looks at the mirrow too.
Date: 07 Mar 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 43
I love how they know Bella so well and know that she’s far from docile. I’m glad she’s not believing their story about her dad and Harry! Looking forward to next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2018 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 42
Someone really likes spankings!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 43
Another exciting, character driven chapter. Wonderful. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2018 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 43
Thank you for the update..Jasper get to where Bella is now...can't wait to see what happens next...until you post again
Date: 03 Mar 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 43
Omg, such a good story.
Date: 03 Mar 2018 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 43
LOVE IT!!!! Update soon PLEASE
Date: 03 Mar 2018 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 43
Smart Bella! Can't wait to see their faces when Edward and company arrive where they are holding her. BTW, since 9/11, all the usual rules of what rights prisoners are allowed has sort of gone by the wayside. People are detained here now and given no reason all the time. Sad but true!
Date: 03 Mar 2018 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 43
suite ms plus longue tu nous laisses sans fin j 'ai hate de la suite merci
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 43
Lol! Loved this chapter!
XoxoxoX
Alia
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2018 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 43
Keep on writing
Date: 03 Mar 2018 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 43
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 03 Mar 2018 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 43
Way to go Bella, I was waiting for her to realize she's being set up! Jarvis & co have hell coming after them soon enough.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2018 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 43
I hope those dumb ass agents all get fired or worse. Maybe the Charlie and Harry crime scenes are photo shopped. Bella is so smart. Elezar, Tanya and Esme need some punishmwent as well. grrrr....
Date: 02 Mar 2018 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 02 Mar 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 42
Ok, I think that this chapter is in the wrong place. The last chapter has Bella still being interviewed by some mistery police/fbi group. Now this one has her in the tub with Edward home early to spank her???????????????
Author's Response:
It’s an outtake to say thank you for voting x
Date: 02 Mar 2018 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow that was Hot.....till next time, thank you ;)
Date: 01 Mar 2018 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 42
Very nice outtake. I imagined I was her. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 42
thank you for thr out take.....Your story is great!!! Keep up the good work!!! until youpost again
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2018 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
I think I wanted work spank me now!😁
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2018 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 41
Excellent chapter. Really enjoyed the power plays and the intrigue. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2018 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 40
So exciting. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2018 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 38
Really good. Enjoyed APOV. Thanks
Date: 25 Feb 2018 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2018 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 41
Her dad is not dead. I bet they photoshopped that pictire.
Date: 24 Feb 2018 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 40
Is that alice storming in at the end??
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2018 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 38
Alice has some explaining to do with jasper.
Date: 24 Feb 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 41
Bella is a smart woman. She’s putting things together. I hope she realizes that Edward didn’t kill her dad! It’s obvious it was Jarvis/Volturi and Denali and Edward’s mother (my opinion)! Can’t wait for the next chapter! I love this story.
Im gonna go vote now!!
Date: 24 Feb 2018 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 41
She needs to stay strong! Wow. if Edward's mother is in on it that is bad.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2018 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 41
I'm glad Bella finally asked specifically for Jasper. It sure sounds like a lot of dam fools need some torture time before death.
Date: 24 Feb 2018 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 41
WTF is going on here? Tanya's dad and Edward's mother are in cahoots trying to take him and his father down? Is that what's happening? I think it's not going to work. The tension is thick here. Great chapter!
Date: 24 Feb 2018 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 41
about time she said no more until Jasper comes in.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
I don't know how to vote
Date: 16 Feb 2018 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 40
I love this story and have voted for you so good luck I hope you get through
Date: 16 Feb 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 40
excellent chapter, can not wait to find out more
Date: 16 Feb 2018 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 40
I am so glad Bella kept her wits about her. She wasn't fooled. Edward was always careful around her so she really can't help them. Now that her phone is destroyed, she will definitely not help them. Jasper needs to get his ass there to help her.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 40
Well hopefully they are all on to Denali's bull crap now as well. Where the hell is Jasper??
Date: 15 Feb 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thanks for the chapter! Clearly the people who have her are not law enforcement of any kind, as they would have to give her access to a lawyer of her choice. I hope Edward finds her in time! Whoever this Jarvis is, he is acting outside of the law.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2018 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 38
Ooooooooh!!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2018 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 38
Nooooo, you can't stop there. Love it a lot, shows and cleared some of the doubts surrounding Jasper's actions. Thanks.
Date: 10 Feb 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thanks for the extra chapter clarifying things about Jasper and about Tanya. You are the best!
Date: 10 Feb 2018 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh come on please don’t leave us hanging here. Please give us a little more today!!
Date: 10 Feb 2018 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 38
Excellent and necessary chapter! I wasn’t thinking that Jasper had turned on Edward, but it’s good to know that Alice and he are on to Tanya and Edward Sr. Hopefully Alice can get you Edward in time to help Bella before she believes what the FBI is saying about Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2018 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow! Excellent. She is doing well. Th
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love your story can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 37
She needs jasper for sure!!
Date: 04 Feb 2018 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 04 Feb 2018 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow, they pulled out the big guns! I hope Bella doesn’t fall for it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2018 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
I wonder who killed Charlie and sue or if they are Really dead. This stinks of tanya's dad.