Date: 15 Sep 2018 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 71
I'm skeptical. Is she really dead? I'm sure bitchy Esme figured it out and got away some how. hmmmm....... Esme's character made me dam angry and paranoid. I hope she is gone. I would've loved to read her POV knowing the jig is up. It being a total surprise and not knowing she was bested and gonna die kind of rubs me the wrong way. In a story, I would be one of those villains who give long speeches before I did my deeds. LOL
Date: 13 Sep 2018 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 70
OMG! That was priceless!! I can’t tell you how much I enjoyed that. I’m glad that played out so perfectly with Tanya. Thank you for the laughs! Can’t wait for the next chapter to see some of the fallout from this. Tanya’s POV with people from her circle contacting her or maybe seeing all the juicy tidbits in the society column would be awesome! Just a thought!
Date: 09 Sep 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 70
Oh I LOVED how they dealt with Tanya. I don't watch The Good Wife, so I don't get your reference, but I don't think I need that to understant the gist of what is going on here. What a perfect cover for them to set up. Now when Tanya disappears, or if she does, their alibi is already all set up. I love that Bella handled Tanya in the smoothest of manners! Bravo! So the story is winding down. I have mixed feelings. I have loved reading it but all stories do come to an end, I know. Thanks for a great ride!
Date: 08 Sep 2018 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 70
I hope Tanya is truly gone. But I can't help feel she needs to be more permanently dealt with. LOL. I love sexy in control Bella. I'm wondering how Charlie is going to deal with stuff. I wonder if he knows law officials lied to his daughter and showed her doctored pics of him dead. Hmmmm.... I love this chapter and I'm looking forward to more dumb asses being dealt with. ;)
Date: 02 Sep 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 69
Ah! Married at last! I do like that they had a small ceremony, without a white dress, and no fuss afterward. It's very good to see Edward relaxed and happy with his new bride. Just that small mention of Michael's demise was all the business mentioned. That they became members of that mile high club was also a treat. Wish I could have watched...thank you so much for this and all your lovely stories. I thought of you yesterday as I changed my calendar to September and viewed another lovely scene from your area of the world.
Date: 25 Aug 2018 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 68
This chapter was a delicious preview of the wedding night. He is finally able to show her who he really is and it started here. Your oh so slow build up is finally ready to burst into the fulfillment of the story title. I am so ready to see that! I hope the wedding goes off without a hitch. In their kind of life, this moment is very much needed. Thanks for this wonderfully entertaining story! I enjoy the heck out of the slow burn. Now it's time to sizzle! Thanks again for eveything!
Date: 19 Aug 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 67
I think Michael is shaking in his boots about now. He should be freakin terrified! I agree that Bella needs to adapt, but I’m quite sure it’s easier said than done. I love Mrs. B. She’s the best. I wish I had a Mrs. B. Of course, I wish I had Edward’s bank account too!
Date: 18 Aug 2018 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 67
I like that focusing on her wedding trip has distracted Bella from wanting to kill Tanya. I think that might happen soon anyway. Bella's clothes sound lovely. I wish I could wear things like that...Edward's clothes sound great too. So they are ensuring Esme's demise with these latest plans, I think. Even though I didn't like my mother very much, I can't imaging reveling in her demise. I would never make a good mobster. I very much enjoy reading what you write, though, and live vicariously through it! LOL. Thanks!
Date: 18 Aug 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 67
It's always worth the wait!! I think bella is going to tell him to unleash his demading voice on her. Or at least she needs too! Now that tanya has gotten in maybe edward can buy her dream condo for her. That would make a lovely wedding gift. When ever i see a commercial or a sign for ikea i always think of of this story. :)
Date: 18 Aug 2018 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 67
Hopefully Edward will start including Bella in everything she wants to be included in. I can't wait to hopefully read Esme's shock of being caught at everything and what happens to her. If I was Bella though, Edward's bossiness would not be tolerated.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 66
wonder if we'll be reading about a mob torture on michael
who apparently has not only got the hots for Tanya but is good for
nothing letting her into Edward and Bella's home. He must have done
something to create a diversion for embry. That Tanya gets around.
she needs to be whacked sooner rather than later.
Date: 12 Aug 2018 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 66
I have to say it's great that you want to donate, now but you know it's been going on since 2014 or before. You are just now hearing about it because Trump is president and not Obama. Oh did you hear about the mother who sent her daughter with some man who said he was her father, and when they let them go, he raped her because he really wasn't her father but by the time border control found out he was long gone. So I have to say that the border control checking to make sure that the people bringing children across the border are their parents is a good thing. Oh great chapter.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 66
I am trying to donate to that cause as I see a lot of the people I read, or have read, are donating. I already donate monthly to one of the causes, so was told a receipt for that would suffice.
Who the hell does Tanya think she is? And who is Michael? Is he a mole? Is he on her side? Oh, this brings up so many questions. I will wait. I know you will answer them all without me even asking. Thanks.
Date: 05 Aug 2018 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 65
Well well well. I wonder how Esme will react to having her guns removed and her escape home blown up. We shall see! Hooray for Edward and Bella! They need to get to Vegas soon. I'm glad the got engaged and are a hoot to read about. Thanks so much!
Date: 28 Jul 2018 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 64
Yippie!! There going to Vegas to get married, hopefully without problems, so that when nasty Tanya finds out she swallows her tongue knowing that she is truly fu*ked!! Hehehe
Keep the new chapters coming, bcuz I can't wait to see how you make this play out!!
Date: 28 Jul 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 64
oh yes! Finally! Are they really going to Vegas to get married? I'd be so happy if they did. These two started out slowly, but they have built to a solid relationship and both deserve this so much. I hope no plans come up that derail this, but shit DOES happen. Thanks for everything! You always give the best entertainment with your stories. It means so much to this old, semi-disabled woman. Thanks, too for your friendship...
Date: 25 Jul 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 63
I love it when the story starts to come
together... and the "good" guys have a nice
plan to catch all of the nasty players... though
esme is the wife and the mother, she deserves
to rot in hell for all of her manipulations and
underhandedness...to actually plan the murders
of your children and husband... how evil she
must be...then to try to be with someone who
made your child miserable, to steal from him, to have
lied to him, to have cheated on him...
guess those women were made for each other.