Date: 08 Aug 2019 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward needs to learn the finer points of patience...
Date: 08 Aug 2019 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
GReat beginning,,,looking forward to the rest.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2018 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 69
Love that ending to this chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2018 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 75
you two did a great job
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 75
Nice ending. Glad E was able to tie up loose ends and let Em go as well.
TY for writing and sharing
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2018 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 75
I like that Alice, rather than Emmett, was the better fit for the family. Bella supporting Edward and Edward letting her know everything is really romantic in a weird way. I loved the story. :)
Date: 28 Oct 2018 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 75
thank you for a great story!
Date: 27 Oct 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 75
Amazing I have read it from the start loved this story and have always enjoyed your regular updates. I love this Edward and Bella they are a great couple. You are an amazing writer I can’t wait to see what you do next thanks for all your hard word and effort on the story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 74
glad to hear about mom, another great chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 74
Bella is going to 'playfully' kick Edward's ass. LOL
Date: 17 Oct 2018 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 74
Hope Rosie doesn't get hurt. I'd be pissed if I were Bella being treated like that . Hmm wonder if Alice is for real or not
Date: 16 Oct 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 74
I hope Emmett gets his act together soon.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2018 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
My prayers are with your mom and family Bless you all ! Love your story can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 73
I hoped that not the end
Date: 10 Oct 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 73
Bella will be so much help to Edward. Emmett needs to manup. He knew what was going on and he wasn't close to her. I hope Edward sent someone to watch over Emmett, so he doesn't do something stupid.
Date: 10 Oct 2018 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 73
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2018 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 73
I'm so pleased that Edward decided to fully confide in Bella and that she is planning on supporting and helping him. Poor Emmett just can't handle crime life. Poor Edward for feeling like he is all alone. Maybe Bella will change that.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2018 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 73
I'm so pleased that Edward decided to fully confide in Bella and that she is planning on supporting and helping him. Poor Emmett just can't handle crime life. Poor Edward for feeling like he is all alone. Maybe Bella will change that.
Date: 08 Oct 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 73
Em really needs a new line of work. He's too unstable Ah well.
Family comes first If you take a little long, that is perfectly OK We'll still be here.
Date: 08 Oct 2018 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 73
You are doing fine. I understand hospitals. My husband was in one for two months prior to his death this year. It took so much out of me, I would do it all over again to be with him.
Date: 02 Oct 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 72
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 01 Oct 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 72
Emmett still needs a part of the business, just the lighter side of the business. He will get over this mess. I hope Esme is dead, but since she is evil, she can show up again.
Date: 30 Sep 2018 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 72
Sorry about your mom. My thoughts and prayers are with y’all.
Date: 30 Sep 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 72
Poor Emmett. I’m on the fence too on whether or not she’s really dead. I wonder how long it will take them to find Esme’s hidden safe. How will Tanya react? ”
Date: 30 Sep 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 72
She needs to be dead... that woman is a troll... lmfao
Date: 30 Sep 2018 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 72
Really sounds like Em needs to bow out . Glad esme is gone My way I could think of to survive would be if she was in some underground tunnel But I highly doubt it.
Sorry to here about your friend and your mom.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 72
Thank you for the update..I'm sorry to hear about your Mom..🙁...Hop fully she will make a full recovery ...Well done ..now I'm not sure if she is dead..it didn't seem like she h ad time to get out..Esme dud realize Edward knew about what she was doing..if Esme didn't have a escape route she dead..until you post again
Date: 29 Sep 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 72
I hope the bitch is dead!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 72
Well I'm still worried about that crazy hag! LOL Emmett, Alice, Edward and Carlisle will have to work through their feelings eventually. It will be harder for Emmett it seems. poor guy.....
Date: 16 Sep 2018 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 71
Well how sure are we she’s really dead now Jarvis run you are next I think
Date: 16 Sep 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 71
She got off pretty easy if you ask me. Wonder why she didn't go off on Consuela for the way she was called down
Date: 16 Sep 2018 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 71
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2018 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 71
OOOOO! I wonder how it went on state side .
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2018 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 71
Thank you for the update..well done...Edward is ruthless..he gets the job done...until you post again
Date: 15 Sep 2018 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 71
Well I for one would love to see if confirmed that Esme is no more. Inworry that since Carlos didn't do, was the deed actually done??
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2018 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 71
I'm skeptical. Is she really dead? I'm sure bitchy Esme figured it out and got away some how. hmmmm....... Esme's character made me dam angry and paranoid. I hope she is gone. I would've loved to read her POV knowing the jig is up. It being a total surprise and not knowing she was bested and gonna die kind of rubs me the wrong way. In a story, I would be one of those villains who give long speeches before I did my deeds. LOL
Date: 15 Sep 2018 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 71
But is it really done? Could the son have double-crossed his father?
Date: 13 Sep 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 70
OMG! That was priceless!! I can’t tell you how much I enjoyed that. I’m glad that played out so perfectly with Tanya. Thank you for the laughs! Can’t wait for the next chapter to see some of the fallout from this. Tanya’s POV with people from her circle contacting her or maybe seeing all the juicy tidbits in the society column would be awesome! Just a thought!
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 70
would certainly like more
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 70
I love Bella getting to stand up to tanya on her own! This was an amazing chapter. And I will always wait.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 70
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 10 Sep 2018 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 70
Oh I LOVED how they dealt with Tanya. I don't watch The Good Wife, so I don't get your reference, but I don't think I need that to understant the gist of what is going on here. What a perfect cover for them to set up. Now when Tanya disappears, or if she does, their alibi is already all set up. I love that Bella handled Tanya in the smoothest of manners! Bravo! So the story is winding down. I have mixed feelings. I have loved reading it but all stories do come to an end, I know. Thanks for a great ride!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 70
Hopefully Rose will be ok. Don't know if she'll survive if anything happens to Em. Go Bella Put the skank in her place.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 70
I hope Tanya is truly gone. But I can't help feel she needs to be more permanently dealt with. LOL. I love sexy in control Bella. I'm wondering how Charlie is going to deal with stuff. I wonder if he knows law officials lied to his daughter and showed her doctored pics of him dead. Hmmmm.... I love this chapter and I'm looking forward to more dumb asses being dealt with. ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 69
Love this chapter. I think Bella is going to be a great asset to the Cullen Family :)
Date: 03 Sep 2018 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 69
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 02 Sep 2018 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 69
Ah! Married at last! I do like that they had a small ceremony, without a white dress, and no fuss afterward. It's very good to see Edward relaxed and happy with his new bride. Just that small mention of Michael's demise was all the business mentioned. That they became members of that mile high club was also a treat. Wish I could have watched...thank you so much for this and all your lovely stories. I thought of you yesterday as I changed my calendar to September and viewed another lovely scene from your area of the world.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 69
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!
Date: 02 Sep 2018 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 69
Woo hoo they're married!! Sadly work rarely waits for anyone.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2018 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 69
Well Bella can be told stuff now, but it seems like she wants to delay it. I wonder what was so urgent with Charlie. Hmmmmm.........
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 68
I think we had all been ready for edward to get his freak on with bella. I think he still has a bit more kink to show her on their wedding nite.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 68
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 28 Aug 2018 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 68
I don't understand women who don't like a take charge kind of guy in the bedroom. As long as there is love behind the action.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 68
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 68
This chapter was perfect I love it very much. Looking forward to the wedding!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 68
Hopefully Edward finally believes Bella wants to marry him now.
Date: 26 Aug 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 68
Woo hoo Vegas! Can't wait for next
Date: 25 Aug 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 68
This chapter was a delicious preview of the wedding night. He is finally able to show her who he really is and it started here. Your oh so slow build up is finally ready to burst into the fulfillment of the story title. I am so ready to see that! I hope the wedding goes off without a hitch. In their kind of life, this moment is very much needed. Thanks for this wonderfully entertaining story! I enjoy the heck out of the slow burn. Now it's time to sizzle! Thanks again for eveything!
Date: 25 Aug 2018 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 68
I loved this chapter!! Cannot wait for the wedding!!
Date: 20 Aug 2018 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 67
I love fiesty Bella. She is correct that she needs to make some adjustments, but really everyone does when they get married.
Date: 19 Aug 2018 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 67
I think Michael is shaking in his boots about now. He should be freakin terrified! I agree that Bella needs to adapt, but I’m quite sure it’s easier said than done. I love Mrs. B. She’s the best. I wish I had a Mrs. B. Of course, I wish I had Edward’s bank account too!
Date: 19 Aug 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 67
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 18 Aug 2018 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 67
I like that focusing on her wedding trip has distracted Bella from wanting to kill Tanya. I think that might happen soon anyway. Bella's clothes sound lovely. I wish I could wear things like that...Edward's clothes sound great too. So they are ensuring Esme's demise with these latest plans, I think. Even though I didn't like my mother very much, I can't imaging reveling in her demise. I would never make a good mobster. I very much enjoy reading what you write, though, and live vicariously through it! LOL. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 67
It's always worth the wait!! I think bella is going to tell him to unleash his demading voice on her. Or at least she needs too! Now that tanya has gotten in maybe edward can buy her dream condo for her. That would make a lovely wedding gift. When ever i see a commercial or a sign for ikea i always think of of this story. :)
Date: 18 Aug 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much! Thank you for sharing your awesomeness with us.
Date: 18 Aug 2018 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 67
Hopefully he can take care of the Tanya problem like the mom problem soon!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2018 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 67
Love this story!
Date: 18 Aug 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 67
Gotta love Ms Cope. Hopefully jasper will be able to deal with everything thrown his way.
Date: 18 Aug 2018 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 67
Please be graphic when Edward gets to Michael...please, please, please. I cracked up at Jasper’s shock. You’d think he would be aware by now. This story is awesome!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2018 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 67
Hopefully Edward will start including Bella in everything she wants to be included in. I can't wait to hopefully read Esme's shock of being caught at everything and what happens to her. If I was Bella though, Edward's bossiness would not be tolerated.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 66
Bella better tell Edward everything that happened. Michael needs to go ASAP. He signed his death warrent.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 66
wonder if we'll be reading about a mob torture on michael
who apparently has not only got the hots for Tanya but is good for
nothing letting her into Edward and Bella's home. He must have done
something to create a diversion for embry. That Tanya gets around.
she needs to be whacked sooner rather than later.
Date: 14 Aug 2018 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 66
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 66
I think he is going to have to do a bit more wooing.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 65
Roses are not going to be enough.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2018 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 66
Gotta love pissed off Bella. Of course she can shoot, duh. Sounds like Michael is in for something not so nice.
Date: 12 Aug 2018 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 66
I have to say it's great that you want to donate, now but you know it's been going on since 2014 or before. You are just now hearing about it because Trump is president and not Obama. Oh did you hear about the mother who sent her daughter with some man who said he was her father, and when they let them go, he raped her because he really wasn't her father but by the time border control found out he was long gone. So I have to say that the border control checking to make sure that the people bringing children across the border are their parents is a good thing. Oh great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2018 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 66
Oh my..Thank you for the update..Well done..Bella is MAD!!...Edward better watch himself...Much ale can forget about it when Edwasrd gets a hold of him...I can't wait for Edward to get back..until you post again
Date: 11 Aug 2018 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 66
I am trying to donate to that cause as I see a lot of the people I read, or have read, are donating. I already donate monthly to one of the causes, so was told a receipt for that would suffice.
Who the hell does Tanya think she is? And who is Michael? Is he a mole? Is he on her side? Oh, this brings up so many questions. I will wait. I know you will answer them all without me even asking. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2018 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 66
A LITTLE SHORT BUT BETTER THAN NOTHING
Date: 11 Aug 2018 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
My questions are we know Michael let her in but how did she find out the house was empty that Edward was gone did she planted some kind of bug st the house
Date: 11 Aug 2018 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 66
Freaking Tanya wait till Edward finds out what she did that Michael guy is good as dead
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2018 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 66
Tanya and apparently Michael are both morons. They need to 'disappear' I think. I would be pissed if I was Bella as well.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 65
He better be worried. Bella has a temper and especially since they were suppose to leave and get married. He better wear some ball protection.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 65
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 06 Aug 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh that's too funny. They finally are really talking & just when she decides to try & give him a little bit of teasing, the RR Squad jumps in.
I'm enjoying your story.