Date: 17 Jul 2018 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 61
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 62
Thank you for the update..wow..Esme & Tanya they don't care who there with...Well Esme want's out of the life but wants the money..Tanya wants money & prestige and Edward's house...lol..unti, you post again...wait until Esme finds out she's broke...lol..I can't wait...If Tanya thinks Bella is a push over she can forget that
Date: 16 Jul 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 62
WOW! Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2018 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 62
hope you had a great birthday, better to be a year older than the alternative
Date: 16 Jul 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 62
wow those two females (refuse to call them women) are two twisted individuals....not the lesbian part but the scheming, lying, biathes they are. They deserve each other. Sigh
Date: 15 Jul 2018 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 62
I really love this story. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 15 Jul 2018 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 62
Thanks so much for these extra POVs! Now we see just what these two bossy, controlling women are actually doing. Won't they both be surprised when their world crumbles around them? I bet so. Can't wait to see what happens next...but of course I will.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2018 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 62
Wow! I don't know which of them is more delusional. I hope Edward is still having both of them followed.
Date: 15 Jul 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 62
Can’t wait until they find out Edward Snr is dead. The fallout from that should most definitely be quite interesting!
Date: 15 Jul 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 61
Uh oh!! What is Tanya going to do? This should be interesting!! Can’t wait to find out.
Happy Birthday!! Hope you have a wonderful day!
Date: 15 Jul 2018 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 61
Hmm the skankya thing is going to get really ugly I'm afraid. Sure Esme will be willing to help as well. Sigh
Date: 14 Jul 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 61
Thanks for the look into Tanya's mind. I see she had previously brushed Bella off as a temporary distraction for Edward. I'm sure it came as a shock that little Isabella is here to stay! Doesn't she know of the two people Edward has already taken out? She soon will, I'm guessing! I loved the opening part of this chapter where Edward actually turned off his phone so he and Bella could get some alone time. They needed that! Thanks again for the lovely postcards you sent me. I love seeing the sights around where you live! So pretty! Congrats on the big 50. You still have MANY good years to come! Thanks for all your precious words!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 61
Dam! Tanya is more delusional than Esme or her own crazy dad.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 60
I love this chapter!
Date: 09 Jul 2018 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 60
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 08 Jul 2018 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 60
Can't wait till e&b tie the Knot. Sounds like b&a had a great time.
Date: 08 Jul 2018 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 60
Some part of Edward, and maybe the rest of the family, must hurt to know that his mother has betrayed him, and them. How could he not? I'm not thinking that he will let any feelings get in the way of what he has to do, but geez! That's his MOTHER!! Love that Bella and Alice are becoming closer. Better, I think, for Edward to keep Jasper close as his consigliere and get a new lawyer, if he has to. Or maybe Jasper has a preference that Edward might honor...I'm wondering what Esme and Tanya are up to...and can't wait for them to find out Denali is gone...I got another postcard from you. How very thoughtful of you. I just love it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2018 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 60
Edward needs to get on the ball with marrying Bella. LOL It sounds like it;s what they both want. Alice and Bella's bonding was sweet and natural. I can't wait to see how they tsake down Esme, Tanya and that scummy fed.
Date: 02 Jul 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 59
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2018 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 59
I love that Esme's little dramatic escape plan isn't going to work. I'm still pondering if Esme is in love with Tanya or Carmen....... hmmmmm...........
I'm thrilled that Bella is planning on proposing to Edward.
Date: 28 Jun 2018 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 59
oh your trip with your daughter sounds wonderful! I'm glad you were able to get away for a while! I received your picture postcard. Very lovely!
I am cackling with glee. Esme is in for a BIG surprise when she finds out all her plans have been thwarted! Would they also kill her? I kind of hope not so she will have to live in poverty with what she has done. Thanks for the new chapter. I love this story!
Date: 28 Jun 2018 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 59
Yea Jasper does need to grow a pair. Bella seems to have bigger ones than he does.
Poor Carmen. Glad E is going to ensure she's taken care of.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 58
One down, two to go!! This story gets better & better. I think he needs to go home & get loved up on from bella. ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 57
There are still so many questions to answer. I hope daneli gets to find out he has been played by his own daughter & esme.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 56
Hooray! She said it!!! Now if he can just get that ring on her finger!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 55
Esme & tanya it's so gross but oh so scandalous!! They are truly perfect for each other! And her father leaving her nothing puts her running into esme's arms!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
You really blow me away with all these small details. I hope tanya & esme are not together.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
I love how jasper brings his calm to edward.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 52
I would call that a slash & dash!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 51
Looks like bella is do for a punishment spanking!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 50
Edward is going to pass out in being over joyed when she finally says it.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 49
I hope rosie is innocent.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 48
Looks like esme has her name officially on a bullet! I have a feeling bella is going to make a request for more of his animal activity!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 47
I'm so glad she is home and that he told her his feelings!
Date: 17 Jun 2018 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 58
Esme has everyone eating out of her hands.
Date: 16 Jun 2018 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 58
Wow, Esme is one conniving biatch. Can't wait till she goes down.
Date: 16 Jun 2018 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 58
These last few chapters have been pretty brutal, detailing the torture and murder of Denali. Oh, he deserved it, but it is difficult for me to read this kind of brutality. I know it advances the story and I hope that it is over for now. I'm guessing there will be more to come. I'm very interested to see what Esme is doing right about now. Thanks, and i hope all is well with you!
Date: 16 Jun 2018 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 58
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 16 Jun 2018 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 58
Esme really has that man convinced of everything that he should have known was wrong. I bet she could’ve convinced him the sky was purple! Can’t wait to see what Carlisle thinks of all this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2018 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 58
I'm beginning to think Denali was just too dumb to lie. He didn't een see that he was being used in the end.
Date: 16 Jun 2018 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 58
Cannot wait for more!!! It's getting so good!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2018 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 57
Love your story can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 57
I am wonderfully hooked on this
Date: 11 Jun 2018 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 57
Denali is a real piece of work claiming the victim. Sounds like Esme thinks she is the consummate planner and scam artist.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 56
Glad she said it and he proposes soon
Date: 09 Jun 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 57
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2018 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 57
I think Denali needs to squirm with fear and finally feel the betrayal of Esme. I still think Esme and Denali's wife are having an affair. hmmmm.......
Date: 09 Jun 2018 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 57
I wonder where Esme hid most of what she has, her money, her property. That can't be all she has. This tale is unraveling like a warn out dress. I bet Denali won't last long enough to tell them everything. Is Esme in their custody, or did she flee already? Does she even know they're on to her? So many ends left loose...thanks for all you so generously give to your readers.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 57
Oh wow! Tanya is Esme’s lover! Did not see that coming! I wonder if Bella will be the one to figure it out. Great chapter!
Date: 09 Jun 2018 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 57
Tanya's and Esme are lovers, that is why Tanya signed the will.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 56
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 03 Jun 2018 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 56
Wow Denali has a lot of nerve saying those words out loud in front of Carlisle and Edward. Even though they are true, he should have known that speaking the words would get him nothing but pain and death. Will Edward also kill his own mother? yikes. Bella did say here ILYs. Good for her. Now we know she's all in. Edward has some decisions to make. Thanks and see you next week!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2018 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 56
I'm happy that Denali got smacked, even though it sounds like he was played by Esme from the start. And I didn't hear Bella exactly say 'yes'. LOL
Date: 03 Jun 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 56
Man can he ever get that damn proposal out and let her make an honest man of him 😂
Date: 03 Jun 2018 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 56
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2018 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 55
OMG ! Love Love this chapter can't wait to read more. As far as Esme lover I was going to say Tanya or her mother but now I am thinking maybe Liz ??
Date: 28 May 2018 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 55
Well, I have to say I didn’t see that coming!! And for some reason I’m wondering if it’s Tanya. Well, I’ll bet Denali is starting to panic right about now seeing as how they called him on the carpet about his affair with Esme! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 28 May 2018 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 55
Well, I have to say I didn’t see that coming!! And for some reason I’m wondering if it’s Tanya. Well, I’ll bet Denali is starting to panic right about now seeing as how they called him on the carpet about his affair with Esme! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 27 May 2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 55
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 27 May 2018 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 55
They definitely need to clean house.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 55
My guess it's either Tanya or Denalis wife!😂
Date: 26 May 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 55
O-M-G , I was not expecting a female lover for Esme!!???!!?? Please update quickly because I know you are not going to be Crewl and make us wait for the next chapter where hopefully Edward figures out what she is up to. And WHO is this female lover???? Tanya, surely not, oh man I can't wait until the pieces start to come together........
Date: 26 May 2018 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 55
O-M-G , I was not expecting a female lover for Esme!!???!!?? Please update quickly because I know you are not going to be Creek and make us wait for the next chapter where hopefully Edward figures out what she is up to. And WHO is this female lover???? Tanya, surely not, oh man I can't wait until the pieces start to come together........
Date: 26 May 2018 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 55
well well well! this is the first time you have actually given us Esme's POV and for me, at least, let on what is really going on. maybe others are quicker than I, but it seems Esme has a female lover. Is it Tanya? It is interesting that she thinks that she can fool both Carlisle and Edward and get them out of the way, using Denali to do it. Well done, my dear. Kudos to you. I can't wait to see what comes next!!
Date: 26 May 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 55
Yes so it was Tanya her real lover uhh wait till the man find out why do I feel like Tanya is playing esme 2 like all she wants is money just like esme
Date: 26 May 2018 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 55
Holy Moly Batman, what a twist and turn of events
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2018 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 55
Wowsers Denali is a moron.. OMG that Esme twist I was not expecting
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2018 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 55
So Esme is using creepy Denali too. She is probably sleeping with Tanya. They are both so gross. Esme's will is probably made to Tanya. Or not changed at all. Hmmm....
Date: 26 May 2018 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 55
esme is one mean woman, i think jarvis is her secret lover
Date: 19 May 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 54
Seems that Mama Esme has been up to a lot with the Denali’s abd who knows who else! I’m thinking Alex and Paul are going to busy tracking all of her activities. No telling what all they’re going to discover.
Date: 17 May 2018 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 53
When I received chapter 54 in my inbox, I read it. When I went to update my spreadsheet, I found that I had not read this chapter. I don't know what happened. I went back and read this, then chapter 54 made more sense. Sorry about that...
Date: 17 May 2018 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 54
Will they ever get married? There is always one more thing to deal with before they can, and I suspect there always will be, unless he makes it a priority to get married first, no matter what. Maybe they should just get a justice of the peace and do it in secret...no that wouldn't work for a high profile wedding such as theirs. Just who is Esme Cullen, really, and why is she going to such lengths in secret? Is she setting Edward up for something? For every question you answer, there are three more that are asked! Great job!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2018 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 54
Esme is creepy as all fuck.
Date: 17 May 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 54
Wow Esme is a crafty bitch. Glad B didn't accept his proposal yet.
Date: 17 May 2018 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 54
Same has a double life and Edward better figure it out fast. I would start getting my money back as well.
Date: 17 May 2018 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 53
I love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12 May 2018 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 12 May 2018 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 53
Yay emmet and Rosalie why do I think Edwards mom is with Jarvis
Date: 11 May 2018 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 53
Glad the wedding went off well. Guessing Esme is sleeping with Jarvis Or something similar.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 53
It looks like Esme is even stepping out on who she is already cheating with. Dam!! I would love to read her panic when she finds out Denali and Jacob are dead. I hope that Edward proposes to Bella soon.
Date: 06 May 2018 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 52
Sounds like the ladies had an awesome time.
Date: 05 May 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 52
Thanks for the chapter. I think it's a good sign that you can no longer keep up with the reviews. It means you have loads of them! Good going! I know I love to read your work, even the bloody stuff like this! This chapter was a mix of humor and blood. Just a day in the life of a typical mobster. Not hardly! You made all of it shine!
Date: 05 May 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 52
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 05 May 2018 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 52
I love it. Keep them coming! I’ll like to see a Esme POV.
Date: 05 May 2018 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 52
I need a girls night like they had!! Time to make some phone calls. LOL. I can’t wait for the wedding. I love this story so much. I’ll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2018 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 52
Oh my, interesting story, I just don't like the killing, but it is that kind of story, carry on
Date: 05 May 2018 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 52
Would love to read a double wedding or Bella feel left out and ask Edward to marry her instead
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 52
Well they cleaned up the only biters to try and hit Edward and Carlisle. I can't wait until Elezar, Esme and Aro go down as well. I liked Edward's thoughts of a double wedding.