[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 58
One down, two to go!! This story gets better & better. I think he needs to go home & get loved up on from bella. ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 57
There are still so many questions to answer. I hope daneli gets to find out he has been played by his own daughter & esme.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 56
Hooray! She said it!!! Now if he can just get that ring on her finger!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 55
Esme & tanya it's so gross but oh so scandalous!! They are truly perfect for each other! And her father leaving her nothing puts her running into esme's arms!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
You really blow me away with all these small details. I hope tanya & esme are not together.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
I love how jasper brings his calm to edward.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 52
I would call that a slash & dash!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 51
Looks like bella is do for a punishment spanking!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 50
Edward is going to pass out in being over joyed when she finally says it.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 49
I hope rosie is innocent.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 48
Looks like esme has her name officially on a bullet! I have a feeling bella is going to make a request for more of his animal activity!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 47
I'm so glad she is home and that he told her his feelings!
Date: 17 Jun 2018 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 58
Esme has everyone eating out of her hands.
Date: 17 Jun 2018 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 58
Wow, Esme is one conniving biatch. Can't wait till she goes down.
Date: 16 Jun 2018 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 58
These last few chapters have been pretty brutal, detailing the torture and murder of Denali. Oh, he deserved it, but it is difficult for me to read this kind of brutality. I know it advances the story and I hope that it is over for now. I'm guessing there will be more to come. I'm very interested to see what Esme is doing right about now. Thanks, and i hope all is well with you!
Date: 16 Jun 2018 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 58
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 16 Jun 2018 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 58
Esme really has that man convinced of everything that he should have known was wrong. I bet she could’ve convinced him the sky was purple! Can’t wait to see what Carlisle thinks of all this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2018 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 58
I'm beginning to think Denali was just too dumb to lie. He didn't een see that he was being used in the end.
Date: 16 Jun 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 58
Cannot wait for more!!! It's getting so good!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2018 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 57
Love your story can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 57
I am wonderfully hooked on this
Date: 11 Jun 2018 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 57
Denali is a real piece of work claiming the victim. Sounds like Esme thinks she is the consummate planner and scam artist.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 56
Glad she said it and he proposes soon
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2018 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
intriguing
Date: 10 Jun 2018 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 57
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 57
I think Denali needs to squirm with fear and finally feel the betrayal of Esme. I still think Esme and Denali's wife are having an affair. hmmmm.......
Date: 09 Jun 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 57
I wonder where Esme hid most of what she has, her money, her property. That can't be all she has. This tale is unraveling like a warn out dress. I bet Denali won't last long enough to tell them everything. Is Esme in their custody, or did she flee already? Does she even know they're on to her? So many ends left loose...thanks for all you so generously give to your readers.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 57
Oh wow! Tanya is Esme’s lover! Did not see that coming! I wonder if Bella will be the one to figure it out. Great chapter!
Date: 09 Jun 2018 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 57
Tanya's and Esme are lovers, that is why Tanya signed the will.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2018 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 56
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 03 Jun 2018 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 56
Wow Denali has a lot of nerve saying those words out loud in front of Carlisle and Edward. Even though they are true, he should have known that speaking the words would get him nothing but pain and death. Will Edward also kill his own mother? yikes. Bella did say here ILYs. Good for her. Now we know she's all in. Edward has some decisions to make. Thanks and see you next week!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2018 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 56
I'm happy that Denali got smacked, even though it sounds like he was played by Esme from the start. And I didn't hear Bella exactly say 'yes'. LOL
Date: 03 Jun 2018 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 56
Man can he ever get that damn proposal out and let her make an honest man of him 😂
Date: 03 Jun 2018 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 56
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 55
OMG ! Love Love this chapter can't wait to read more. As far as Esme lover I was going to say Tanya or her mother but now I am thinking maybe Liz ??
Date: 28 May 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 55
Well, I have to say I didn’t see that coming!! And for some reason I’m wondering if it’s Tanya. Well, I’ll bet Denali is starting to panic right about now seeing as how they called him on the carpet about his affair with Esme! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 28 May 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 55
Well, I have to say I didn’t see that coming!! And for some reason I’m wondering if it’s Tanya. Well, I’ll bet Denali is starting to panic right about now seeing as how they called him on the carpet about his affair with Esme! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 28 May 2018 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 55
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 27 May 2018 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 55
They definitely need to clean house.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 55
My guess it's either Tanya or Denalis wife!😂
Date: 26 May 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 55
O-M-G , I was not expecting a female lover for Esme!!???!!?? Please update quickly because I know you are not going to be Crewl and make us wait for the next chapter where hopefully Edward figures out what she is up to. And WHO is this female lover???? Tanya, surely not, oh man I can't wait until the pieces start to come together........
Date: 26 May 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 55
O-M-G , I was not expecting a female lover for Esme!!???!!?? Please update quickly because I know you are not going to be Creek and make us wait for the next chapter where hopefully Edward figures out what she is up to. And WHO is this female lover???? Tanya, surely not, oh man I can't wait until the pieces start to come together........
Date: 26 May 2018 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 55
well well well! this is the first time you have actually given us Esme's POV and for me, at least, let on what is really going on. maybe others are quicker than I, but it seems Esme has a female lover. Is it Tanya? It is interesting that she thinks that she can fool both Carlisle and Edward and get them out of the way, using Denali to do it. Well done, my dear. Kudos to you. I can't wait to see what comes next!!
Date: 26 May 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 55
Yes so it was Tanya her real lover uhh wait till the man find out why do I feel like Tanya is playing esme 2 like all she wants is money just like esme
Date: 26 May 2018 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 55
Holy Moly Batman, what a twist and turn of events
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 55
Wowsers Denali is a moron.. OMG that Esme twist I was not expecting
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2018 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 55
So Esme is using creepy Denali too. She is probably sleeping with Tanya. They are both so gross. Esme's will is probably made to Tanya. Or not changed at all. Hmmm....
Date: 26 May 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 55
esme is one mean woman, i think jarvis is her secret lover
Date: 19 May 2018 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 54
Seems that Mama Esme has been up to a lot with the Denali’s abd who knows who else! I’m thinking Alex and Paul are going to busy tracking all of her activities. No telling what all they’re going to discover.
Date: 17 May 2018 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 53
When I received chapter 54 in my inbox, I read it. When I went to update my spreadsheet, I found that I had not read this chapter. I don't know what happened. I went back and read this, then chapter 54 made more sense. Sorry about that...
Date: 17 May 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 54
Will they ever get married? There is always one more thing to deal with before they can, and I suspect there always will be, unless he makes it a priority to get married first, no matter what. Maybe they should just get a justice of the peace and do it in secret...no that wouldn't work for a high profile wedding such as theirs. Just who is Esme Cullen, really, and why is she going to such lengths in secret? Is she setting Edward up for something? For every question you answer, there are three more that are asked! Great job!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2018 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 54
Esme is creepy as all fuck.
Date: 17 May 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 54
Wow Esme is a crafty bitch. Glad B didn't accept his proposal yet.
Date: 17 May 2018 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 54
Same has a double life and Edward better figure it out fast. I would start getting my money back as well.
Date: 17 May 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 53
I love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12 May 2018 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 12 May 2018 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 53
Yay emmet and Rosalie why do I think Edwards mom is with Jarvis
Date: 12 May 2018 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 53
Glad the wedding went off well. Guessing Esme is sleeping with Jarvis Or something similar.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 53
It looks like Esme is even stepping out on who she is already cheating with. Dam!! I would love to read her panic when she finds out Denali and Jacob are dead. I hope that Edward proposes to Bella soon.
Date: 06 May 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 52
Sounds like the ladies had an awesome time.
Date: 05 May 2018 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 52
Thanks for the chapter. I think it's a good sign that you can no longer keep up with the reviews. It means you have loads of them! Good going! I know I love to read your work, even the bloody stuff like this! This chapter was a mix of humor and blood. Just a day in the life of a typical mobster. Not hardly! You made all of it shine!
Date: 05 May 2018 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 52
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 05 May 2018 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 52
I love it. Keep them coming! I’ll like to see a Esme POV.
Date: 05 May 2018 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 52
I need a girls night like they had!! Time to make some phone calls. LOL. I can’t wait for the wedding. I love this story so much. I’ll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2018 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 52
Oh my, interesting story, I just don't like the killing, but it is that kind of story, carry on
Date: 05 May 2018 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 52
Would love to read a double wedding or Bella feel left out and ask Edward to marry her instead
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2018 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 52
Well they cleaned up the only biters to try and hit Edward and Carlisle. I can't wait until Elezar, Esme and Aro go down as well. I liked Edward's thoughts of a double wedding.
Date: 01 May 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 51
wow B is gonna get Seth's nuts shot off if he's not careful. Glad B is helping Rosie out.
Ack I need a new chapter and soon. Plz and TY
Author's Response:
Loved watching your reviews as you finished a chapter. New one up at the weekend xx
Date: 01 May 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 50
wow They are trying to put Em as the patsy? Just wow.
Date: 01 May 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 49
wondering if Rosie is implicit in this....or being blackmailed somehow. carlisle is def a cool cookie
Date: 01 May 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 48
Sounds like E gave her what she needed. Can't fault him for not being able to talk to her about stuff
Date: 01 May 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 47
Yea MamaC has really screwed the pooch it seems. Sucks for A, Em , & E and PapaC
Date: 01 May 2018 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 46
hmmm Wondering which side Call is actually on. Can't blame B for having to ask, but a little calmer would have been better. Don't think E's going to take it well
Date: 01 May 2018 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 45
Ah, the Governor's message finally made it there. Can't wait until these pricks all go down for this crap they are pulling. I hope Charlie is ok
OMG Tell these people to write their own story if they want to dictate timelines to you. Jeez
Date: 01 May 2018 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 44
Bella is such a smart cookie. Can't wait until they all go down for screwing with her.
Date: 01 May 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 43
Hope Jasper really is on the up and up. LOVE Bella not falling for all the crap these supposed agents are putting out
Date: 01 May 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
Wowsers HAWTNESS
Date: 01 May 2018 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ah so I'm guessing Charlie is still alive then. Those two really want to die horrible deaths, esp denali.
Date: 01 May 2018 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMG Denali really wants to die, doesn't he? Glad B isn't falling for all this crap. I wonder if Charlie is really dead or just photoshopped pics.
Date: 01 May 2018 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 38
Yea sounds like this Aro dude and Denali are all into this crap. Wonder how much mommy dearest is involved? Ack questions questions questions
Date: 01 May 2018 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh Aro...you better hope that Charlie really isn't dead; you sneaky SOB.
Date: 01 May 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 36
Yea her going with the agents was soooo not a smart idea.
Date: 01 May 2018 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
Love that B is being reasonable about safety. Jarvis not being in the system is def suspect.
Write your story how you like. They are your characters and plot.
Date: 01 May 2018 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 34
His mother is def working with someone.... wonder if she's bonking Denali on the side. hmmm
Date: 01 May 2018 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow Jarvis and his team are really getting way to close. Wonder what mother dearest is going to say now
Date: 01 May 2018 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow Jarvis is really stepping things up. Denali or denali Hired. Has to be.
Date: 01 May 2018 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
hmmm now you have me thinking that Mr Denali is or hired Jarvis. Esme really needs to back off before she really screws up her life.
Date: 01 May 2018 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yea mother dearest is going to be a PITA. Love the banter between E and B. Wonder when her Dad will be arriving in this story.
Date: 01 May 2018 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
ooh that was hawt
Date: 01 May 2018 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yea his mother is a real piece of work having lunch with the cheating skank. Em really need to get a chill pill. Its no wonder E doesn't want them socializing so much. Its like he's trying to attract attention to himself.
Date: 01 May 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
aww for the snuggling. Go Bella. Wake that man up.