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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 194

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 194

I hope who every is at the door is a friend

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 193

Bella is taking is very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 192

That didnt work out the way Tanya wanted but she is getting some money I am sure the test didnt cost that much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 191

He needs to deal with the bitch

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 190

Bella asked a good ?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 189

He should of kicked her to the curb then.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 188

Glad he told her but she is going to freak out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 187

He needs to tell her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 186

Emmett doesnt want to be around Tanya either lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 185

He needs to tell Bella about Tanya and the shit she is trying to pull

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 184

Tanya just wont give up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 183

He was happy to do it :)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 189

Wow all caught up and poor bella!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 189

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 189

I can't believe he still dated her after he caught her poking holes in them. 



Author's Response:

He always used safe ones

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 187

Can't wait to hear what he has to say..

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 185

Oh no. Poor Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 184

What????? Did I miss something.



Author's Response:

Not sure need more info

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 189

Oh Bella please believe him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 185

:) :) 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 185

Fucking Bitch!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 182

nice updates

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 181

PPoor Bella. I hope Renee pays for what all she has done to her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 180

Ed ward is so good to her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 179

Glad Sarah helped her

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 182

aw he realy love's her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 182

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 182

He is feeling realy good about Bella living with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 181

She is healing good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 180

He is good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 179

She will feel better after a shower

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 175

Why did she go by Irene West??? 



Author's Response:

So that Bella wasn't connected to her clean name and so Bella wouldn't drag down her status as a amazing parent 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 178

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 178

not ready for that

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 177

so much a gentleman

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 176

he is making sure no messing around would be done I dont think she would be able to

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 174

Renee has really screwed up Bella's mind. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 173

What is she so worried about? What did he find out?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 175

poor girl could not even go by her real name

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 172

Renee would leave a 6 year old all alone for days. Thats just wrong. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 171

Renee did not serve to have kids. That is awful.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 170

I'm sure Alice just feels like Bella is her sister since they have been friends for awhile.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 178

i wonder what that look that his gave him was it becuse of what bella went there or still be going threw

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 174

What an evil mother! Carlisle is great with her. If Alice knew her mom did this long ago, why didn't she tell her dad? Love the story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 174

:) :) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 174

Wow, what a terrible childhood. Can you make the chapters a bit longer?

Not telling you what to do, just wondered why the chapters were so short. Keep on writing



Author's Response:

The chapters are so short to challenge myself 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 174

Bella has really been though alot..we need to find Renee and beat her down!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

thank you for the explaination...I do love your story..Can't wait to see how it all unfolds



Author's Response:

Your are welcome

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 174

she is so afraid of being left so sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 173

she is ashamed of herself the one that should hold all of the shame is Renee

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 172

find that women and put her in a hole and leave her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 171

I want to kick Renee's ass bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 170

Bella is good now with them around but is she going to melt down every time he is not around poor girl

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 174

does anyone else what to kill her mother like me

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 169

I am so sad for her :(

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 168

Bella needs as many people around her that care for her as possible

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 167

She is scared

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 166

Three hours he has to be froze poor man

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 165

OMG is something wrong with Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 164

He feels her pain

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 163

Renee will pay

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 162

Her mother will never get to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 161

She missed her childhood living with that bitch of a mother

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 169

thank you for the updates..well done

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 169

i feel for her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 169

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 169

Poor. Bella. I guess she feels like she was never wanted and no one will ever want her. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 165

poor bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 165

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 165

What is wrong? Edward's dad would not be calling unless something was wrong.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 164

Why does she not want to be alone at the hospital? Did I miss something?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 163

Renee is evil. I am assuming that Renee did this stuff when Bella was younger since Rnee has been gone for a while and married Phil. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 160

They are finally letting their feelings be known to each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 159

That is pitiful for her to feel like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 158

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 160

nice updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 160

He will be fast

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 159

So sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 158

That is so scarry

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 157

Dad is very worried about her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 156

Good will she know how did that to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 155

He will take good care of her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 154

Love love love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 153

Who did that to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 152

What in the world

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 151

Seahawks better win lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 150

Who is calling

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 149

She will say yes lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 148

What's with the name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 147

I think they are both happy that she is moving in

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 146

He is very sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 145

That was fast

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 160

oh so cute

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 160

Thank you for the updated....I still want to know what was injected into Bella & who was behind it....until you post again



Author's Response:

Surgical cerment that is use to fix bones in the body. It non toxic and basically harmless when used the correct way. Renee injected it in to Bella every night for her fun as she thought it would kill Bella eventually 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 160

Glad I found this here...I was reading on fictionpad!

Author's Response:

Sorry ficton pad wasn't being nice to me at all wouldn't let me put up the next chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 160

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 155

He will take good care of her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 154

Glad he has his dad

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 156

i hope her mom get's what's comming to her

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