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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 233

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 233

OMG they are evil

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 232

I love the secret word

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 231

That is more like a nightmare

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 230

He cant keep his hands off of her

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 233

I like the smaller chapters, but would be fine with a longer one too!



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Thank you for your vote

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 233

Oh wow those women are stupid very stupid Edward isn't going to fall for there stupid tricks 

 

I wouldn't like more please as many as you want to put up



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Thanks for your vote

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 233

Omg

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 233

Oh my

Reviewer: rocker9113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 233

I would prefer the first option. But you do whichever is more convenient to you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the vote 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 229

Emmett the protecter



Author's Response:

Yes he is

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 228

Dont mess with Edward that poor nurse think he is an asshole

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 227

He is taking such good care of her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 226

Bella is taking that better than I thought

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 229

Oh my how will this go downey 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 229

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 225

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 225

Oh wow she is back and I bet she is with Renee

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 225

What the fuck!!!! Bitch be crazy. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 225

Please dont tell me Tanya is related to Bella

Reviewer: Vero Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 225

How did Tanya get into an accident when she was under arrest? I'm confused here. 



Author's Response:

Renee paid money to get her out of jail

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 224

Tanya was with them this is sick.  someone needs to kick some ass lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 223

one bad one down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 222

she is not use to having someone by her side

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 221

she knows who it is

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 220

this is not good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 219

the place is amazing

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 218

he didnt want to hurt her

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 225

Wow

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 225

Really....

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 221

Keep writing longer chapters

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 221

Was that her father or Phill

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 220

I hate the news it is so depressing

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 219

fancy house

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 218

That scared her poor thing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 221

I hope it's not someone she loves 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 217

thank you for the updates..sorry you where in the hospital, hope all is well with you



Author's Response:

Slowly getting better

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 217

Awe they are so sweet 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 217

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 217

They both need to rest

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 216

He is taking such good care of them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 215

no more gun

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 214

Edward is getting good with guns in the face

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 213

Oh no feel better

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Thank you

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 213

nice update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 213

Why were you in the hospital?  Hope everything is ok. 



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Thank you

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 209

Why all of a sudden is she afraid to be alone. She use to not have a problem leaving Edward after their dates. 



Author's Response:

Because she has just had a traumatic event happen



Author's Response:

Because she has just had a traumatic event happen

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 205

Glad they are home

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 200

Wow, she really did shoot him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 199

Did she shoot him?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 198

Why does she think she is due any money? She is crazy.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 197

Who in the world is it and how did they get a gun in the hospital?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 192

II don't blame Edward for paying for the test. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 189

If he  caught her doing that he should have quit seeing her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 188

Glad he is not keeping secrets from her. 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 213

get better soon 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 213

I hope you feel better soon 



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 213

i hope you get better



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 213

I hope you are OK and thanks for the chapter Take care of yourself.



Author's Response:

Thank you 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 213

I hope your hospital stay is short and your recovery speedy and complete



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 212

So happy she's safe and in his home

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 212

Love it

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 212

i hope they put tonya a way for a long time

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 212

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 212

So sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 211

glad that is out of the way

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 210

fancy

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 212

great update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 209

Poor Bella she has been hurt too much in her life 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 209

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 209

She is safe and that is so new to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 208

She is so lucky

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 207

I think he is right she doesnt want to be far from him

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 206

nice update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 206

Hello I like it and I am looking forward to more 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 206

Hello I like it and I am looking forward to more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2017 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 206

She doesnt want to be away from him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 205

She should feel very safe

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2017 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 204

they will be trapped if they follow them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 206

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2017 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 203

nice updates

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 203

poor bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 203

They are front page news

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 202

What is gbh?



Author's Response:

Grevis bodily Harm

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 201

She is so happy he is OK

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 203

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 200

So glad they got the crazy and he is not hurt but what is this doing to Bella's mind

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2017 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 199

did Bella still have a gun with her to make her feel safe

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 198

He should not have said that she is crazy

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 200

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 200

:) :) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 200

i hope it did't get bella

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 197

Ha what's with people pointing guns at me!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 197

it must be bella mom or tanya or bella mom boyfriend

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 197

is it Tanya?  OMG I have to know NOW lol



Author's Response:

Just be glad that there is a weekday tomorrow 😝

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 196

Edward is her rock

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 195

Both men are very worried about her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 197

:) :) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 197

Renee or Tanya?



Author's Response:

Yes that is the question

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 194

i hope all good things for those two

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