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Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2018 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 33

Bella does not have blond in her hair so I will pretend that you did not write that. I don't see anything wrong with her hair color.

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2018 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 33

Bella does not have blond in her hair so I will pretend that you did not write that. I don't see anything wrong with her hair color.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

why does Bella think Alice has no money and worries she could be pregnant living on the strees

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2018 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

Some people just don't deserve kids

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 263

this story was weird...

however, i did looove the fact that there was

no nonsense drawn out crap against bella...

ie. tanya's pregnancy was immediately shown  to

be not edward's, bella's mom being immediately

villainized by the family, tanya and renee's attempts

curbed at every turn...it was refreshing to read their attempts

not being coddled and put down quickly...i loved that...in some books,

bella is villainized for so long until the truth comes out which is so damn

frustrating... but, this is a strange way to end things...i imagine there

will be a sequel??

Reviewer: mrstroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2018 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 263

Looking forward to the continuation of this story

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 263

Bella sure did have a lot of changes in her life. Your story was very fast paced good for a drabble. Good Luck with your next story!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 263

i don't think much of bella mom and dad

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 263

great story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 263

What the hell???? Is her whole family crazy? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 11:48 PM Title: 391-394

Is Charlie Chief of Police in your story? Is that the reason the young man gasp when Bella told him who she was. 



Author's Response:

No charlie is not in the police. The cop just new of bella and was shocked to see her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 263

Wow!   Charlie was just as bad as Renee!!! Loved this story 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 263

thank you for the update...It wasn't Bella's fault that her Mom was a douch bag..he needed to take that gun to Renee 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 263

Bella has the stupidest family. They should have just killed Charlie. He will come back for more. They are all crazy.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 263

Poor Bella

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 263

What is the deal with Bella,s parents?  Greedy and selfish, and deceitful.  I would dB is owned them so fast.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 263

OMG Charlie needs to go to jail and stay there with Renee.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 263

Wow what the hell just happened why did he try to kill her for the money 

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 263

What the.....

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 263

Hate to see it end.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 7:51 PM Title: 391-394

I cant wait

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 3:48 PM Title: 391-394

Great update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 9:49 AM Title: 391-394

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 9:39 AM Title: 391-394

Hmm what will happen when when they knock on the door 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390

Awe so sweet he is so sweet with her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 386- 390

What a first day of being wife and husband.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

I wonder what Bella is thinking 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 8:54 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

Glad they are finally married. They have drama all around them. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

Its snugle time

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

thank you for the update...Yay they are married and consumated the wedding.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

What a beautiful night for them 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 5:52 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 12:12 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 11:58 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

Awe they are married so sweet but who was the gun man



Author's Response:

Just some random person

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 10:46 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

thank you for the update..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 10:44 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

So glad they are finely married

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:50 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Renee is crazy and Tanya is not far behind her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

Ok, that was sooo not  Edward. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 353-357

I would have never expected this Bella to get a tattoo. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

Edward was turned on and horny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

Wow, they won 2 thousand dollars. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 5:07 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Renee and Tanya are nuts, crazy, off the rails,  OMG WTF put them away for ever lol.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 3:20 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 2:30 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

nice updates

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 12:23 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Wow Renée is crazy hopefully they lock her up in the nuthouse now will the rest of their day go smoothly 

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 8:20 AM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Can’t wait for the new story!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 8:06 AM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Renee and Tanya are wackoo!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 7:34 AM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Very good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

Hehehehehehe Edward is funny but yes what has him going crazy

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

Very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 358-359

He is in a hurry lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 358-359

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 353-357

I loved it so sweet 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 353-357

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 353-357

It was close lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 353-357

and all they will do is sleep

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

oh my god i wood have hurt pertty bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 349-352

She would be in so much pain with that big of a tat.  I am glad he likes it lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 349-352

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 349-352

I loved it wow she got one too and a big one but hehehehehe Edward needs a cold shower heheheheheheh

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

Matching tats?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

:) :) 

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

I was enjoying this fic at 1st now its just dragging and geting kinda boring

Author's Response:

It only has 52 chapters left to post

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 344-348

Awe Bella is too cute and she called the chips tokens heheheh now who will get a tattoo 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

She is his lucky charm

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

Glad they had fun at the casino 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 338-343

Awe they are too cute 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 338-343

:) :) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 338-343

you write her as almost loike a child

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 338-343

nice update

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 7:01 PM Title: 333-337

can't wait for more and to see what you do

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 4:18 PM Title: 333-337

Awe she is too cute

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 3:57 PM Title: 333-337

thank you for the update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 2:46 PM Title: 333-337

I have never been to a casino. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 10:40 AM Title: 333-337

She is in a different world

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 10:25 AM Title: 333-337

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 328-332

nice updates

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 288-294 BPOV

I thought Tanya got arrested after shooting Edward. How was she in the car with Phil and Renee? How did the baby get to be 7 months old? 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 241

bella is suppose to be on bed rest since she just had surgery.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 265-269

Bella hasn't been to school for awhile. Is she still going?



Author's Response:

No

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 240-244

I thought she was only 2 months pregnant.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 328-332

Loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 328-332

Luke is a smart guy

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 328-332

wow he is a good guy

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 328-332

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Glad they are having some good times right now. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

They are so sweet together

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Awe so sweet they are too cute together 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

thank you for the updates..............

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Poor bella...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Nice time in the air.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

i woder if luke put someting in her milk

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

nice ch

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

Wow. Pippa, lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

I loved it go Bella 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

she means buisness

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