Date: 08 Dec 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
So good.
Date: 08 Dec 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
Wow. That was a shocker.
But Bella's speech was so good.
Date: 08 Dec 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3-You Move Me
Such a great chapter.
I find your Jasper very hot.
Date: 07 Dec 2017 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Awesome!
But Alice deserves to die slowly. Maybe bitten by a few wolves.
And Carlisle! How could he let that happen! He needs to die too!
Date: 06 Dec 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
That was excellent! Absolutly great I loved it!
Date: 04 Dec 2017 11:42 PM Title: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT
Wowsers. Do much going on. Glad Jasper and Bella got it all under control.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 9 – Remember Me
Well at least Edward has realized his mistakes. Ugh Alice is such a skank. Carlisle needs a slow, very painful death.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Persuasion
OMG So many need to die. Carlisle is one sick MF, Aro too
Date: 04 Dec 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
Dear lord you are going in so many different directions. Not sure who I want to die first. LOVE the virgin being neutered.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Move
Glad Em and Esme got away from their diseased "spouses"
Date: 30 Nov 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
love
Date: 23 Nov 2017 8:39 PM Title: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT
I love this story more and more with each chapter. I know it is definitely one of my favorites to go back and read over and over again!
Mix you celebrate, have a Happy Thanksgiving! If not, enjoy your day.
Date: 22 Nov 2017 4:02 AM Title: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT
My heart broke when she spoke about the baby
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 9:12 PM Title: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT
Well just the clean up to do and sort out the other covens xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 – Remember Me
Alice and Carlisle have truly lost the plot,
Great stuff, loving it xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Persuasion
He lost it now, sick asshole,
he damn near rapes her but of course, it's her fault!
Enjoying this a lot xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
Well, Carlisle the old pervert, wants Bella for himself.
thanks, this is brilliant xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Move
Let's hope Alice loses her visions, making her worthless to Aro.
Poor Emmett. but won't miss the Ice Queen xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Oh, some kind of hybrid?
What was that guy?
This is great xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
Trying to scare her off,
silly boy, but understandable xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 3-You Move Me
Oh sneaky, both of them,
Eddie brought the baddies and
Jasper made Eddie think he'd killed her xxx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Oh, Alice is in for a world of pain xx
Alexis
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Thanks, Loved it, my fav pairing xx
Alexis
Date: 18 Nov 2017 11:02 AM Title: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT
Can I have Jasper? I want to see him in his cowboy gear. Especially the spurs. Great chapter. Can’t wait to see what Marcus does when he finds out about his late wife.
Date: 18 Nov 2017 5:08 AM Title: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT
very good one!!!
Date: 14 Nov 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 – Remember Me
Oh so many twist i look forward to reading next chapter :)
Date: 14 Nov 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 9 – Remember Me
Carlisle is completely off his rocker! I can’t wait for Jasper to rip him to shreds. I hope he makes him suffer a lot. Of course Alice is right there with him, but in this case it’s worked in Jasler’s favor. Will anyone find Edward and rescue him? He did finally come to his senses. Will Marcus turn Renee soon? Wonder how Bella will feel about that. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Date: 11 Nov 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 9 – Remember Me
Love it. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Persuasion
Carlisle has completely lost his mind. Poor Bella and Jasper. Will Edward really try to help Bella or was he conning Esme?! Can't wait for more. Love this story!!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
I love this Marcus! Carlisle weds to die a slow painful miserable death!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Persuasion
Aaaaahhhh those fucking cullens!
Date: 17 Sep 2017 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Persuasion
Wow what a twist in the story. Look forward to next chapter :)
Date: 16 Sep 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Persuasion
Well Carlisle is going to find out what pain is when Jasper gets a hold of him. Great chapter.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Awesome
Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Awesome
Date: 01 Sep 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Love it it Perfect
Date: 01 Sep 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
Awesome
Date: 01 Sep 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3-You Move Me
Perfect
Date: 01 Sep 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Very good chapter. Love it.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
Wow your story is awesome
Please update your story soon as I would love to read more
Date: 07 Aug 2017 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
Love it. Can't wait till the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2017 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
Holy shit!! What a chapter! Amazing!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
I freaking loved this twist!
Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War
Wow that was a great chapter, I hope Bella kicks Carlisle's ass and Jasper will be ok
Date: 18 May 2017 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Move
Yay!! So glad you brought Emmett to them. I love Emmett. Wonder if Jacob will run into Bella while she's visiting Charlie's grave?
I love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 May 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Move
Glad Em is back in thier lives. Go Em for killing the She-witch
Date: 16 May 2017 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
This is so good and I was really hoping Alice would get her ass kicked more but I can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
This story is so awsome, I really dig it
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Move
I'm loving this story! And can't wait until they truly find out what Bella can do, and they face the Cullen's and the Volturi! Take care! Can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 14 May 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Move
OMG I would have loved to have seen emmett taking down the ice queen i cannot wait to read about how bella is getting on alone without her mate and i just cannot wait to read more about who emmett's mate is going to be
Date: 01 May 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Go Bad Ass Bella. Loved seeing her hand Malice her arse.
Date: 01 May 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
Glad she is standing up to him and realizes how screwed up her relationship to the other wankers was.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Hella of a chapter!!!! I loved Bella's last day!!!!
Alice is very dangerous and I hope Bella and Jasper get to tell their side of the story!!!!!
I adore your lemons!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
The tough love he's giving Bella was a bit scary at times ad was amazed how well she handled the situation and Jasper!!! She's a really strong and compassionate woman!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 3-You Move Me
I knew was a powerful Empath but his method to get Edward to leave he & Bella alone was very scary and it too an incredible toll on he and Bella!!!!!
It's a fascinating chapter!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
incredible chapter and full of surprises!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
I have read through the chapters posted so far!!! I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 26 Apr 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
I am loving this! I wonder how long before The Cullen's figure out Bella is still alive. I can't for Jasper and Bella to take care of Alice!!
Date: 24 Apr 2017 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
👌🔥
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
No!!! I have to wait for updates now!!! I freaking love this story!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Love it already!
Date: 22 Apr 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Wow! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 21 Apr 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Woman.... omg
Really....
Damn you and your ability to pull me in
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2017 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
I'm totally loving this story. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Brillant chapter cant wait for the next one
Date: 19 Apr 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Enjoying your story, thanks!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Love it. Can't wait till Bella gets another chance to play with Alice.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes
Whooo!! Love it! So what will happen with aro and the dum dums?
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
Today!!! Today last day being human
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Aaaaawwwww yeah!!!!! You got a bella and Jasper going on!!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm
wow its all happening i cannot wait to see the change and what jasper and bella are like when she is not as breakable lol
Date: 08 Apr 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 3-You Move Me
Wow Carlisle and Co have a lot to answer for. Fuckward is really pathetic.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Ooh I am loving this..... can't wait for more.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Love it
Date: 04 Apr 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
LOVE IT ! LOVE IT ! LOVE IT ! I NEED MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Date: 04 Apr 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Love it. Can't wait to find out what is going on with Jasper.
Date: 04 Apr 2017 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Woman!!!!
Omg
I did it again....
Wip on my list
Date: 04 Apr 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Great story on the edge of my seat , can't wait for the next chapter. Love all of your stories, than you for sharing.
Date: 04 Apr 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul
Wowsers. Malice really needs to be taken out along for Fuckward.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Love it. Jazz is the man
Date: 29 Mar 2017 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
I always love a Jasper Bella story. Thanks
Date: 28 Mar 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
well that was a good start. Hope you keep on with this.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Very intriguing please continue
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Very intriguing please continue
Date: 28 Mar 2017 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Great first chapter. I think I'll be hooked with the next one of its as good.
Date: 28 Mar 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Loved the chapter. Can't wait till the next one.
Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Love the story. Wow Edward sure showed his true colors fast. Was there really something the family was doing to bring Bella and Jasper in? What's up with Emmett and Rose. ( Emmett is a fav of mine in the big brother role). Are Peter and Charlotte in this? Can't wait for more. Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
I still don't like the idea of them separating. Esp when Bella is human and the stupid cray cray twins are out and about.
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fall
Freaking loving it already. Have the feeling that Malice is really gonna go after the deep end soon.