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Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love a man with a plan! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

I like this story. Thank you. Even missed, was waiting for a long time for you to finish it. Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm so in love with this story I can't wait for more

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait to see what Edward does to James 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

Em is such a trip.  Hope James gets whats coming to him

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

Emmett lasted longer than I thought he would with a stab wound. He didn't pass out fromโ€‹ blood loss or shock to the system.
Edward's decree will definitely put everyone on notice. James is in for a world of hurt.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

Have I ever told you that I absolutely LOVE your Mobwards? And I have read ALOT of your stories. Kepp the updates coming if you can!!! Thanks!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

She will be warming his bed soon!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

She is so brave!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

He def. has a HUGE think for you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

Seeing the real edward already!! How is he going to react when another guy flirts with her??

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

He'll be watching.....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

Rose can't save u now.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is going to get raunchy!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 7

nice story so far

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love this story.  I can see how Bella would've freaked out with James pulling a knife. I think it was great the way she tried to help Emmett l, even though he didn't need the help. I'm sure they will make sure she gets shown how to use a gun in the future. Im sure that we definitely haven't heard the last of James. I'm excited and anxiously awaiting the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: Gigi725 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story..please update soon..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward's thoughts about Bella's living conditions were proved correct.
Will James live to talk about this little incident?
The boss is going to be livid.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG this is so amazing. I love Emmett and Bella interaction. I can not wait to see what you have for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG this is so amazing. I love Emmett and Bella interaction. I can not wait to see what you have for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love this story.  I can see how Bella would've freaked out with James pulling a knife. I think it was great the way she tried to help Emmett l, even though he didn't need the help. I'm sure they will make sure she gets shown how to use a gun in the future. Im sure that we definitely haven't heard the last of James. I'm excited and anxiously awaiting the next chapter. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

James is a piece of shit when Edward sees what he did to Bella I think James will be a dead man.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

hmm me thinks James has pissed off the wrong family.  

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

tthank you for the update. I am looking forward to Edwards reaction. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am loving this story.  Can't wait to see what Edward was right about. Now Bella really can't go back home. Where will she go to now? Maybe to Rose's......or Edward's.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Edward just offered Bella the chance to tell Emmett that Rose knows nothing of her home life and the crap her father did to put Bella in this situation.
Will Emmett figure out Bella has abandoned her home because it's not a safe place to stay?
Rose stuck her nose in it. What happens to her when the truth of Bella's situation is revealed?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

hmm Cant say I blame her for being protective of Rose, she just went about barking at her the wrong way 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm Bree better be careful with the questioning.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonder if Alice knows about E's extra curricular mafia activities,,,,,hmmm

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ooo!   I know what happens next.....(he he he)  READ YOU SOON   : D

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

Please uupdate soon this is amazing. I really don't care for Rose she wants Bella to tel her everythting but yet doesnt respect what she has to say. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ifor Bella is not going home then where is she going to go

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

I don'tblame Bella for not telling Bree anything.  I wouldn't either. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh how i love stubborn gurl and mr. Bossy pants. Such an entertaining combo.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

Rose should have been a bit more understanding and realize something more was up than meets the eye!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 6

She is trying to protect Rose but she is a big girl Bella needs to worry about herself and where is she going to stay tonight.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

Good plan, Bella. No one else needs to know your business.
Maybe Bella could tell Rose that her father went away and she didn't like staying home alone. Rose could offer Bella a place to stay. That leaves transportation as a problem.
How did Bella pay for classes?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

When does Edward figure out Bella has abandoned her home domicile out of fear for her personal safety?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hm, a job offer. Will Rose want to work alongside her for support?
How close will Edward monitor his newest debtor?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Who was Rose's father that he would have pull with the dean? Maybe Rose understood Isabella's life better than she let on?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Brutal, but not unexpected.
Let's hope Isabella is the smart one in their family. How old is she?

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

I really hope you are going to continue this store. So far I like it. The shy collage girl with a dead bit droug out dad. How will she handle Edward.? When will he make his move on her again? I hope you up date soon. I can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward most definitely has a thing for Bella!  Good for Bella for not feeding Bree's gossip. She'll have enough to say all on her own I'm sure.  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bree is correct ;)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

good

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a joy to be able to re-read this one again.   : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

That's Rose for you!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

: )   : ).   I'm all smiles 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

That's Rose for you!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a joy to be able to re-read this one again.   : )

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

He is not as bad as she thinks he is. Where is she going to stay?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

Glad Alice is nice to her.  Where and when does Bella planeeds on sleeping?  Can she stay with Rose?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well at least she got out of there unscathed.  Although he's a dick for making her pay of something he already killed her sperm donor for.......

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

He was blunt and honest. Wow what a way to find out your dad had died. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

He is an ass she didnt like her father but he could of been nicer in telling he was dead.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm already hooked and ready for more. 

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love this story  good job!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

wonder if B will like if when she finds out her sperm donor is really dead.

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

didn't get the chance to read the original, but this is great

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

hmm so he kills Charlie and still gets Isabella....interesting start.  Hope he won't hurt her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my. What is Edward going to think when his guy comes back with two. 

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am a huge fan of all your stories! I love them all! The way u put each paragraph together is brilliant!  Can't wait for more of this story! I really think u should try to write a book! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words and enjoying what I do :) I do plan to turn Relentless into a book. I started it Jan 2016 and yeah... I need to get back to that lol xx

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh cannot wait for more of this.  I remember this from awhile back and glad your are working on it again.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Rose is not going to take that shit lol.  Poor Bella cant catch a break Charlie was always making her life bad so sad.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!!! Explosive fist chapter! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

great start

do love a naughty edward

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading this again

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Edward asked Charlie the same question that was on my mind.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Kara I always adore your stories. This one sounds like another winner. You write a really good mobward. Hope this spring finds you in good health.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds very interesting.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!! Love me some dark Edward!!! 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Charlie was a piece of shit.  Poor Bella she doesnt know she was just given away.  Is this a repost??

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