Date: 16 Apr 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sorrry im so late to review, but as you said, Rl has a way on sneeeking up on you. Dad promised her to James. Now I feel somebody should bring daddy dearest back to life so he can be kicked a bit or a bit more. We will have to take Jmes instead and peel his skin off with a cheeseknife. And where is Edward or will it be Emmet for the rescue? Maybe the nurse can hit James with the bedpan while we are waiting. Anyway hope everything is fine in scotland. We are slowly getting warmer weather here in germany. Take care Susanne Nossek
Date: 05 Mar 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my goodness! This is unbelievable!!! Charlie sold her to anyone he wanted to get away from. Where the hell is Edward? I hope he kicks James’ ass for hurting Bella. I also hope Bella sees that Edward means her no harm. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is starting to rethink he thoughts and feelings about Edward! I wonder what information they’ll learn from “questioning” Laurent?! I reread this story from the beginning, again! I love this story and can’t wait to hear what’s next. I’m so glad you’re back, but understand the need to take care of yourself. Hope all is well and that things are getting better!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! I’m glad there was a moment of tenderness between the two. I can’t wait to see what Laurent has to say. Also, can we get a glimpse into why James wants her so badly? My guess is that Charles sold her to more than one person, but it could just be that she’s been unattainable to James until now. Just curious to see why she’s so important to him.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh MY!!!...thank you for the update...why did they have to get into an accident? where are Edwards guards? Did someone hit them on purpose? thank god they had on seat belts....I can't wait to see what happens next...until you post again
Date: 07 Jan 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
What does Rosalie's father know about Isabella's situation? Does he know how Bella's father ensnared her in this messed up arrangement with Edward?
One or two, even three acts of kindness do not change Edward's position within the organization. Can Isabella learn to accept his illegal dealings?