[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Carlisle is an evil sob. But loving the story.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 07 Aug 2017 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Edward will have to become evil to get his mom out
Date: 07 Aug 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
I hope Esme figures out a way to get the dvd info to Edward sooner rather than later
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Poor Esme
Date: 06 Aug 2017 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Omg! He is a bastard! I really hope Esme kills Carlisle slow and painful.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Oh dear God, this is, l mean real bad. I hope Charlie find the dvd pretty soon. This Carlisle is evil incarnate and poor Esme is going to bear the brunt of it. Am having nightmare already. Wonderful writing, thank you, come back soon.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Carlisle is gonna regret making edward ruthless cuz that's gonna bite him in the ass
Date: 06 Aug 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Oh no I hope edward kills carlisle or gets free before he is forced to have sex with some girl (which will most likely be rape on both ends cuz I'm sure it will be one of Carlisles victims) or is forced to.get married (though I'm sure edward can null it or get a divorce once he is free) but no way is edward going to give up bella that easily
Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Calisles mistake I thinking he can shape edward now with edward being a teenager and that he can trump his love for his mother....hes gonna regret that because he is going to give edward the tools that edwards gonna be able to use to kill him. I can't wait until carlisle sees his own son point a gun at him and know he caused his own death.....if the guards are smart they wouldn't touch their future bosses mother as they have a death wish
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
After that first slap in the face, i pretty much guessed carlisle signed his own death certificate. Edward is going to become so ruthless!
Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Carlisle is crazy to think you can take a mature boy and change him into a Mafia don. He'll fight him all the way even if it takes years until he has enough power to do so. Carlisle's time would have been better spent producing another heir.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Oh my!!!!! I am glad that Edward figured out things really quick and stood up to Carlisle. I hope one day and one day soon that Edward will TAKE his place away from Carlisle and then make him pay very slowly for everything that he has done. And maybe even let Esme have some revenge on Carlisle.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
I'm so afraid for Esme and Edward is basically powerless to help his mother. Pretty intense situation.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Noooooooo, he can't have them, When is the update, can't wait.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Oh dearie me, this is bad.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Aaaaah, that is just lovely. As scared Bobby is near and will recognise them and Carlisle will be on their tail. I hope Charlie's gun is big, here comes trouble.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
They are going to expose themselves in San Francisco. Am so Afraid for them. Ah, Edward is growing up, l wonder how Bella will react to the news.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Edward is so lovely and caring. I hope they find happiness and he doesn't hate his mother whe he fids out about his evil father.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Oh my goodness, this Carlisle is pure evil.
Date: 29 Jul 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Carlisle is an evil bastard and needs to die and I hope Edward is the one to do it. Their life was so good and now they are in hell. Poor Bella is falling apart so sad
Date: 19 Jul 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I hope they get away and carlisle is the one who gets punished.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
This chapter made me anxious.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
This is such a bad situation. Carlisle is a monster. How are they getting Bella?
Date: 09 Jul 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
So sorry for not reviewing with the weather and the firehouse it has been crazy. And we will be trying to review both stories.
KEEP WRITING!!!!๐‘๐’๐’–
Date: 06 Jul 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
OMG you are KILLING ME. Poor Bella. I really don't want to know what that sick fuck has in store for Esme. eek
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Oh n9 Carlisle has them, poor Tony, Essex and Bella
Date: 03 Jul 2017 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Oh no! I don't think Edward is going to be happy about this and we know Esme won't be happy. Poor Bella and Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so worried about them all and how they're going to cope with things.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I want to see Carlisle taken down
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
i was almost afraid to see that you had posted...this is so bad...i do not think i can make myself read the horrible things yet to come for esme and edward...why not let charlie figure things out by finding the metal box and disposing of carlisle.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
WOAW, All the good and all the evil in one chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
LOVE,LOVE,LOVE!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
No no no!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I hope Charlie finds the dvd soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I am taking a wild guess that edward does what carlisle wants & becomes a mob boss just so he can kill carlisle.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
NO!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Oh no!!! Is there going to be a time jump?
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I'm not sure how Carlisle thinks he will control a grown man/boy for years. He has a tenuous hold at best. I hope Edward brings his whole "family" down.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Hope Charlie will find the evident against Carlise and make him pay. Please help and take care of Esme and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
OH no, Bella thinks her beloved Edward is Dead, I think daddy dearest will be a little suprised if he thinks he can bend Edward
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Bleak future for Esme and Edward!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Carlisle is a cruel bastard. I hope they find the tape and he goes to jail and the electric chair. Him and his whole team.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
I really hope nothing bad happens to them
Date: 25 Jun 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Thank you so much, Clo. It was quite a shock when I saw it but everything is so much better now :). I still can't imagine how you plot this and think of new situations and characters personalities. You always amaze me with your humour, sexy times and your downright scary times. Love reading your stuff.
Date: 25 Jun 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Eek! See what happens when you visit the big city! ( said the woman from Brooklyn, NY). Knowing Charlie has no gun with him does not give me a good Feeling! Great work! Loving it!
Date: 24 Jun 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 23 Jun 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Omgosh!!!! I am so worried for Esme and Edward. I hope Edward can be as stubborn and bullheaded ad his dad. Maybe Edward will take out his father. Or pretend to follow his dad and gather information and then everything over to the cops. Lol. That would be too funny.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Now i wonder will esme live?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2017 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
I hope Charlie can help them
Date: 23 Jun 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
oh fuck this is getting really good, I just know Edward is not going to stand for Charlise not allowing him to be with his Bella
Date: 23 Jun 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
You sure know how to keep us on the edge of our seats!! Are you sure it should be an M rating because I don't know about the younger generation but I am shitting my pants!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Oh man, I hope Carlisle doesn't get his hands on them.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
This is gong to hurt everyone. I don't know why anyone in hiding would go public the way Esme has.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Or anyone else dies, well except for Carlisle.
This sounds like it may be a long story? Carlisle takes Edward, reconditions him, Edward finds his way back to Bella?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Please tell me that Esme doesn't die!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
I would think that over the years Esme would've come to trust the Swan's enough to let them in on her secret.
Big mistake going public.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
excellent chapter, thank you
Date: 22 Jun 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Shit I want to kill Bobby. Charlie was very cute when talking to Edward. I am freaking out now
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Not sure my psyche can handle this. I'm already getting a quesey(?) stomach. Could we just get to the kicking the rat bastards ass. Oh pookies I hope the statute of limitations hasn't run out on her evidence. Ugh now the knots are just getting bigger. Mark of a good writer; getting a physical reaction from the reader like snot sobbing when Dobby died in Harry Potter. Strapping myself in for the ride. Here we go........
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Sigh I knew the pleasantness wasn't going to last.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Www this coming. I hope Charlie can protect them
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Www this coming. I hope Charlie can protect them
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Poor Esme. She is going to die a painful death. I wonder how Edward is going to react.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Everyone's world is about to change.
Date: 21 Jun 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
I am so caught up in this story. Pretty sure there will be some boo hooing on my part at some point. It's already very uncomfortable how horrible Carlisle is but I hope he gets what's coming to him. I hate mean bullies. Even fictional ones. I really love your writing!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
I have so much anxiety about carlisle finding them. I knew her paitings would get them in trouble. I'm very worried!
Date: 09 Jun 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
MORE PLEASE!
Date: 08 Jun 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Ugh of course one of Carlisle's goons would be going to that gallery. I have a bad feeling
Date: 08 Jun 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
So Bobby will recognize Esme. Go back to Forks!!
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[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2017 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Loving this! Keep 'em coming! ;)
Date: 07 Jun 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Bitter (with Carlisle) and sweet (with Tony and Bella) chapter. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Love this story and the chapter
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Oh no esme and edward are about to get found
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
My main thought is that if you're running from powerful people, you don't step into the public light. Esme is foolish and risking her son's future.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
:)
Date: 06 Jun 2017 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
How old are they now. I dont want Carlisle to ever get a hold of them he freaks me out
Date: 06 Jun 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Great chapter. Esme is making a grave mistake with the art show. She will be spotted unfortunately.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
If I said I was scared would you call me a wuss? I know this is only a M rating but the way you have written Carlisle is so wicked, l don't think that Esme or Edward have a chance. I can't wait to read the next chapter but i can. Can't I? As I shiver and hide my eyes!!!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
I take it Esme's show is in the gallery across from Bobby's daughter's apartment
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Great chapter. I could really feel how scared/anxious Esme/Maria was and how happy and in love Edward/Tony and Bella are.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 06 Jun 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
How sweet! That was so wonderful! A great way to first say I love you.
I'm so worried about Esme! I'm sure Bobby will see her and recognize her Carlisle is heartless and he's evil I'm so afraid of what he'll do to her! Looking forward to next chapter!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Please don't let Bobby finds them...
Date: 05 Jun 2017 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Crazy love!
Date: 05 Jun 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
I bet Bobby sees Esme at the gallery. Carlisle will find her and Edward now. He will try to turn Edward into a man just like him.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Oh no, cameras across the street from where Esme's paintings will be shown cannot be good news.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Oh no. Carlisle's man is either going to see Edward or Esme while he is moving his daughter or they will be seen on the cameras that he sets up.i love how Edward told Bella of his feelings.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Bobby is going to see them and she and Edward will be found.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Danger in the air for sure.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Excellent chapter, thank you.
Date: 25 May 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Esme needs to so careful with her new fame.
Date: 23 May 2017 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Kids can def be forgiving. Although the SF trip has me worried
Date: 23 May 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
First kiss, so cute!
Date: 22 May 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Date: 22 May 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
I wonder if carlisle finds edward and fakes his deat and thats where the quote from the hammer comes from
Date: 21 May 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
I am worried about Esme. I am hoping that no one recognizes her. What has been going on with Carlisle all these years?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Esme's show may be the biggest mistake since running away.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I'm glad that Esme & Edward still seem to be safe.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Oh no i'm worried about san Francisco!