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Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

I'm nervous for them in San Francisco!

Who will spot them?

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2022 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Yowza!

Talk about brutal!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2022 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

I would love maybe a future take of them and Esme's HEA. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2022 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

I would love maybe a future take of them and Esme's HEA. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2022 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations

I wouldn't put it past Carlisle to stoop so low and have cameras in Edward's room while he's with Bella since she wouldn't allow Carlisle to watch. Nasty Fucker!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2022 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

My stomach is doing flip flops worried about what Carlisle has planned for Esme. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

kill Carlile

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions

evil bastard

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

love it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great ending!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

Great

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose

Wonderful

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

Amazing

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

Awesome

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle

Excellent

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown

Fantastic

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other

Terrific

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid

Fabulous

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Go Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations

Excellent

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

Fantastic

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

I hate Carlisle! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions

Poor Edward

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

Great

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

Loved it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

Loved it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

Great!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Loved it! Carlisle is a prick!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Loved it! Carlisle is a prick!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Loved it! Carlisle is a prick!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:35 AM Title: Making a Run for It

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:35 AM Title: Making a Run for It

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:35 AM Title: Making a Run for It

Loved it!

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2020 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

I was really hoping you'd show Esme noticing something was off

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2020 9:58 PM Title: Making a Run for It

So loving your stories

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Would love a sequel!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

As always, u don’t disappoint!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose

So, maybe this isn’t over?

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

I don’t know how u are going to finish this with one more chapter!  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

Hope Charlie can help him!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Things are coming to a head quickly!  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle

Why doesn’t he just have Bella go get the disc?

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown

Glad he has a plan, but bet it won’t be easy!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other

I was going to stop here, but I think I need to read more!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid

Can’t wait until they take down the mighty Carlisle!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Well, that wasn’t the reunion I was expecting!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations

So close!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

Can’t wait until they are reunited and can deal with Carlisle!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2019 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

A sequel of this would be most welcomed. Hint, hint.

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart

What a sad state of affairs!  I’m guessing she moved to Chicago.  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

Can’t wait until Carlisle gets what is coming to him!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions

Maybe Bella can find the tape before it gets too bad!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

So sad for all of them!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise

I think this is going to get ugly really fast!  Poor Edward.  He is in for a rude awakening.

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

So sweet!  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

Why do I think that this trip to San Francisco is going to be a mistake?

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

That was such an uplifting chapter after the previous one!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Few write gore like you!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:46 PM Title: Making a Run for It

So excited to start another of your stories!  Wonderful beginning!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

I’m dreading what will happen when Carlisle catches up with them.  And I know he will!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Wow. Brutal.

Reviewer: Paragod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2018 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2018 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

wow

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

so Carlisle has been torturing some guy in his basement for 15 years? whi already didn'y have a penis

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2018 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

gruesome but I love your stories

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

ten times the rate means she charges 20,000.00 a night?

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2018 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

thank you for writting this story finally i read the full story of yours. great job

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great story with a cool twist. Would love a sequel.

Reviewer: yogis-girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

I loved your story. That was some of the most gruesome take downs I have read in a mob story. Thank you for sharing your story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

So good

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

As always you deliver a thrilling and quiet chilling mafia story. The violence that Carlise brought to those around him was frightening. Congratulations on two nominations on fic of the month they are well deserved. I always enjoy your stories. Thank you.

Reviewer: Princeselisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great story! Thank you

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

i hope bella is feeling very very guilty right now.

not only has she gotten malcom in trouble, but she has messed

the whole plan on this. of course, busybody alice would be the cause

of the whole thing. sorry but i do have some issues with alice

and bella here.

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

definitely deserves a sequel!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2018 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

I loved it dark and crazy thank you

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2018 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

nice update

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

It was a pleasure to follow your fiction and those characters through their story and love.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Thank you for a lovely story...I did want to hear from Esme again..maybe there wil be a sequel

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

Yay Carlise is finally going to get what's coming to him...what he deserves!!!well done..until you post again

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Yay! A perfect ending...I mean...beginning for their future and finally an HEA for them all! *Sighs* 

An awesome story with great characters that I’ll really miss. You really shook things up in the “canon” blender and it turned out great. So kudos.

Thanks so much for a great read once again. Looking forward to next time. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

Now that was a rescue MobWard style! I’m sure they’re not done with “Dickless”. And Charlie has gone to the Dark side, which in this case is really the Light side in comparison. 

So glad Bella survived her own escape and I’m not sure I knew JB was Jacob...but it was a shocker for me.

I can’t believe I’m about to read the last chapter. I’ve loved this story and will miss it. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

I can tell you I love this story specially the ending

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

AAlso what happened to Esme?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!  I hope there is a future chapter or maybe a sequel. Thank you for writing and sharing with is. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great ending. TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: vllymm007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Loved this story. 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Aww man a gas explosion ’!!!! You know there are other was to burn a house down. Just saying!!!

We loved it!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

My men out in pain thanks to hearing you cut off Carlise manhood. Mason said “All there is left to do is char him”.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

Glad they are finally taking the arsehole down

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Thank you for the wonderful story.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Thanks...though it got a little gory.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great story. Thank you

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Great story. Thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

:) 

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