Date: 18 Jun 2018 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 35: Devil Inside
Again, you have me on the edge of my seat and my heart pounding and I was just so wrapped up in this. I was hoping you were okay but you must have felt to get this one out cos it went right out of the ballpark. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. Your writing is ingenious.
Date: 07 May 2018 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 34: Walking Blind
Tyler deserves to feel the betrayal, just like Bella had to. I'm still suspicious about Carlisle's motives. He was very eager to find out what Bella remembered. What is his agenda besides saving his butt?
He does. The next chapter will post soon. :)
Date: 30 Apr 2018 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 33: Turning Page
This is all horrible, but I feel bad for Edward. This is his dad. One of the people a child is suppose to trust to take care of them.
Yes, it is not a good situation for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 16 Apr 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 33: Turning Page
Didn't even realize I was holding my breath. Can't wait for next update. So close to getting all the answers.
Thank you so much! The next chapter will post in the next couple of days. :)
Date: 15 Apr 2018 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 33: Turning Page
So Carlisle messed up his wife's mind, too? How many more? I reread the prologue and wonder why Bella is so shocked by what I assume is a memory of her during training. The identity of Charlie? As always I can't wait for more.
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you are still enjoying it. :)
Date: 11 Mar 2018 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 32: No Easy Way Out
I wish they could make feel Carlisle and Charlie a portin of the hurt they caused all the victims of the program.
They certainly deserve it. Thank you for the review. Take care. :)
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 31: Hold On My Heart
Finding out everything you remember could be a lie, a fake memory, must take out the floor beneath you. I love how Edward makes Bella believe in her feelings. Mary Poppins-bag sounds about right - condoms? Bella is prepared for everything.
Date: 16 Jan 2018 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 30: Broken Down Hearted Wonderland
Emmett, too? It's heartbreaking. I hope that Carlisle will be ble to restore some of Bella's memories. Can't wait.
Hi! Thank you. The next chapter will post in a couple of days. Have a great weekend. :)
Date: 12 Dec 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 29: White Rabbit
How did Laurent obtain the files? I don't think Bella trusts him, but now he'll probably help them decoding.
Hi! The next chapter is about to post and will explore that further. :) Thank you!
Date: 01 Nov 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 26: Hazy
Hope that Carlisle can really help. Can't wait to find out what lies hidden in Bella's brain.
Hi! The next chapter will post in a couple of days. Thank you for your reivew. Take care. :)
Date: 23 Oct 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I read this quite often on my Nook. So all I can do is give this a score. I do love this story. So much information and a great story line. Great writting.
Thank you so much! I appreciate you reading it and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Take care and have a wonderful week.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 25: Quicksand
Newton might be the villain here, but Carlisle and Charlie are a close second, cowards expecting others to keep the people they care for safe instead of risking their own lives. I'm dying to hear what Laurent wanted to say.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: Way Down We Go
OMG! Love it! Sitting here on pins and needles waiting on next chapter.LOL! Wonderful story can't wait to read more
Thank you so much! The next chapter will post sometime tomorrow. Have a great day. :)
Date: 25 Sep 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 24: Way Down We Go
WTF!!! You have got me going bananas. How the hell is Dr. Cullen in this and why wouldn't Bella or Edward no him!! The mysteries you concoct are amazing. The way you had James killed made me cry tears of joy and don't get me started on Laurent. Oh my, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I think you are going to blow our minds or maybe not. Just know that I can't wait
Thank you so much!! I do love the challenge of creating a mystery and it is always good to know that it is affecting the readers. Although I don't want you to go completely bananas. ;) Answers are coming, I promise. Glad that you like how James was taken out and yeah, Laurent is going to contiune to be a handful. ;) The next chapter will post sometime tomorrow. Take care! :)
Date: 05 Sep 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
Hope it's James who gets shot. Could Laurent be another product of this program? I doubt he got the file from Anonymous. Can't wait for EPOV.
Hi! The next chapter is about to post and will answer that quetion. I hope that you enjoy it. :)
Date: 24 Jul 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 20: You've Got a Friend
It's unsettling that other people know more of our life than you do. That and the betrayal of the people she trusted the most must be devastating for Bella. Someone who likes her for who she is and not for what she is capable of - like Edward - is what she needs.
Date: 17 Jul 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 19 Walking Blind
How did the FBI-file end up in Laurents possession? Did Newton enlist him and the cabin is a trap? I wonder if it's the same file Tyler was trying to find. Can't wait t fir Bella and Jasper to meet.
Love reading all of your thoughts and questions! The next chapter will be posting soon and is all about Jasper. ;) Take care!
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Without any doubt this is one of the best stories I have read either here or on other fanfiction sites. And I am a long time fanfiction reader. Usually, I prefer the completed stories but for this one I will gladly suffer through the long waits to get the next dose of this wonderful story.
Thank you so much! That is a huge compliment!! The next chapter will be posting soon. :)