Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
They say turnaround it fair play lol don't think Edward likes it much though
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
Lovedo this. Had to laugh at Edward getting jealous. I've said it before, love you having little Anthony actively in the storyline.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
They are so cute. I am enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story keep on writing
Date: 08 Mar 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
What a fun date. Can't wait to see how Anthony and Emily get along. Hold on, could Emily be Emmie???????
Author's Response:
Omg! Someone made the connection haha! This story has been on fanfiction for a few months and no one said anything about that! Anthony only saw emmie with Pete once, so he doesn't exactly recognize her but I'm so happy someone finally noticed!:)
Date: 08 Mar 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love reading Edward's POV.
Date: 08 Mar 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved this chapter. But also loved your real life story. I can't imagine.
Date: 08 Mar 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome chapter again.
Date: 08 Mar 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
The sexual tension between them is getting good ba . Whenever they finally give in to it they are liable to hurt each other. Lol.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love that Anthony does not want Edward kissing his momma.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love Target too. Love that you have them like normal people and not super rich/trustfund.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
This story is so cute.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward and Bella have very interesting showers.lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
New reader to your story and I love it...I love the way Anthony is behaving toward Edward.. Bella is happy and taken with Edward..to bad they just couldn't communicate with oneanother...I wondering what jealous person told about them and their night together...I must say I love how Bella was persistant to see Edward ...I'm sure the look on the PA face was priceless when Edward ask why she didn't tell him she was there...can't wait to see how the rest unfolds...I can't wait for Esme, Carlise, Mia, Emmett and his little girl to meet Anthony...well done...I'm hooked
Date: 07 Mar 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for giving us Edward's POV.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love love love !!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Didn't take time to review each chapter as I was too busy reading! Things are progressing nicely between these two!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Perfect family time!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
So glad that you include Anthony in the storyline. Love the way you write him talking.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Interesting storyline
Date: 03 Mar 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love how they seem like a family already.
Date: 03 Mar 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love the story, you are a very talented writer with this being your first story. I hope this story will continue with the upbeat and no angst. Please keep up the good work and thanks for posting your story here.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Omg loved it can't wait to read more.
Date: 01 Mar 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love that you included so much of Anthony in this chapter. I love reading stories that actively includes children in the story line.
Author's Response:
Well you will definitely love this one then because little anthony is a big part of it :). Thanks for reading I'm so glad you found my story!
Date: 01 Mar 2017 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying your story. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you!:) I'm so glad you found it!:)
Date: 01 Mar 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well that went better than I thought. I don't blame him for being upset. I bet Bella doesn't sit all day again to wait to see Edward. Lol.
Author's Response:
Ya at first she was a bit shy haha. But two days in Jane's presence gave her the courage she needed to approach Edward finally :)
Date: 01 Mar 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I want to have a dream like hers
Author's Response:
Haha me too! I don't think I've ever had a sex dream haha. But it definitely sounds amazing
Date: 01 Mar 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Well done for writing and posting your story. Thank you for sharing. I'll keep reading.
Author's Response:
No problem! Thanks for reading it!:)
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
I like the story thus far. It seems to be moving right along and I want to know what will happen next. I want to encourage you to keep writing because there are a lot of us who enjoy reading a good story.
Being that you are new with no complete stories I am a little concerned if you will complete the story. I truly hope that you do. Do you have a posting schedule.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
I don't but so far I have 30 chapters of this story written :). I just need to update. I think I'll have some time to upload some tonight and then I will start posting one chapter a day until I get everything caught up! Thanks for reading a reviewing:)
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
I like the story thus far. It seems to be moving right along and I want to know what will happen next. I want to encourage you to keep writing because there are a lot of us who enjoy reading a good story.
Being that you are new with no complete stories I am a little concerned if you will complete the story. I truly hope that you do. Do you have a posting schedule.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 27 Feb 2017 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
She should have demanded to see him who she was there. Or spoke up when he walked out for lunch.
Date: 22 Feb 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more. I wonderif Edward will be upset with her for keeping his son from him for 2 years.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Your posting here also good for you getting around and all. Ajfflady here I'm really proud of your works keep up the great postings ๐๐๐๐
Author's Response:
I love that you are on here!!! Yay!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
OMG ! Keep writing it has me sitting waiting for your next chapter ! Great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! This is the first story i have ever written! Your support means a lot :). I orginially posted this story on fanfiction.net and I have the same user name (highlanderprincess) on there if you want to check out what i have so far :). But i will be playing catch up on this sight for the next few days :)
Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Love it so far.
How often will you be updating this story?
Author's Response:
I have 30 chapters written for this story so far, so I think I'll upload a chapter a day until I get all caught up :). Thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Feb 2017 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
I love this story!
Date: 21 Feb 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
This sounds great cant wait for more. What is he going to do will he belive her????
Date: 21 Feb 2017 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
I ' m already in love this story
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope to get all caught up on here over the next few days! I have twenty plus chapters so far...so hopefully i will be able to upload them all pretty soon!:)