Date: 15 Dec 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 25: Olympic Part II
That Anthony and Edward are so sweet together. Did Bella name Anthony for his father or coincidence? Will edward ask? I never thought Esme would be that far from her grandkids. Anyway I'm enjoying the ride.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness adore all three of them so hard. :-)
Date: 14 Dec 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Your first story? You say you know it's not perfect. Well first bravo to you for putting yourself out there. Second no ones story is perfect so you are in good company and I am enjoying your story.;-) and while lemons aren't the bones of any story just the juice, I will say you have good juice.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow he's already slept with 6 other women after she left not to mention all those before. Good lord he really is a manwhore. I can't believe after seeing him walking out of his office with Tanya and knowing what they were doing she can just jump into a relationship with him. I know there's no way I could. You have a great writing style but I just honestly don't really like this Edward. I guess I'll see how the rest goes before I decide.
Date: 16 Oct 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 60: First Day at Disney
For the most part I have been enjoying this story! I know that you have already written it, but as someone who has gone to Disneyland well over 100 times, I would just say if you are going to describe such a well known place, try and get it accurate. The Californian hotel opens up to the park, taxis can't go to the front gates, Disney does not do wrist bands, there are no rides with fast passes in Fantasy Land, and Ariels ride is in California Adventure, not Dland. Still enjoying the story! I just had to let you know about those pet peeves lol ;)
Date: 16 Oct 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 60: First Day at Disney
For the most part I have been enjoying this story! I know that you have already written it, but as someone who has gone to Disneyland well over 100 times, I would just say if you are going to describe such a well known place, try and get it accurate. The Californian hotel opens up to the park, taxis can't go to the front gates, Disney does not do wrist bands, there are no rides with fast passes in Fantasy Land, and Ariels ride is in California Adventure, not Dland. Still enjoying the story! I just had to let you know about those pet peeves lol ;)
Date: 03 Jul 2017 6:50 PM Title: Outtake 2: Wedding
Such an amazing story.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
Great Story. 😊
Date: 03 Jun 2017 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 59: Downtown Disney
i have read this fic several times and i love it.
this is so romantic perhaps not in a traditional sense
but nevertheless, edward is so loving, a prince charming...
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
Love it
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
Loved it. Only thing I would adjust is Anthony's s peach pattern needs to adjust to his increasing age. 3 and 4 year Olds don't talk like 2 year olds. The rest was great.
Date: 12 May 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 67: Good News
Yeah 5th at is what I was hoping for
Date: 12 May 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 60: First Day at Disney
They need a stroller. It is much easier than walking with an excited toddler.
Date: 11 May 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 31: First Night Together
They are so cute.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 33: Office Role Playing
Best chapter ever!!!
Date: 03 May 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
No way, I wouldn't have said anything when he walked out of his office and even when he came back two hours later!!! I would have been shouting his name!! :P
Date: 03 May 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
OMG! I think I love this already!! lol ;)
Date: 02 May 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. You have done an amazing job writing it. Thank you for sharing it with us. I am off to check out your other stories.
Date: 02 May 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 71: The Birth of the Twins
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!! It was perfect!!!
Date: 02 May 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 71: The Birth of the Twins
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!! It was perfect!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so excited for them to meet!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Emmett is so simple. It's actually funny!
Date: 02 May 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 70: Moving Forward
I am glad that Tanya came clean and told about James and Victoria.
Date: 02 May 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 69: Bella's Scare
I am so glad that that worked out. Can't wait for them to con front her.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
He's takimg it better than i expected. I hope jane gets punished really good.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
If only all dreams were that deliciously vivid!!
Date: 01 May 2017 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 68: Weird Happenings
What is the deal with Edward? Did he have a run in with James or Victoria?
Date: 01 May 2017 9:09 PM Title: Edward Pregnancy Outtake
Love Edward's POV on finding out they are having twins.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
I already love this!
Date: 01 May 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 67: Good News
So excited that they are getting one of each.
Date: 01 May 2017 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 66: Blast from the Past
Seems like Ja message has not learned his lesson.
Date: 01 May 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 65: Pregnancy and Lemons
Glad Anthony is talking to the babies. I wonder if he still thinks it is 2 brothers. Maybe it will be 1 boy and 1 girl.
Date: 01 May 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 64: Unfortunate Run-ins
Bella is brave taking a 2 years old into the mall without a stroller. Mine always rode in a stroller.
Date: 01 May 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 63: Bella's Appointment
Twins!!!!!! Boy Anthony's world is really fixing to be turned up side down.
Date: 01 May 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: Last Day in California
They have been so busy on their vacation they are going to need a stay at home vacation to recovery before Edward goes back to work. Lol.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 61: Disney Part II
You have done a tray great job writing. Loving life of it.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 60: First Day at Disney
Such fun. I wish I could have took my kids when they were little.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I already love this!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
Great story
Date: 01 May 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 59: Downtown Disney
Edward is spoiling them both.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 58: A Surprise for Anthony
Love the interaction with Anthony.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 57
Poor Anthony. I hate he gets so upset being away from Bella. How is he ever going to be able to go to school.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 56: Honeymoon Part II
Wow, I wish my husband and I could go that many times in one night. Lol.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 55: Honeymoon Part I
Awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
Love Love your story ! Love too see outtakes ! And your story was wonderful the way it was don't change a thing! Now I am going to read your other stories.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 49: X's, O's, and Lemons
Love your story glad you're enjoying this site ! Can't wait to read your other story ,great writing on this . Can't wait to read more.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 54: A Courthouse Wedding
Beautiful wedding
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 53: Getting Ready for a Wedding
I just love your little Anthony.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 52: Bella's Decision
Wow, all in one day.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 51: Wedding Planning
Edward is so sweet.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:23 PM Title: Outtake
Lol. Anthony is too funny.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 50: Reminiscing
Love love love this chapter. So sweet.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 49: X's, O's, and Lemons
Tanya is such a bitch. Glad Edward made Bella feel beautiful and wanted.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 48: Telling Renee
I am glad that Renee is happy for them.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 47: Unpleasant Memories
I hope Bella is always honest with Edward about the time that she worked for him.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 46: Big Brother Anthony
Cute idea on how to tell him.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 45
Glad everyone is getting along
Date: 28 Apr 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 44
I think know Anthony is going to be jealous
Date: 28 Apr 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 43
I love how you include Anthony in almost all the chapters. I love reading stories with children in the plot line.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 42: Bella's Reveal
I knew Edward would be happy. Boy I wished I could have an orgasm as easily as Bella.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 41: Another Surprise
I knew it!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 40: A Proposal Part II
Lol, Edward trying to explain marriage to a 2 years old.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 39: A Proposal Part I
Love love love his proposal!!!!!!!!!! Anthony did good keeping the secret.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 38: Spa day with Esme
Glad she and Esme had a good spa visit. I have only ever had a massage. I would love to have the full spa treatment but cannot afford it.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 37: Shopping with Anthony
Love Edward included Anthony. Love his talk with him about getting marry.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 36: Meet the Parents
I knew their meeting would go good. Why is Bella so tired all the time? Is she pregnant?
Date: 28 Apr 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
It is nice seeing things from Edward's POV. I laughed at him including Anthony and asking him to keep the secret. I can't wait to see if Anthony can.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love reading Edward's POV
Date: 28 Apr 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 33: Office Role Playing
Wow, Bella is getting bold. She is claimingher man. Love that Edward cooked Anthony breakfast.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 32: A Relaxing Night In
I am wondering if Bella is pregnant.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 31: First Night Together
I meant to tell you in the other chapter that you ate doing great on Anthony's talking. Some 2 year olds barely talk and then some talk all the time. Mine would talk your ears off.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 30: New Beginning
Is this just a random break in or is it someone that knows Bella?
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:15 AM Title: Valentine's Day Outtake
Love some Hot sex.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 29: Shower Time with Edward
Loved this chapter
Date: 28 Apr 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for giving us Edward's POV. For some reason I have not been getting my update notices.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh the life of a server and college student. I remember those days of waiting tables people are crazy.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 27: Together At Last
This was sooo HOT!!!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 26: Flashbacks
I wish Bella would have put Victoria in her place.
Date: 27 Apr 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 25: Olympic Part II
Anthony is extremely cute. I am not much of a camper/out door person but this one sounded like fun.
Date: 27 Apr 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue
i enjoyed this story so much...
sometimes i love reading a fic where majority/all of the situations go perfectly
for couple, bella/edward with awesome communication between the couple and
catching the "bad" guys as soon as or before they act...
love the romantic/whipped edward also.
ty for writing.
Date: 27 Apr 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 70: Moving Forward
I have to say the whole confrontation with Tanya then with Victoria was a great disappointment. As kind as Bella is, I reject the notion of her allowing such compassion towards Tanya after everything she has done, I mean how many times must edward tell her it was over...get a closure? Isn't it a closure when edward told her it was over before he started to see Bella? How about all of the emails sent and Edwards response? Or how about when she came to his office again? Then after all of those rejections she pulls that scheme wth Victoria and Bella is like"sure, have a moment with my husband". I don't think I would have been that nice...
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
This is going to be good
Date: 25 Apr 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 26: Flashbacks
Thanks! I love the Twilight nod ☺
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 27: Together At Last
Awesome
Date: 25 Apr 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
I like that you have Anthony working on a learning program. When my grandson was two we got him his own computer. I sat with him for about a week to reemind him he had to put one game asleep before he could put in a different game disc. after about 6 months he told his grandad that he needed a new computer. His grandad asked why, did he break his current one. He said "No it boots up too slow." He was reading by the time he was three and even though he could not speak very clearly, he understood a great deal. Some kids learn really fast if given the chance like Bella is doing. Good job on the boy.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Hey girl who made your banner ? It's fantastic The little boy looks just like Anthony with the hair color and all. It is so great to see how your writing is developing as the weeks pass. Thank you for finding the time to update so often. -Beth
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anthony's Wish
Hey girl who made your banner ? It's fantastic The little boy looks just like Anthony with the hair color and all. It is so great to see how your writing is developing as the weeks pass. Thank you for finding the time to update so often. -Beth
Date: 17 Apr 2017 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love little Amithny!!!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love then aa a family
Date: 24 Mar 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
They are so cute. They need to make up for lost time.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..they are on their way to having a great relationship...I hope
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for the update...I love this story..Anthony is so cute
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loving this story
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, can't believe they did that in the car being so new together.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love Anthony and Emily getting along. I hope Rose is going to like Bella. So excited to get this update. Loving this story.