Date: 11 Jun 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm sorry you're feeling down. Anniversaries can be a double edged sword. I support you and your writing. I read a lot of your stories and they are always inventive and heart felt.
I wonder who is waiting for Edward. How much more can this boy take. I hope he finds strength and comfort somewhere soon.
Date: 11 Jun 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
WHAT????!!!! Please post soon
Date: 11 Jun 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Always with the cliffhangers.
Great update
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved them taking it slow a d exploring each other.
Date: 04 Jun 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for this small glimple of how sex will be between them. Will she make him hotter or will he make her cooler? Maybe some of each? Jacob is hairy all over? Ugh! Just ugh! Thanks for this lovely chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh wow I loved it that was big for Bella and hot damn is was sexy
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2017 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
You love to tease, for shame!
Date: 19 May 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is so sweet. It is hard imagining him 10 feet tall and them shrinking back to normal.
Date: 09 May 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome speech and so glad they're finally going to join with one another. .
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Fun exploration of each other may be what they need right now. Their full connection should take place before the training of the masses begins, though.
Date: 08 May 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ok, I've got a question. Does Jacob know who Bella really is? Does he know that she is the mate to the leader of good? Is that way he beat her down physically and emotionally?
Date: 08 May 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved it I think they should mate their bond is so strong and it's almost as if they both need it
Date: 08 May 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh they better get to it!
Date: 07 May 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
I saw your chapter post, but this one also gave me a message from Stars in my inbox. Some progress...
I do hope they get citrusy...and don't burn or freeze the room down while doing it! Are we in for an epic battle, or will evil go quietly? I think maybe the former. Thanks for the chapter and for your continuing issue for us.
Date: 05 May 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
They are coming into theirselves beautifully.
Date: 03 May 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
They can't have sex until after the mating ceremony, so Edward will not be getting any off his broadcast. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
All desire aside, they need to follow the fae protocol for royalty. No sex until after the mating ceremony.
A little exploration will have to sate their needs in the mean time.
One hundred thousand creatures sounds like a spectacular army. But what does Aro have at his disposal?
Date: 01 May 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad he is making some changes he wants like the clothes. Also like how he is apprecitative about things as well.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
nice update :)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
I loved it everyone is finding their way in this new life now how much longer do they have before Aro comes after them
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
I loved it everyone is finding their way in this new life now how much longer do they have before Aro comes after them
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love reading your stories. I am so glad I found this one :)
Date: 30 Apr 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter! i'm sure he'll do fine with his speech. love their fae bodies and outfits. i'm looking forward to them kicking evil's ass! thanks!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is just used to being in massive pain. That sucks. Carmen, even though she apologized is still pushing too much in my mind. She is just a little too bossy. Maybe it's that she doesn't ask. She just tells or her tone. I'm not sure which.
Date: 25 Apr 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lots of info at once. Cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward should understand a little more on whats going on.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay, that does and doesn't explain things.
Keeping it intriguing and confusing at the same time.
Hahahaha
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2017 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
I loved it what a beautiful letter will this help him update soon please
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward's dad was cryptic as hell.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
I could feel in this letter that Edward's father loved him very much. As always, you have left me wanting more.
Date: 23 Apr 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
you have such a great imagination. i love reading all your stories because of that and the way you use words to craft them. i know you're a reader also and if you want any book recs, just ask. i can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 23 Apr 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
you have such a great imagination. i love reading all your stories because of that and the way you use words to craft them. i know you're a reader also and if you want any book recs, just ask. i can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't say I blame Edward for being overwhelmed.
Date: 18 Apr 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really like this one soon far. All sorts of ways that you can go with it ! Keep up the great work !
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2017 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved it well I with Edward something isn't adding up with Carmen but what and also I am happy Edward is changing things up with letting the women learn how to fight but what wil the letter revile to Edward
Date: 17 Apr 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
.......so cruel for teasing me like that.....
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2017 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Physically bonding with Bella may be the extra push Edward needs to step into his role as leader of the Fae.
Date: 17 Apr 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad Eleazar is there. I'm a little worried about Carmen. I hope she is really on their side and can be trusted.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved it I just caught up I didn't know you had updated
I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Maybe training the tamales of the Fae will be like a surprise attack. If history showsโ the Fae females as having magical powers only, this will work in their favor.
Date: 03 Apr 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
Totally agree with Bella. Jacob isn't going to care about her being a woman
Date: 03 Apr 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fascinating story ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 02 Apr 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad Edward stood up for Bella. She definitely needs to know how to fight. I hope she gets a chance to hurt Jacob.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad they are taking things slow. Can't wait for more.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Go Edward!!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2017 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad E is being patient and kind with her.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Who's magic is protecting the location they are currently occupying?
Is Jacob part of the evil world they prepare to battle against?
Is there any possibility that Carlisle and Esme knew that Edward and Alice were special?
Date: 26 Mar 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story! I actually collect the midieval fairy figurines and when I realized what they were I got excited. I can't wait for the next chapter and their first kiss. I wonder how Jacob is dealing with all of this. Will you have any chapters from his pov?
Date: 23 Mar 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
hey now....no ragging on Orlando Bloom.
Glad Marcus got the divorce through so fast.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Their familial history is a bit confusing but followed well enough to figure out the connections.
Date: 20 Mar 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
Omg... You tease.. Lol but I love it.
Date: 19 Mar 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
This story is so interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Date: 19 Mar 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Jasper must be one good looking elf if he makes Orlando look like a troll, lol!
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
The marcus/carmen thing is cool. Can't wait to see where else you take it.
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love where you are taking it so far
Date: 16 Mar 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
oooh Can't wait till Jake gets whats coming to him. Poor Rose too.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm enjoying this story.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loving all the twist and turns in this story.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok I'm going to try this again. Maybe 3rd time is a charm. I'm putting this so try on alert again. The last tone I did was when something happened to everyone's favorites and they have to reset them.
I am really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
nice story so far. can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2017 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter, keep on writing
Date: 06 Mar 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awwww ๐๐...I loved it!
Date: 28 Feb 2017 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
This story is so different. I really like it. Thank you!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
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[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2017 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well you have caught me, can't wait for the next installment this looks so good.