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Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 27

nice update

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

I know who I hope is sacrificed.....Jacob, Aro, Carlisle, Esme.......  LOL    I wouldn't call it a sacrifice though.   

Rose should also mind her own business.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2018 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 27

I hate Bella feelings embrassed about her feelings for Edward.  I have a feeling that if Jacob threatens Edward that Bella will not freeze. She will come at Jacob full force. I hope she does. I also hope that Edward and Alice get to have their say with their "parents " before they kill them. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 27

Sometimes this story is difficult to read for me, what with all the abuse and parents turning against their children. Just some issues for me. I love the parts about how much Edward and Bella are in love. Thanks and happy new year!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2017 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 27

You are so good at writing

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

Woo hoo for nice wedding night.

dl

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 26

Yay!  I loved their binding ceremony and their first time together.  The more creatures they have on their side for the upcoming battle the better.  Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

nice update

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great  chapter !   Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm glad that they are fully bonded now.  Hopefully it gives them more protection.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 26

and so they are mated. each can only grow stronger with their joining, i think. this is an entertaining story. thanks and i look forward to the big battle. have a wonderful holiday season. enjoy your time off!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 26

So glad that Bella did not freak out and got to make love to her mate. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

Very good,can’t wait for the excitement to begin 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

I loved it!  The ceremony was so beautiful.  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

what a sweet ceremony

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2017 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

great update

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2017 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 25

Perfect wedding

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2017 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

So romantic.....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2017 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

I loved it so beautiful and I like the vows  too 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

How beautiful was their hand fasting ceremony! I loved it. So it was televised? What a magical blending of the fantasy and the reality that is in this story. Thank you, dear!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great as always

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

Please post soon, great chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

Glad Bella and Carmen talked. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

I loved it I can’t wait for the ceremony 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

great update

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

Nice that Carmen apologized.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

I really don't like it when pushy people force others to do what they want instead of what the bride and groom need or choose to do.   sigh........    I wish Bella had blasted a few of them.  LOL

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great as always

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great as always

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad you're resuming this story. Thanks. Hope all is well with you. I need to skim the previous few chapters to refresh my memory. I do remember I liked it but am a bit fuzzy on all the goings on here.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 23

Lol  Typical Emmett.  Glad he is getting some much needed fun time and time for a honeymoon too.

Reviewer: BellaSC23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

Omg. I missed you and this story so much!!!! I’m glad to see you’re back. I look forward to more. I’m loving how it’s turning out so far.

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter. Welcome back

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

Yay, you're  back!  Of course  we missed  you !   Enjoying  this  story; keep  up the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2017 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 23

nice update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hehehehe I loved it but they had a good night but what will they find out about Carlisle 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

Forced separations are archaic and I woule throw a shit fit.   Edward and Bella ARE in charege.  Are they not?   This smells like some more crap that Carmen would try and pull.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

Will they also get married in the human  world?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

I know it is just part of the story, but it just hurts my heart when Carlisle and Esme are not amazing parents. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

I don't know if I trust Carmen. If they should have been bonded right after then why did Carmen not tell them. It seems like she was dragging her feet on telling them a lot of things. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

Glad Edward and Alice won in court. Could they feel any evil vibes from Edward's parents?  Like, were they working for Aro. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

They both need to talk to someone 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Glad Edward found Bella. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

She will feel more confident when they are handfasted.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

nice update

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yay! They're getting married! I'm wondering about Carmen. Is she working for evil or is she just old fashioned and stubborn? I think Bella will naturally get through with her wedding night without too much trouble. Who wouldn't want to mate with Edward? Thanks for everything you so generously give us!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

Glad Carmen is being brought down off her high horse.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh I loved it and Bella was right in what she said the woman was holding them back now how soon will they have their ceremony and will be ready 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it, can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wow he is strong but next time no flying but I am happy they got back at the Cullen's they need to be taken down a peg or twenty 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 21

good

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

great update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.  Powers getting stronger and Carlisle got what was coming to him.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

HA HA Carlisle didnt get away with it.  So glad Bella wants help. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bella needs help she is her own worst foe

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

awesome chappy  since they are fae perhapse handfasting ?

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 21

Evil Carlisle and Esme are creepy as hell.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Really glad they messed up Carlisles car. It's a shame they couldn't do anything to him and Esme. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

Handfasting wedding ceremony.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

Very nice chapter. Edward tried just a bit too much, but he will recover, I'm sure. So glad they won in court. How vindictive of them, and you, for destroying Carlisle and Esme's car. I hope karma doesn't get them for doing that...

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

Wow thank goodness he found her but he is right she needs to talk to someone to help her mind become strong now what is next

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

nice update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

They both need help with dealing with things.  Hope they can get it....or be willing to get it.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

They need to concentrate on getting mentally healthy and boosting and honing their power. Why is Bella so resistant? She needs the therapy. I hope she takes it.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm really starting to dislike pushy Carmen.  Peter and Char were wonderfully nice and seem to know and understand more of what is going on than Carmen, who has been around for a while.  ugh....

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bella has some awesome powers.  I think they both need to talk to Charlotte. Edward still has insecurities too. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19

Somehow I missed this chapter when it updated. I am glad that Edward is ok. Who is the dead person/wolf? 

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

Handfasting is a historical term for "betrothal" or "wedding".

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Glad E was able to find her.  Love Peter in stories.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

nice update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Bella she just broke of that she is quick to blame herself for things she had no power over.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great as always

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella won't heal until she gives up the guilt and blame. Those things can blacken anyone's soul. Thanks for the story. I do enjoy it. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

Holy snap what wil he do will he all for back up

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

uh oh

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

Omg....... 😲😲

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

hmm hope Tanya is really on the up and up

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

nice updates

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

I wonder who the hell is in there...Jacob?  Carlisle and Esme?  hmmm......

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2017 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

You have left us hanging. Does anyone know that he was meeting his landlord?  Could it be Jacob? PLEASE update soon. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Uh oh!!  I'm thinking Jacob is there along with others probably.  Will Bella or Emmett sense that he's in trouble and come to his aid?  I can't wait for the next chapter. 

Sorry that real life has been such a bitch for you right now. I hope things are getting better.  

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