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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

That is funny that she would program that as her song on his phone!! I am glad that they are together and hopefully the three weeks apart won't be that long for them. I wonder what Rose is going to say to her when she finds out what happenend in Forks over Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

That is funny that she would program that as her song on his phone!! I am glad that they are together and hopefully the three weeks apart won't be that long for them. I wonder what Rose is going to say to her when she finds out what happenend in Forks over Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

That is funny that she would program that as her song on his phone!! I am glad that they are together and hopefully the three weeks apart won't be that long for them. I wonder what Rose is going to say to her when she finds out what happenend in Forks over Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

those two are too freaking sweet. :) I loved the Mrs. Robinson thing. thus proving Bella is okay with their age difference. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 7

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Nice spin on being in the spotlight.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start!

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yeah, Edward and Bealla had an awesome weekend! That sex scene with Tanya is going to be interesting!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hilarious!! I loved it!!I can't wait for chap 7!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

That was quite the thanksgiving for them. And that was a great use of the whole Dick in a Box skit! I cracked up at it.

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

omg you are great keep it coming i can not wait till the next chapter i want to see them closer in a realsh and getting it on finally they so need some lemons  inform me of next chapter  sextonhouse@verizon.net

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

awww this is going soo well. and he does get her. at least he has charlie's approval. :) I was surprised by Edward's age but no matter. its going great anyway. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: volvoowner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love this story.  Very well written and entertaining.  

Reviewer: sonyabrady1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well, he's in. Charlie loves him....nothing else matters.....but it won't be that simple...the paps WILL eventually find out and then I am sure all HELL will break loose!!!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

Now that was worth the wait!!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hey I am still waiting for Edward and Bella to "hook up" !!!! :-)

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Please let them get closer :-)

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am excited about this story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: MightyAphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

You continue to write such a wonderful story!  I adore that Edward was close and just couldn't help himself but go and see her.  The whole confessing and passionately kissing in the rain just makes my heart melt and tummy go warm.  I have a feeling that Charlie will be taking the mickey out on Edward for the age gap and look forward to reading that bit of humor.  Edward sounds like a teenager when talking to Charlie.  I love the intimidation there.  Thanks for keeping me entertained!

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, I found it on FFn and I'm now all caught up. I love that, with all the transitions from FFn to TWCS, I'm finding a lot of great stories here that I've somehow missed seeing on FFn.

And I adore your Edward and Bella. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, FFn is so big, you miss a lot unless you know a good rec site.  I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am really glad you liked it!!I will touch it up and give you the link! I'll also work sth out for the rest!! I'll contact you before the weekend! Do you want sth for the next chapter so that I rush it to you first??

Thanks
xx

Marianne



Author's Response:

Uhhh....

That went right over my head.  Just PM me and we'll get it all figured out, LOL.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so sorry for the delay... It's been a hectic week!

So this is actually quite simple! I help with the visual part of the story. For example in chapter 1 you described what Bella wore to go to the interview. I create an outfit with sth close or the exact items you describe to help the readers better imagine her!

I am working with other writes and we have tried 2 ways. My closest friends (I mean those who trust me even though I can be a cold heartless bitch some times(!) ***laughs at herself***) let me create sth from scratch just with a hint like "it's sth casual..." or "I want red in it" etc. Others prefer to describe me sth they imagined and then I try to find sth close to it!!

To help you understand here is what I thought it could look like like Bella's interview outfit...

www.polyvore.com/bella_interview/set?id=17133020

Of course if you decide to accept my offer I would like to say that this is a draft and when it's finished it will look like the others in my profile (not in the clothes but you get my meaning ;) )

Also I'd really like to say that I can change ANYTHING you don't like!

xoxo

Marianne

 



Author's Response:

That's actually exactly what I pictured her wearing when I wrote it. I like it.  :)

Let me know where to direct everyone, and I'll stick a link in there on my A/N each chapter.

Reviewer: coriejadore Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love it!

Poor Edward, once again placed in a tight spot with chief Swan.

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

awesome....freaking great!  but they are keeping their relationship private i don't think that is going to go so well!  especially on him having to go to public places with tanya and then keeping his hands to himself with bella when they go out!  not going to last at all...lol!

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yowzah! Love this story--I'm totally hooked.



Author's Response:

You found it on FFn?  I swear I just saw something similar come through my e-mail this morning... ;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome story!! Can I make the outfits??? Please? ***Alice Cullen pout***



Author's Response:

Outfits?  I've never even thought about that.  I guess...  How does something like this work? LOL

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yay!!!!!!! They told each other how they feel.

Reviewer: gossip_bangkok Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love this fic..

that is all! :)
So well written. Amazing! :)



Author's Response:

I love you...

That is all! :)

Reviewer: Princess Michelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awww I really love it and can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so excited =) woohoo!!

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

Amazing chapter.

It's about time she got her head out of her ass and I think meeting Charlie on the side of the road dripping wet was the only way that makes since for Edward to meet him for the first time.  Makes him seem like a real person not a celebrity.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's all I could see when I first started outlining the fic.  I wanted it to be awkward cause EM's life is a cake walk for him.  Till Bella, that is ;)

Reviewer: devildogbully Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love Charlie! I think Bella made a mistake going private and not public with their relationship. Tanya is going to cause them problems..

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter sweetheart :D:D

Hugs,
Emma



Author's Response:

Thank you love :)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMG what a way to meet the Dad, but I could see it coming.  ;)

Reviewer: IndiaInk68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great Chapter ! I really like how this story is progressing. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

That was great what a way to meet Charlie and to be only 3 years younger than your girlfriends father I would be will to beat that Charlie is not that happy about this.  Yah I am clapping my hands cant wait for more

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

How sweet is it that he drove hours just to come and see her! I am cracking up about how he met Charlie though. That was quite amusing.

Reviewer: anallbr Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

Aww happy to see things progressing between these two! Loved that Charlie caught them, quite hilarious! Great job!

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hehe maybe it should be called the woman who can't be moved?  LOL  She is stubborn.  ;)

I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Haha.  The title doesn't really make sense until the end of the story.  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

this is really good



Author's Response:

Why, thank you!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh boy Renee pregnant!! Wow. And I think that Bella should just give in to the relationship with Edward because we know that she wants to!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

She still has not talked to Edward I am dying here.  How old is Renee??? 



Author's Response:

41 :)

And Bella's being a coward, LOL

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

I thought Edward was in contact with her while he is out of town.



Author's Response:

He is, however, Bella has been avoiding any kind of contact with him outside of e-mail and text messaging because she's trying to distance herself from him.

 

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

keep it coming you are a great writer i really want them hooked up and together n everyway possible why are the girls always the slowest and stupidest



Author's Response:

We over-analyze things, LOL

Thanks sooo much! 

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh man...what is so hard to think about?  i would jump on that band wagon quick for sure...lol!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

And so the dog strikes again!!! I thought that Edward was going to kill him this time. And whoever was on the phone better have had a good reason for calling and intrupting them!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well there are quite a few things that we don't know about Edward isn't there.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am liking this story so far! I really thought that Bella was going to kill that dog the fiirst time and then when it knocked her down again!!! I thought this is it the poor dog isn't going to make it she is going to kill it!

Reviewer: anallbr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

Okay can I just say that I absolutely LOVED the Three's Company reference in this chapter! haha love that show! Anyway, I hope Bella doesn't take too long to decide because 38 or not, I sure wouldn't turn him down!

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh no!  You don't just take off after a moment like that.  Please upate soon.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ugh, I can't imagine having to act like you like somone you don't.  And ruin a chance at somone you do like.  At least he was up front about it with Bella before hand.

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so glad your posting this here.  I have had it on my "to read" list for a while now.  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Really?  Wow, great!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MightyAphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

OOOOOOOOOHHHHHH!!!  SO good!!!  I can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes - but in HW - the characters were closer in age and that Edward had mucho problems when he was younger, trauma, drama, etc.  That Bella was innocent but not as much like your B.

I know I'm going to enjoy this one as well!



Author's Response:

Sounds similar to an Edward I'm developing for my next fic.  Definitely will NOT be reading that so I don't get any outside influence, lol.

Thanks!  I have a lot of fun with this one...

Reviewer: Golden Onion Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hey, I really like your story, it's funny and well-written. Keep going ! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, again!!!

I'm a sucker for UST!!!

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

Really, Really Good!!!  Your Edward reminds me of George Clooney-esque (though not as old) and the young Bella.  He's very aware of the attraction but because of his age and experience, is able to keep his distance and his control a bit better.  When he can't, oh boy!!!

I'm looking forward to your updates!



Author's Response:

Haha, George Clooney from his ER days is exactly how I picture Edward.  Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I thought this would be too similiar to another FF story but it's not.  Movie star and PA but that's where it ends.

I like it!!!!



Author's Response:

Help Wanted????  That's the only one I know out there that's similar at first glance.  Of course, I don't get to read ff too often...

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Looks to be a really good story.

Reviewer: coriejadore Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this. You must go on, please!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

OMG I hate phones sometime so close so close  I like were this is going cant wait.  I love that Rose admitted that she was jeoluse.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

Glad he showed up and showed her some needed atention.  What happens after he leaves

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like what you got going I cant wait till things heat up.  Alice nows all LOL

Reviewer: SnarkySnarky Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

You know, one thing i have been wondering is why you have no reviews for this wonderful story.

keep up the good work, you deserve far more,

Snarky



Author's Response:

*shrugs* Spread the word, LOL

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