Date: 13 Jun 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was looking for a short, quick read to help me get to sleep last night when I found ATLBL&H. Boy did I pick the wrong story! I was consumed from the very beginning. Eyes wide open and wanted more when I finished the last chapter.
The electricity between Edward and Bella was quite tangible. I enjoyed watching them skirt around each other until they finally had to face reality. It was like kissing and falling in love. I felt like a voyeur watching these two tango and tangle.
Bella’s reveal was very shattering. Simply heartrending. And, jeez, when you revealed that Edward was a virgin, I simply sat straight up and said “I believe I need to read that again!” Awesome spin on his “tarnished douche canoe” character.
I enjoyed reading ATLBL&H sooo very much. Sorry I didn’t review until today. And yes, I did get to sleep with some really nice thoughts of an awesome Edward.
Thank you for writing for our fandom. You are a devoted author that continues to give of yourself to your fans and our fandom. I appreciate you very much.
Elaine – Sparkle Elaine Damnu Phillips on FB
Date: 03 Jan 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it that was beautiful and sweet thank you
Date: 02 Jan 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love love love this chapter and story. Thank you for sharing with us. You did an awesome job.
Date: 01 Jan 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 31 Dec 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
such a great read
Date: 31 Dec 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
So glad Phil/James/ Asshole get what he deserved. Glad Bella and Renee are both getting help.
Date: 31 Dec 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love love love this chapter
Date: 31 Dec 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 30 Dec 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved this ending. It couldn't have been any better.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Amazing story! Thanks!
Date: 29 Dec 2016 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I loved it my goodness so much happened and I am so very happy for Bella now what will be next for them
Date: 29 Dec 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
This, my darling, is the start of a beautiful friendship.. well we know they will have more than that and hopefully they can heal each other along the way.
Date: 29 Dec 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome story!
Date: 28 Dec 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
If I were Bella, I'd despise Renee for the rest of my life. There would be no forgiving her for chosing Phil/James over me. Edward and his family couldn't be anymore prefect and supporting of Bella.
Sherry
Date: 27 Dec 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow so much happened in this chapter that I hardly know what to say. I'm not sure I could forgive Renee as easily as Bella did, but am glad she did. Phil/James got what he deserved! What about Jacob? Will he get what he deserves too? The Christmas scenes at Elizabeth's house were nice. I love the present Edward got Bella. I'm sure there's more I didn't comment on, but I loved it all. Thanks!
Date: 27 Dec 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is going to be a great read
Date: 27 Dec 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would love to read more of this great story!!
Date: 26 Dec 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes you should continue. Bella moved forward and made something of herself rather than wollow in her dispair.
Date: 26 Dec 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this!!! :)
Date: 26 Dec 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Would be an interesting story in growth. Trust and love. Lies that skanya tell and get fired.
Date: 26 Dec 2016 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I lliked it very much.
Sherry
Date: 25 Dec 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good chapter. More please.
Date: 25 Dec 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
good. hope there will be more
Date: 25 Dec 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please, please! Please continue .
Date: 25 Dec 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope you do continental this story. I love it so far.
Date: 25 Dec 2016 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whole lots of love for this story!
Date: 25 Dec 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story and am so glad you're going to give these two the lemons they deserve. Was it for a contest? Thanks and happy holidays!
Date: 24 Dec 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue. Merry Christmas!
Date: 24 Dec 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh!! Yes continue!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) loved this. I hope there will be more
Author's Response:
I'm working on chapter two. There will be a total of three chapters, posted as soon as I finish them!