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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 35

Omg! Love your story can't wait to read next chapter .

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 35

Great chapter! I was waiting for Carmen to come back into it. Bella’s instinct s we’re right.  What a fluffy, yikes. Poor Edward. He doesn’t deserve this, and I wish Anthony would stop touching her!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow!!! does it ever end.. I remember how Carmen was acting earlier on did kmow she was working with Liam...I hope those boys save her and don't get hurt in the ambush, unless they already know...well done..until you post again

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 35

This has to be the stupidest Bella ever. She will never learn. She does one dumb thing after another.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2019 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 35

WHAT.????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 35

oh no.. and how low until the next update?? So much information I have to reread..

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 35

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jazz09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 35

What is with everyone always trying to force things with bella,its the reason why she so mess up. You would think edward would have her follow even after what  Michael said.  

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 35

Good chapter. Twisty.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2019 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMG !  Love your story can't wait to read next chapter,and more.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2019 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 34

Soooo good! Love you,update soon please and THANK YOU!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 34

Edward needs to chill and Bella needs to be smart. I know that is hard for her, but she needs to try.

Reviewer: Graceroseie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter!! Please update soon!! So enthralled in the story. Wonderful work 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2019 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 34

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2019 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 34

Wowzer! Cant wait to read more. So thrilling a journey.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2019 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMG!!  I can't for the next update..Thank you for the update ..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2019 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh this story is so good . plz let them have a HEA and for Edward not to kill her or Anthony.   Hope you had a wonderful holiday..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2019 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 34

Was she playing Michael or Edward??

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2019 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2018 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

I'm glad Bella came to her senses. She is so frustrating. 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 33

Hurry up you need to finish this story 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella is such a bitch. She has more evil in her than Edward.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2018 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

Anthony is like a cat with his 9 lives

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2018 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 33

Good chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 33

YAY a new chapter.  Keep them coming please.

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 33

Good chapter.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 32

Please do not let edward walk in & see that kiss. E& b are finally making headway!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 31

Anthony always causing trouble! I start to think he might be likable & then realize NOOOPE!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 32

Bella is so stupid. Can she not learn? Why could she not just stay with Edward? She says she loves him. She just figured it out, then she does turns stupid again and lets Anothony kiss her. She will get everyone killed because she is a selfish spoiled brat.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

Edward is so right. Bella is the one making her life so horrible. If she is kidnapped or killed it is all her fault. She is one stupid little girl.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

I really hate Bella in this story. She is such a brat. I really can't see why Edward would even like her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2018 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

God, I hate "Marie" right now. She knows Edward loves her. He did what he had to do to fix Anothony's mistake and be able to be with her. 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 32

I can’t wait for the next chapter. HURRY UP 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 32

That girl just keeps making baaaaad choices. One step forward and then a leap of a clifff. Ahhhh. But that’s what makes it so good. ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

Good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 32

Anthony is dreaming of kate

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 32

Oh wow. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 31

So good

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow.  Hurry

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2018 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2018 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

It's Carmen. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2018 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh my..what will happen next..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2018 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

Good chapter.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 31

This is making me mad. Why won't she tell him the truth? They would know who is after their family if she told the truth

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

I wish she would forgive Edward already

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 30

She needs to tell him all about michael & be done with it.  That guy is trouble!! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

Love your story can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 30

Good chapter.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

Anthony is a hot mess..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh yes!!! Your back bless you for the chapter. I've missed your brilliant work. I will always keep Crowned on my favorites. Hope the muses inspire you going forward with your wonderful stories. Ajfflady

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2018 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update. Well done!!!! ! !Anthony is a hot mess..I wonder will Carlisle  pull through....Edward is going to lose it when he wakes up and Bella is gone...until  you post again 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

Anthony loves to fuck with Bella he is like a kid on the play ground. I'm not gonna lie I think I like Anthony better because he is upfront and truthful about himself.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

Anthony loves to fuck with Bella he is like a kid on the play ground. I'm not gonna lie I think I like Anthony better because he is upfront and truthful about himself.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad for the update. When you update next I will have confidence you are going to finish it

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 29

Anthony must be wanting a beat down! Thanks for this update!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

good

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

Good chapter.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 28

Please update

Reviewer: Ntine3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

I love this series of stories.  What an ending with Carlisle being killed.  I didn't have much sympathy for him but do feel sorry for Esme and the boys even though they fought.  

Reviewer: mickeymackey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2018 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

Love the story. Do you plan on continuing it?

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Update soon please.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 28

Carlisle deserved getting shog. He is pure evil. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

Shape up buttercup.  Bella is just so stupid.  I hope she wakes up and realizes what is going on before she is dead.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

This Bella is so stupid. She causes a lot of her own issues. She needs to stop being so cruel to Edward. 

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow edward was so violent :( i would be afraid to move

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

SO GOOD!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

I think him being dead is better than edward & bella having sex.  Now my only hope is that anthony left the property & did his own drive by and shot his father. :)  when they figure out this is all carmen.  She is going to be in a world of pain!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

Please someone kill carlisle! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26

FREAKING FIIINNNALLLY!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 25

Bad anthony is coming out.  What did edward do to her in that room?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

I knew janina was going to be dead! She had messed with bella for the last time. Anthony wanted her to do it to. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

I can't beleive i like anthony now.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

I am so shocked that the three of them are somewhat getting along! I loved the shooting scene!

Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

FINALLY!! Carlisle is Dead, I hope. Man, what a cruel man he was to his "family". Uhgg, hopefully now Edward and Anthony can stop with the mind games. Although Anthony has it built into his personality. I am so glad I came back to this story!! Keep up the great writing! Can't wait for the next chapters!! Thank you

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

Remember the phone call bella!!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hope anthony saves her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

It just hit me maybe she ends up with both of them?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh my goodness!!  I really can't decide which brother she should be with.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

Looks like bella is going back into hiding!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

I hope carlisle is really dead...I'm doing the dance *the wicked witch is finally dead". I get hy edward is lying to bella, but it's gonna hurt worse when the truth comes out, it's just delaying the pain.....I think Id I was bella I wouldn't truly believe them and be visiting the grave...but then again ignorance is bliss.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow. can't figure out if this was Edward's deal or someone else.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 28

Well he didnt have to kill him.  I think he needs to tell Bella the truth.  Cant say I am sorry that Carlisle is dead he was an ass hole

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more ­č’Ö 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

Love your story can't wait to read more and more!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28

At least Edward didn't have to kill Carlisle himself. I'm not sure if he should have lied to Bella though.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow! Each twist and turn more thrilling than the next one.

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 28

OMG!!!  That bastard is dead!!!!!  God I love this fic!!!

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