Date: 04 Mar 2019 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow!!! does it ever end.. I remember how Carmen was acting earlier on did kmow she was working with Liam...I hope those boys save her and don't get hurt in the ambush, unless they already know...well done..until you post again
Date: 28 Sep 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is so stupid. Can she not learn? Why could she not just stay with Edward? She says she loves him. She just figured it out, then she does turns stupid again and lets Anothony kiss her. She will get everyone killed because she is a selfish spoiled brat.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
I think him being dead is better than edward & bella having sex. Now my only hope is that anthony left the property & did his own drive by and shot his father. :) when they figure out this is all carmen. She is going to be in a world of pain!!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
FINALLY!! Carlisle is Dead, I hope. Man, what a cruel man he was to his "family". Uhgg, hopefully now Edward and Anthony can stop with the mind games. Although Anthony has it built into his personality. I am so glad I came back to this story!! Keep up the great writing! Can't wait for the next chapters!! Thank you
Date: 30 Jun 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope carlisle is really dead...I'm doing the dance *the wicked witch is finally dead". I get hy edward is lying to bella, but it's gonna hurt worse when the truth comes out, it's just delaying the pain.....I think Id I was bella I wouldn't truly believe them and be visiting the grave...but then again ignorance is bliss.