Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, thanks. Totally different look too.
Author's Response:
I'm glad it worked!
Date: 30 Jan 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can not read your while response. There is a picture/ad that covers most of it. It happens on all responses.
Author's Response:
I have the same problem. If you look to the upper left, click on 'fruity' and use the drop down to choose 'vision dark'.
Date: 16 Jan 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well that sucks!!! Kisses and hearts then!!!
Author's Response:
That's good to know! I've tried hearts and they never show, so disappointing.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
yeah.......she was kind of rude. hopefully she does not stay that way.....
Date: 05 Jan 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
yeah.......she was kind of rude. hopefully she does not stay that way.....
Author's Response:
Yeah, she was. She takes some time to get better.
Date: 11 Nov 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good beginning, hot sex. I'm liking this...
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like that you had both POVs in onew chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 27 Sep 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy cow! This is AMAAAZING!
Author's Response: :) I'm really glad you like it!
Date: 26 Sep 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really want him to at least have some fun and remember go ahead Bella show him that he's good all the way
Author's Response: He'll definitely remember this one!
Date: 12 Sep 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well Dayum...that was a hawt end to the chapter
Date: 07 Sep 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG that was hot. His now ex is a piece of shit.
Author's Response: I think you win best review! Thank you!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
So where is her piercing? Is it on her back or what cause I'm not entirely understanding where it's located. But great first chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: If I could post a pic for you, I would! It's at the base of the tailbone, a subdermal piercing. Normally studs, but I've seen them dangle just like a navel piercing. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVED IT :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW! Can't wait until Monday!
Author's Response: Thank you, me either!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella's a slut huh! Nasty girl (he he he) that's just sad when a girls fuck and doesn't bother to at the very least get a name. hmmmmm.... well at least the sex was hot. but not liking the fact that she's been had before Edward.....but that's just me. Looking forward to more. READ YOU SOON 💖
Author's Response: Yeah, she's very open to encounters. Don't worry, Edward's going to be her last.
Date: 05 Sep 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hot hope there's a lot of dirty talk
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05 Sep 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Luna likey.... Hot first chapter !!! Can't wait to travel the adventure!
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it
Author's Response: Why, thank you!